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We review it and add a patchThere is literary no way to click on that fucking stupid camera it is very frustrating
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hello CrisDark31
nice artwork and good looking milfs for sure - a good start. I personally would like the project better if you worked with animation as well, but that's just my opinion.
Unfortunately, there is also a lot to criticize about your story. the attempt to observe the patreon rules without using an extra incest patch makes the connections between who is related to whom and how somewhat incomprehensible. a short introduction/explanation could certainly help here.
the english translation is unfortunately very bad - the completely wrong use of he/she/it (sasha=female=she/her - the bra is it, not he) is very obvious even for someone who does not speak english as a mother tongue.
if someone starts with the "room" option and clicks on the door, it's "game over". on the pinboard, some albums/pictures don't have an english translation.
Personally, the photo minigame bothered me more than it impressed me and seems unnecessary to me.
Your story is quite interesting and has a lot of potential. I'm curious what you will develop from it and wish you all the best.
nice artwork and good looking milfs for sure - a good start. I personally would like the project better if you worked with animation as well, but that's just my opinion.
Unfortunately, there is also a lot to criticize about your story. the attempt to observe the patreon rules without using an extra incest patch makes the connections between who is related to whom and how somewhat incomprehensible. a short introduction/explanation could certainly help here.
the english translation is unfortunately very bad - the completely wrong use of he/she/it (sasha=female=she/her - the bra is it, not he) is very obvious even for someone who does not speak english as a mother tongue.
if someone starts with the "room" option and clicks on the door, it's "game over". on the pinboard, some albums/pictures don't have an english translation.
Personally, the photo minigame bothered me more than it impressed me and seems unnecessary to me.
Your story is quite interesting and has a lot of potential. I'm curious what you will develop from it and wish you all the best.
It's the driving student of the MC. Her husband cheats on her with a secretary and an intern, so she takes revenge through fucking with the MC. But she also tells the MC, that she continues to fuck her husband. So the infos after the first release about that nothing would go on between the LIs and their partners are already false.
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Thank you we will work on that to solve it, and we work to achieve a better translation I am terrible with English so I appreciate the comments.
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If someone of the people who plays, knows a translator I would like if they could recommend it to me I am frustrated by not being able to correctly convey the story I am trying to tell. At the moment I think that by correcting the translation I think that can help me. Thank you very much for your comments.
Hi everyone!
The technical team (me) is taking note of your comments. The camera mini-game will receive different difficulty levels and will be modified so that its movement is not so predictable. Plus other small changes like the door room. There will be more news soon, keep sending feedback.
Thanks to all of you!
The technical team (me) is taking note of your comments. The camera mini-game will receive different difficulty levels and will be modified so that its movement is not so predictable. Plus other small changes like the door room. There will be more news soon, keep sending feedback.
Thanks to all of you!
was going to try this but reading the coments seems there is a focus on lesbian so likely not something im interested in good luck to the dev
The art is great and women with glasses is always a plus. On the bad side as others have mentioned pronoun use in the translation is rough but I've seen worse. The camera minigame, like all unskippable minigames should be drug out back and put out of our misery.
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By chance you will have the file that you can resend it to me by mistake when updating delete the link
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Seems to be a kinetic novel with QTE.... 2 choices in game so far and not concerning any LI...
So far you pretty much have every girl jumping you almost instantly, so why corruption or blackmail are even needed?
The moving camera is just annoying tbh, yeah you can click it but why? There's better options for gallery shots...
At the moment it's already a mildly annoying feature, but getting a hundred shots like that for a completed game is just bleh... It's just distracting too much imho.
You might give players the option to just take a photo or not, possibly even for story purposes as well.
So far you pretty much have every girl jumping you almost instantly, so why corruption or blackmail are even needed?
The moving camera is just annoying tbh, yeah you can click it but why? There's better options for gallery shots...
At the moment it's already a mildly annoying feature, but getting a hundred shots like that for a completed game is just bleh... It's just distracting too much imho.
You might give players the option to just take a photo or not, possibly even for story purposes as well.
I entered the room area after both chapters but it wasn't in English like it is supposed to be. I'm not sure if that is a bug or it isn't translated yet but could it be translated soon so I can learn the backstory?
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good, your game looks interesting, what categories do you have planned (personally I would like anal xD)?
Renders are really nice. Spelling and grammar are really rough but not to the point that you're unable to understand what they're talking about. Only thing I'm a bit confused about is that there's no introduction to the characters and who/what they are to the MC. Also I think there should've been a little introduction to what happened with the MC before the game started. (Gone for 5 years, but why?) Anyways I'm gonna keep following the game as I still quite liked it.