Great game so far. Few things, not sure if they've been mentioned before. You coded the waitress (Tammy) in the mountainside restaurant and Wayne under the same initial in the RPY code so she comes up marked as Wayne. Secondly, I'm not sure it's necessary to name Alice something else, you could just have her being named Alice. I get the want, but her "name" comes up as Alice in the scripted conversation at one point instead of whatever you named her. Just didn't seem a needed name. I get the family, that's fine. But it's not like other people you're hinting at being able to go after are nameable (Carly, Scarlet), so I'm not sure she needs to be.