dstarfire

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Played through most of the current content, and I have to say it's a lot of fun. Everything is challenging at first, at least until you upgrade your equipment and train up what stats you can. It feels a bit frustrating early on, but it does make combat feel dangerous and something to be avoided (which is a welcome change, and the other ways to earn money are almost as fast).

However, there is a lot of room for improvement in the dialogue in the sex scenes. It sounds like something straight from a B-grade porno. Maybe take a look at some of the other general (i.e. not focused on one or more fetishes) games here and how they do the sex scenes. The best ones utilized narration and inner monologue to convey the sensations, feelings, and thoughs of the main character. Animation is nice, but it's not a substitute for good dialogue (at least not without a massive and unrealistic investment of time and effort). Take a look at 'Twists of My Life' or 'Sisterly Lust' for some examples of good writing. You've got some beautiful and wonderfully diverse models, they deserve writing that's as good as the artwork.

Also, when you do add in pregnancy, please make it an optional feature or avoidable sidequest. That's one of those fetishes that can be a real turn-off for some people.

I'm really looking forward to the next release. I'll probably join your patreon after the first of the month.
 
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picknick

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WTF with that charm skill each time i try to date a girl a message appears and says charm check failed!!
 

Rude Roy

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Currently the game doesn't have an incest tag, so I wouldn't hold my breath. Honestly, though, it's not like there's a shortage of women for him to take, though. I know incest is a kink (so lacking it might be disappointing to many), but I'm not sure that's really the direction this game is heading in.

I guess we'll see later on, but it seems like almost everything is focused right around Mirim. The only reason he even went to the Amazons in the first place was because his mom was captured by them. Even when there, standing in front of her, the MC never really thinks about his mom that way, so I'm guessing it won't happen. I could always be wrong, though.
He was fantasizing about joining her and her lover, though
 

Rude Roy

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god... the first part of this message sound very like an "i give up, that's all."


how do you know about the interest ?
tons of peoples play and enjoy games without saying a word, they dont post comment, they dont review, they dont pledge, they dont do anything but lurk around silently and enjoy games. soo, yeah, i dont know how do you base yourself about this.



just saying... giving up (even on a long "on hold") will give you a bad reputation in futur. of course we understand that we cant always do what we want for some reasons, but well, most of devs who go this way never end good and futur is harder.

your decision anyway, i m not gonna tell you what to do. i just give advice and shit :p
Kudos to you for what you've done so far. I'm trying to teach myself how to create VNs, and it's a lot more difficult than I thought it would be, and I have nothing but time (retired) more computer equipment than any sane person needs, and a lot of ideas, but results? Not so much. I don't think the whiners grasp what it takes every time the player takes an action or makes a decision. I've now played 600+ VN made in everything from renpy to tyranobuilder, unity, rpgmaker, and some I can't even remember. I think the renpy ones are usually the smoothest. Keep up the good work. Some of us realize how much time and effort you're expending, and we appreciate it.
 

Rude Roy

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Her face isn't great but I think her body is good. I did crank down her belly and upped her boobs to make her more appealing.

I think in a Monstergirl game its sort of fun to play around with looks some. Don't worry though I don't plan to do things like that too much. But I do like playing around with odd characteristics some. Unlike some games where chicks are all huge boobed I like to have a wide variety.

Just curious who do you think is the hottest girl so far?
Jules is hot except her eyes are a bit funky. Miriam is hot, and I'm looking forward to Kira. just on looks alone, it's Lilith, IMO
 

macadam

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Kudos to you for what you've done so far. I'm trying to teach myself how to create VNs, and it's a lot more difficult than I thought it would be, and I have nothing but time (retired) more computer equipment than any sane person needs, and a lot of ideas, but results? Not so much. I don't think the whiners grasp what it takes every time the player takes an action or makes a decision. I've now played 600+ VN made in everything from renpy to tyranobuilder, unity, rpgmaker, and some I can't even remember. I think the renpy ones are usually the smoothest. Keep up the good work. Some of us realize how much time and effort you're expending, and we appreciate it.
eeeh.. just to point out.. im not the dev of this game :). i make my own game.
i was just giving this dev some lil' opinion and thoughts.
 
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-CookieMonster666-

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He was fantasizing about joining her and her lover, though
Not really. I think "fantasizing" is a bit strong. "I wonder what that would've been like" is what he says. Ralia then describes specific things (sucking, etc.), and the MC gets hard. It could be the Amazon champion, not his own mom, got him hard. It's not really clear, tbh. I still don't think this should have an incest tag. Even though he did briefly imagine his mom with Ralia, he himself never has sex with her, and he never imagines himself being with his mom. So how exactly would that be incest?
 

Abhai

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