ProofreadingRUS

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Feed him?
I hope you're no paying him.
We as proofreaders do the job for free.
Because we want to play the game without pausing all the time trying to translate the word or the whole sentence.
Great game in the art department, but the script needs a ton of work.
I can't get through it. I just click it as fast as I can whenever it's too annoying to read.
some milfs could use a makeover too. They are not pretty to look at.
 

Mormont

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A younger Claire that is. But I agree with what others have said about the dialogue I think if you get past that hurdle it will be a pretty decent game.
 

dacris69

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After some minutes got tired of the translation so just skipped through the pics; refreshing to see new faces, the mother looks very good same as that black woman from the store, while other are just horrendous like Rose or the teacher :LOL:
 

PandaLoverGames

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I don't like piercing. I hope that's optional.
The fact that she's pretty and the best looking girl in the game is the reason people are comparing her with someone else. I wish all the characters looked like that.
CowGirl.jpg
I'm not hinting at anything, but - patreons will be able to vote in the development of the plot branches and characters
 
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ProofreadingRUS

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Just finished the game. I thought it would be longer.
That was kinda fast. One of the things I don't like is that he daydreams a lot.
I can't tell if it's really happening or not.
There was too little scenes of Cleare. she should get more scenes.
Great artwork and animation and nice curves.
I just wish I could understand what they were saying.
 
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Patreons votes can become self-fulfilling at the expense of the game's vision. It is a trap. A core group of patreons vote "x", the game attracts more players who like "x" and then the vote becomes even more lop-sided until the dev has lost control and is catering solely to "x".

Heh--that was a lot of "x"
 

PandaLoverGames

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Patreons votes can become self-fulfilling at the expense of the game's vision. It is a trap. A core group of patreons vote "x", the game attracts more players who like "x" and then the vote becomes even more lop-sided until the dev has lost control and is catering solely to "x".

Heh--that was a lot of "x"
Yes, but the vote will be solely from my ideas. What line are we working on in this update? Claire, Rose, Mama or other characters to be revealed soon.
These are recommendations. And it's up to me to decide where this boat will sail. But patrions have a voice, they can tell where they are going
 

PandaLoverGames

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sidney trap? that would be nice
In our turbulent times, anything can be Сидни.jpg

Just finished the game. I thought it would be longer.
That was kinda fast. One of the things I don't like is that he daydreams a lot.
I can't tell if it's really happening or not.
There was too little scenes of Cleare. she should get more scenes.
Great artwork and animation and nice curves.
I just wish I could understand what they were saying.
Where are you looking, senpai?!м SchoolGir2l.jpg
 
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