It's rather creative and exotic when it comes to corruption.It's worth a try compared to other NTR games.The old police guys are very specific regarding their fetish which is more than just dicking a girl.
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ok i will give it a shot
Also the OP mentions its a kinetic novel with no choices but reading a few post above there seems to be a path A and B.
Is the choice clear enough or is the path decided on some hidden and not so obvious choices?
I feel the same way, is kinda underwelming, is not bad, is just that it feels like it killed the momentum because to be honest, the appeal of ntr at least on my opinion is the corruption of character from loyal to sex toy and from vows holder to the breaker of vows, that would be for me a characte arc. Meaby would work out if while packer was at the ALC with the blone girl (did't even bother with her name since it she is already at the end of her arc) becky's blackmail continues and is shown to us?for example she could be ask to send pictures in different lingerie or to kiss Carl and take a picture doing that etc, vanilla stuff that builds up momentum. Just in case, I am not bashing the game, is just constructive critism, meaby there is a reason why the story is going this way.
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Eu já joguei 11b, o que dizer ... Como eu estava ligado do 10B, eu estava surpreendentemente configurado do 11B! Se você esperava por outro conteúdo da Becky, esqueça, porque a impulsividade do MC matou todo o fluxo legal da história! Ele agiu totalmente idiota, mesmo sabendo o que aconteceu com ele e com o seu fim nos 10 capítulos anteriores! Quem diabos se preocupa com Emily, sem mencionar que tudo com ela parece tão apressado. E uma boa dica para dev: Onde não há namorada, não há NTR! Se MC não se preocupa mais com Becky, o que acontece com ela, e toda vez que diz que ela é sua EXgirlfriend, não há mais conteúdo NTR lá, não importa o que ela faça! [/ ISPOILER]
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Olá amigo, não estou querendo arrumar confusão só ligando um ponto de vista para vc e os outros apreciadores do tópico que acompanhamos, o NTR em si está ocorrendo até porque o MC já está se sentindo traído, oque ocorre é que nesta atualização não foi incluído , vimos apenas literalmente o ponto de vista de Parker porém se vc prestar atenção nas reações do PM nos diálogos no finalzinho dá um sentido que está ocorrendo muito mais coisas do que foi apresentado em relação a Becky, pode ser que ela estava finalmente até se entregando ao outro PM enquanto o MC e o PM mais velho estão conversando;
OBS: só lembrando esse e meu ponto de vista então me desculpem se eu estiver errado até porque não sou fluente em inglês, e meus agradecimentos ao desenvolvedor e sei que pô não ser aínda um aponhador mais espero ansiosamente que no próximo capítulo tenha essas cenas caso eu esteja realmente certo. [/ ISPOILER]
Eu já joguei 11b, o que dizer ... Como eu estava ligado do 10B, eu estava surpreendentemente configurado do 11B! Se você esperava por outro conteúdo da Becky, esqueça, porque a impulsividade do MC matou todo o fluxo legal da história! Ele agiu totalmente idiota, mesmo sabendo o que aconteceu com ele e com o seu fim nos 10 capítulos anteriores! Quem diabos se preocupa com Emily, sem mencionar que tudo com ela parece tão apressado. E uma boa dica para dev: Onde não há namorada, não há NTR! Se MC não se preocupa mais com Becky, o que acontece com ela, e toda vez que diz que ela é sua EXgirlfriend, não há mais conteúdo NTR lá, não importa o que ela faça! [/ ISPOILER]
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Olá amigo, não estou querendo arrumar confusão só ligando um ponto de vista para vc e os outros apreciadores do tópico que acompanhamos, o NTR em si está ocorrendo até porque o MC já está se sentindo traído, oque ocorre é que nesta atualização não foi incluído , vimos apenas literalmente o ponto de vista de Parker porém se vc prestar atenção nas reações do PM nos diálogos no finalzinho dá um sentido que está ocorrendo muito mais coisas do que foi apresentado em relação a Becky, pode ser que ela estava finalmente até se entregando ao outro PM enquanto o MC e o PM mais velho estão conversando;
OBS: só lembrando esse e meu ponto de vista então me desculpem se eu estiver errado até porque não sou fluente em inglês, e meus agradecimentos ao desenvolvedor e sei que pô não ser aínda um aponhador mais espero ansiosamente que no próximo capítulo tenha essas cenas caso eu esteja realmente certo. [/ ISPOILER]
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what i don't get is what is the point of having a branched path if on 11b he would have been doing the same thing that he rejected to do on 9? in my opinion it seems like parker is circling back to chapter 9 but now is choosing to throw everyone under the bus. Again, im not saying is bad, but it could be improved unless there a reason down the way.
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Everything was believable to a degree so far, but Parker's reaction to the pictures doesn't really make sense. He has all the information at this point about what the cops are doing and what his mom is going through, the first assumption should obviously be that the sender is the cops and that they are making his GF do stuff.
Not really complaining since it seems like a necessary event to steer the story into the direction the dev wants for this route. I wonder if there was another way to create this rift that is more believable though.
Not really complaining since it seems like a necessary event to steer the story into the direction the dev wants for this route. I wonder if there was another way to create this rift that is more believable though.
Any reason why only path B got an update. I haven't been on this thread in a while and wondered if there was a specific reason or if I am gonna get some upsetting news that path A is discontinued or something.
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Not saying it would go down in the middle of the street with lots of people watching, but there have always been corrupt cops who take advantage - especially in small town USA. In the 60's, most kids growing up in small towns were taught never to question authority - and if something did happen, it was swept under the rug because no one wanted to be part of a scandal.
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Love this game, hope they're making some money with it. No interactivity but well made. Characters don't look like clones we've seen elsewhere. Very nice.
Well, meaby one or two more situations corrupting becky could have been developed and then show Parker the pics so that way parker would be under the assumption that this is as far as Becky has gone. I could go as far as say you could even extend it more if the cops blurr the background and mossaic her face and he enters in denial which would lead to a longer game. Meaby we can have an 11C branch?
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Fine game and I love the Becky corruption stuff but this update was kind of useless. Could have just worked for a bit longer, added more and had that as the update. This takes about 5 mins from where the last left off and that's with reading everything, etc. Maybe 10 min and it's not like it updates every couple weeks.
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I can understand that not everyone likes the same thing, but then can't you at least express constructive criticism in your comment, instead of writing something dumb like that? Reads like a comment that tries to provoke people who like the game to jump on your comment, that's total unnecessary. This story is not for everyone, you can read this on the front page. The best thing to do is, to look for another game that you like better and let the developer work in peace, it's his project after all.All that time between updates and still
And the thing with the lack of support. There enough people who like the game and not all good games here get the best possible financial support, unlike others who do not deserve this support, for example because their developers only milk the supporters and brings excuses over excuses and delays and no or hardly any updates and if so then with little content. Rich does his job very well and as I know him he will continue to do it.
i've seen kinetic novel, but there is some of it that has multiple endings. is this game will have it?
also, is this game NTR focused game? i don't ask if we can avoid NTR but the plot make me curious
also, is this game NTR focused game? i don't ask if we can avoid NTR but the plot make me curious
The game looks amazing at the screenshot and all woman are beautiful. Make me want to play the game eventhough there are bad comment in the thread. I think DEV doin great job LOL
Mom should have lawyered up AND told her husband ASAP. Then the lawyer hires a PI to go through old arrests and files to find out if the cops have done this before. Gets mom and son to wire up, then they go to Internal Affairs and the DA. Cops get fired and sued and go to jail for a while.
Your comment is unconstructive, callous and makes no sense, base on what you say the success of the game depends on how much monetary compensation it has. I would rather defer from that train of though and say that the lack of monetary support put an spotlight on the love he has for the craft. As far as I have seen so far he is someone that is putting out of his time for the love of the thing he is doing and answering questions on different threats regarding daz studio to help other creators. Im not saying he do not deserve compensation for it, far from it, however he is clearly not trying to milk people and at least as far as I have seen, he is attempting to make a good game within his own limitations.All that time between updates and still
it will be a clear choice at chapter 10.
Dev seems to have thought about the plot and character arc, so it won't be the typical NTR story.