- Jun 21, 2017
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Great NTR game though not really the genre I like but renders/animations are great.
I read the novel and didn't notice the sister/gf etc are they additional characters?.
Novel questions.
Still the story seems promising if you guys will continue adapt the novel and expand it.
I read the novel and didn't notice the sister/gf etc are they additional characters?.
Novel questions.
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Still the story seems promising if you guys will continue adapt the novel and expand it.
- Jun 25, 2017
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Short answer: Yes.
Slightly longer answer: The Literotica story that JohnCBB posted serves as a conceptual basis for this Kinetic Novel, but we're not slavishly following it. So, you could probably say "Based on a story by...", just the way that many Hollywood productions are "based on" certain novels, but take (sometimes considerable) liberties with them. JohnCBB and I are collaborating on the script. I'll have to confess that (so far) the Melanie and Becky arcs are primarily mine, while the Melissa arc is primarily his. We're trying to weave the two together, of course. But don't assume that just because the Literotica piece goes in a particular direction that that means this will...
And glad that you like the imagery!!
- Jun 25, 2017
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OK, JohnCBB and I will take that as a serious compliment...That always happens with popular games!
Great stuff. Just gone through chapter 5 & thought it was very entertainlng. Melissa makes a lovely MILF. Parker seems like a believable character, (& so does Carl), & the police are truly evil villains. Just one thing tho', if Melissa was in my power I would tell her to stop wearing sensible teacher shoes on her visits to me & get something stylish.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
- May 11, 2017
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I'm typically not much of a fan of Kinetic Novels as I prefer to have various choices on what to do. That being said this is probably the best Kinetic Novel on here. The renders are nice, the story is great, characters believable and realistic. Perhaps at some point, it will move into a multiple endings sort of deal, one end where the corrupt cops win, one where the family wins. Good job developers, keep up the good work.
Thanks for answering. I just didn't like that particular scenario hope you guys could tweak the story leading to that if you can't just scrap that scene.
Will the story of the game go further than the novel in the Melissa story?
Love the story so far and hope you could get more patreon since it has great renders and decent story for NTR can't wait for the next update.
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- Jul 13, 2018
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Yes, I've been eagerly waiting for this one. I can't wait to see the mom get even further depraved by the officers.
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- Jan 27, 2017
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maybe you read the quoted post again.
and no, i can't change the op post to remove the chapter 4 from the android link.
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This kinetic novel would probably be better if the cop's initial encounter wasn't so laughably unbelievable. How the flying F*** would it be even remotely believable that doing such a thing to a regular citizen(in public), especially if she's such an upstanding citizen as we are led to believe , would not have repercussions for those dim-witted cops? Do we have to expect that the citizens of this town live in such fear of a couple of cops that would be sacked (or jailed) in a heartbeat for their less than savory methods? Reporters would have a field day with that scoop.
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Well looking as to cops can do more and more i would not be surpriced then sometime in the future something like this would happen in RL. They can spy, tab our phones etc.. then can even shoot us dead in broad daylight or even in our homes the only thing they say they thought we grabbed a gun and the court will dismiss them..
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The girls look hot, but the main character is just so cringey and unlikeable that the fun died already during the prologue. The MCs attitude, his haircut, his awful looking shirts... he looks like one of these sweaty Russian dudes from some random Russian porn video from the early 2000s. At times, he seems like he's somewhat mentally retarded without being either funny or entertaining. Just mean-spirited, vile and boring.
Render quality is good and I hope the dev will someday make a game that's enjoyable and not just having to play some angry stupid kid while his mom gets fucked by the police over and over. I didn't enjoy it so far.
Render quality is good and I hope the dev will someday make a game that's enjoyable and not just having to play some angry stupid kid while his mom gets fucked by the police over and over. I didn't enjoy it so far.
