VN Ren'Py Family Vacation [Ch.07 v0.7.8] [MCK]

[MisterPervy]

Patreon page under review... Smells like another bonk by the Patreon hammer...

 

[jpinks]

Just curious is there Trans in this game or was the Tag just added by accident?

 

[Marcus_S]

Just curious is there Trans in this game or was the Tag just added by accident?

Yes, there is one trans character at the end of chapter 6. If you allow Philipp to party, then switch to Philipp, you can see the trans content.

 

[Vix53551]

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This is the sisters kissing, yeah? Is it in the game yet?

 

[Marcus_S]

This is the sisters kissing, yeah? Is it in the game yet?

No. And no.

 

[Stringy Bob]

Patreon page under review... Smells like another bonk by the Patreon hammer...

Looks banhammered, good news, he does have a Subscribestar,

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bad news is he says over at the Itch page hes revising the game, including AI English translation? The English wasnt that bad and IMO the AI's tend to spit out Engrish only moderately better that ye old Yahoo! translate & google translate

 

[graflex12]

Don't sweat it. His latest substar update says he found a native English speaker to help with the translations.

 

[rafa30]

Need a gallery mod.

 

[Bertlogins]

Need an update

 

[RandyTyr]

Don't sweat it. His latest substar update says he found a native English speaker to help with the translations.

I actually enjoyed the weird English.

 

[graflex12]

Yeah, it was certainly not as bad as several other games on here, and had a charm to it.

 

[Ptroll]

Gay content is missing from this family (MC bi)! Incest, cheating, swiging, bestiality... why not gay?

 

[MadfireMonkey]

It's crazy you went back to rework the old chapters and took out sex scenes

 

[fortuna95]

Dear subscribers,
I'm happy to announce that my work on chapter 7 is in total progress.

The new chapter will take us on the journey, as the family embarks from their home to the vacation place. Get ready for some exciting, surprising scenes during the journey, as well as their vacation home.
I hope I'll be able to finish the update in Mai.
Thank you for your patience and support. Do not miss it!

from April:

Dear subscribers,
I' am almost finished revising the game up to chapter 06.
The changes include:

• Revised all English texts with an AI grammar checker
• Set all conversation text in white with a black border for better readability
• Chapter 3: Edited the Marina storyline. She won't hit on the MC - you must earn her trust.
• Chapter 5: I rewrote the Mrs. Osterhagen storyline, and removed the early sex scenes. If you choose this path, you can connect to her in the game's later chapters.

yeah, he removed sex scenes.

 

[Marcus_S]

from April:

yeah, he removed sex scenes.

Removed, to add them later. Which means he moved the scenes. They'll be there, but later. I don't see why this is a problem. If it doesn't fit the story or the pacing, then do it.

 

[Peri3481]

Most pressingly, is there a mod to make the text legible?

 

[Marcus_S]

Most pressingly, is there a mod to make the text legible?

What do you mean by that? Different font? Or the typos?

 

[Peri3481]

What do you mean by that? Different font? Or the typos?

A less cursive font would help, but mostly it's the colour. Too much of the text is in a colour other than white, against dark backgrounds. It's not that a text box occuping a third of the screen is needed, but the default text should be white: there's a reason why this is standard practice. Characters speak in different colours, there are different colours for thoughts and speech; it adds nothing, it's just fiddly and hard to read. The grey in particular is hard to read, but so are the blue and red on many of the backgrounds. Transition screens are usually black with white text; here they are white with grey text. Choices are presented in grey text on white background - the choices could be moved to lower down the screen and then presented in white text on black. That kind of thing. Grey doesn't work in general, either as text or background (see UI and menu); I don't understand why the dev uses it so much.

 

[Marcus_S]

A less cursive font would help, but mostly it's the colour. Too much of the text is in a colour other than white, against dark backgrounds. It's not that a text box occuping a third of the screen is needed, but the default text should be white: there's a reason why this is standard practice. Characters speak in different colours, there are different colours for thoughts and speech; it adds nothing, it's just fiddly and hard to read. The grey in particular is hard to read, but so are the blue and red on many of the backgrounds. Transition screens are usually black with white text; here they are white with grey text. Choices are presented in grey text on white background - the choices could be moved to lower down the screen and then presented in white text on black. That kind of thing. Grey doesn't work in general, either as text or background (see UI and menu); I don't understand why the dev uses it so much.

Don't worry, this issue will be fixed in the next update. The font is the same, but it's white with black border everywhere.

 

[Overlord070]

Should this really have the besti tag?
From what I remember it's only implied right?