Hi, thanks for the 'Like' as I got an award for it - lol. Anyway, I wanted to give you some feedback.
I found the game is 100% better with the voice-over (self-voicing enabled). As the game is a text-based game with images you should at the start of it encouraging the user to use the voice reader for a better experience. Also, you should add in the MC rename mod as a default feature of the game.
At the start of the game, you should give the player the option to choose the default name in the game or pick something they like and at the same time suggest that the player use the self-voice built-in function (mention that it can be activated with the V keyboard key). Then you should also add that this is a text-based game visual novel and is an experience and not a quick fap game.
So that people get a heads up (so they don't waste their time if they are in it for a quick fap) and don't come to the forums to complain that the game isn't what they wanted. In a way, I am not too sure if you should do that as they may disregard the game and missout on an amazing journey into corrupting women.
And finally, this game needs a galley for all those amazing scenes that you unlock through your actions.
PS: If you could find a way to hide the warning that you are using the self-voice feature that would be great as I like to read along with it but I think I am going to have to hide my view to get rid of that annoying message as it brakes the immersion of the game for me.