I can't put a review so I'll put my sincere thoughts about the game here, please read it Kyle
to Start I recommend polishing a bit more some of the scenes, (specially sex ones) some angles for the sex scenes are not that good and some sex scenes seemed to need more polishing before being implemented, they're not bad, just... I feel like the art could be better, until now it's just ok, would be good some light, review skin tone, and just to remind, some better angles... also I recommend adding a blowjob scene in the standing scene (looking from above as pov), putting your dick on her head/face and some dick slaps would be good too or at least you see the MC masturbating at her face...
I could put a huge list but I'll just resume the "not so good ones" that could be reworked or remastered:
Elizabeth: Handjob (the angle is terrible) the boobjob I would keep the scene but change the angle, pov would be nice
Clea: The facial could be remastered, the sex from clea needs some rework too
Sarah: blowjob, sex (remaster) anal (rework) I truly think another angle would be better, a POV would be good asf
Pacifica: the "sleep" blowjob, just the frame were she eats your cock
Mary: I would rework the 69 and remaster the 2 balcony scenes (doggy and pov) don't change much, just details.
The liana blowjob and fuck could be better and Lilly "blowjob" could use some details/remaster/shading.
Also a extra is that the training hall looks like it's floating, just look at it more than 5 seconds and you notice the edges are not that good
I would recommend some rework on the love/corruption mechanics too and the "how to get money mechanics" since you can even "beat the game" but don't buy a single cloth because you don't have the money
Also down there is a pic of almost what I think like would be better (it's just rotate thing to look a bit as pov but not working because the scene was not made for it) but it could be used as a base for a new one easily I think.