VN Ren'Py Far-Off Friends [v0.7] [FFCreations]

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WastedTalent

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Don't worry, you aren't missing much, the story is utter dogshit that makes no sense and isn't interesting enough to get you to care about all the supposed mysteries which exist only for their own sake, since they all could have been revealed to the MC years ago instead of still being mysteries.

For example;
Some people here would have you believe that the Melissa character is like some long lost mother figure, despite her never giving two shits about the MC, ever, to the point that they never met or interacted at all.
They claim that despite this, the MC suddenly, within a couple of days of meeting for the first time ever, feels a familial bond and it then makes perfect sense to give away a very valuable property that was specifically willed to the MC and NOT to the Melissa character despite said character being listed specifically in the will and getting a large amount of wealth herself from it.

Like the rest of the plot, this line of reasoning makes no logical sense.


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Why would anyone even give these directions to someone toting luggage?
Seriously, walk around 9-10 blocks in total while hauling luggage?
The answer should have been "Oh its actually quite far from here, you should probably call a taxi or ride-share."

This is just one example of writing that makes no sense, at all.
"some people would have you believe"? You mean the dev's? People complain so much about unfinished stories here and yet the complainers run the gambit on criticism to the point that they actually hope to cause either an entire rework of the story which takes a long time in an already lengthy process or complete abandonment just so they can say see it was bound to happen as so many others. I know many people are here for the stories but let's not forget playboy one of the most popular publications of the 20th century and yes many people read it for the articles, but do you think for one second that many of those articles would have been noticed if there weren't naked women involved? Most fans are here for the art and the lewd parts of these stories and yes many enjoy a story with the lewdness, but let's face it most wouldn't read it including you if there was no lewdness. I think the point for over 25 pages has been driven home about the MC giving away a piece of valuable property, however he talks about his father being kind and generous and many other things. Did it ever occur to you that his father knew the MC might do this? Did it ever occur to you that's why his father already had him registered for college? There is much more of the story to be revealed but a few people can't let go of the fact that the MC gave away a house, one that he never knew about and recognized as someone else's home? Go ahead and be stubborn and keep bashing this one plot point and whine about him not taking a taxi instead of walking and so forth... I mean fiction is after all just that isn't it? I do agree all the secrets do seem to be a little trivial but beyond that if you really hate the story so much why hang around and bash it and try to dissuade others from checking it out and forming their own opinions? Instead let's all mob up and join the other censors like patreon and try to censor anything we don't like that would be the correct course of action right?
 

Content_Consumer

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Did it ever occur to you that's why his father already had him registered for college?
He isn't though.
He isn't registered either for university or for the house he is staying at.
Thats why there was a whole thing about meeting the dean .etc.

Why did he arrive at that house, that already has a tenant, with luggage without even calling ahead? The only reason he even got a room is because Erika has the same surname and was already a tenant there.

Erika is the one that was registered for the house and in uni. The school year has already started, and the MC isn't part of it, the prof even told him to leave the premises, there was a whole debacle about it.
 

WastedTalent

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He isn't though.
He isn't registered either for university or for the house he is staying at.
Thats why there was a whole thing about meeting the dean .etc.

Why did he arrive at that house, that already has a tenant, with luggage without even calling ahead? The only reason he even got a room is because Erika has the same surname and was already a tenant there.

Erika is the one that was registered for the house and in uni. The school year has already started, and the MC isn't part of it, the prof even told him to leave the premises, there was a whole debacle about it.
ok my point being do you and all the other astute critics here understand that we the fans and our dev's are currently under attack from the censors? Today it's the ipatch tomorrow it will be the next kink and the next until it's porn all together. We all are under attack and you can't let go and say let's see what's next dev instead you have to hang around and complain and even discourage others from seeing if they would enjoy the story. That's just malicious and you know it. If this were any other artitstic forum the dev could actually sue you but because porn itself is in the fight just to stay alive as art dev's are stuck and told to suck it up. It's one thing to be critical even constructively so, but your criticism isn't and you know it. But hey good for you, you won't be silenced hell why don't you make a picket line and harass the dev's and their fans alike that's definitely going to improve things right? You win the whole story and all the artwork are just trash and should be canned because you don't like it or don't agree with the plot or whatever reason. The censors at least are upfront about their goals critics just bitch to ruin any reputation for sport.
EDIT: Just curious do the censors pay you?
 
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Content_Consumer

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ok my point being do you and all the other astute critics here understand that we the fans and our dev's are currently under attack from the censors? Today it's the ipatch tomorrow it will be the next kink and the next until it's porn all together.
This is meaningless nothing in relation to my post, no I don't give a shit, stop using patreon, I support several AVNs over on subscribestar and they are doing just fine.

We all are under attack and you can't let go and say let's see what's next dev instead you have to hang around and complain and even discourage others from seeing if they would enjoy the story. That's just malicious and you know it.
Look up the definition of forum.

if this were any other artitstic forum the dev could actually sue you but because porn itself is in the fight just to stay alive as art dev's are stuck and told to suck it up.
Now you're really starting to sound like an idiot, good luck suing anyone for having a public opinion on "art", go look up the definition of 'critic'.

But hey good for you, you won't be silenced
Obviously, it's called free speech in a forum where the rules don't preclude negative opinions.

You win the whole story and all the artwork are just trash and should be canned because you don't like it or don't agree with the plot or whatever reason. The censors at least are upfront about their goals critics just bitch to ruin any reputation for sport.
You sound like a petulant child.
If the white-knights actually let their beloved creator know that what is being written makes no sense from the get-go then we wouldn't get this far with a plot that has no logic, reason or continuity.
But the white-knights would rather keep blowing smoke up their perfect angel creator's arse then have them actual improve their craft.
This "dev" already has a history of poor content choices, just look at the already[abandoned] Freeloading family and it's abortion of an ending, but rather then have them improve, you and people like you, would just tell them they're amazing and can do no wrong and then get upset when they churn out more crap and people call it out for being crap.

EDIT: Just curious do the censors pay you?
"The censors", who are they? Name them with some specificity.
I know you can't, because they don't exist, which makes you sound deranged.
 

WastedTalent

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This is meaningless nothing in relation to my post, no I don't give a shit, stop using patreon, I support several AVNs over on subscribestar and they are doing just fine.



Look up the definition of forum.



Now you're really starting to sound like an idiot, good luck suing anyone for having a public opinion on "art", go look up the definition of 'critic'.



Obviously, it's called free speech in a forum where the rules don't preclude negative opinions.



You sound like a petulant child.
If the white-knights actually let their beloved creator know that what is being written makes no sense from the get-go then we wouldn't get this far with a plot that has no logic, reason or continuity.
But the white-knights would rather keep blowing smoke up their perfect angel creator's arse then have them actual improve their craft.
This "dev" already has a history of poor content choices, just look at the already[abandoned] Freeloading family and it's abortion of an ending, but rather then have them improve, you and people like you, would just tell them they're amazing and can do no wrong and then get upset when they churn out more crap and people call it out for being crap.



"The censors", who are they? Name them with some specificity.
I know you can't, because they don't exist, which makes you sound deranged.
Mastercard and the banks CEO of mastercard Ajay Banga and Bill Ackman, the religious right and many more... no you sound like a petulant child telling others not to view something because you don't like it. Ever heard of an ignore the thread button? No instead you have to make sure to tell people because you don't like it neither will they repeatedly like a dog with a bone. There is a difference between negative opinions and harassment look it up... you can't even admit that your intention is mean spirited beyond reason. Many others here can see it and yes you could be sued for harassment even on a public forum. Look that up. Also, the fact that you so staunchly defend that the game and dev's are crap why not move on? It's pretty well established your dislike, but you have to keep going. Harassment... I'm sure there are titles you do enjoy but no you have what appears to be a personal vendetta against this dev team and if you think it's crap as you have so eloquently repeated about this, and their other game over and over why not move on? Your point has been made. There must be some benefit to staying the course.? Oh, right you are a proponent of free speech... Very big of you.
 
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WastedTalent

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Are you the Dev? Are you making multiple accounts to give the illusion of supporters?
Nope tried my hand at being a dev it's not easy. I didn't get to release my story. Artwork was my challenge and I didn't want to release something I wouldn't be happy with I chose to not proceed plus the short lived mass influx of dev's it became pretty clear it's difficult to scratch out a decent amount of financial support. A well established dev I spoke to told me point blank don't do it if it's only about the money if it's not a passion you won't make it. It was honestly a true stuggle to answer that question. I think I am ultimately more passionate as a fan as well as limited as far as the art and animations go.
 

pgm_01

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mind telling me WHAT THE FUCK is going on? i'm sure that the lawyer told the mc that the house was his, and he want to take a year off from college, so i'm confused when he arrived at the radiant valley and start entering the house, did the lawyer never try to contact melissa?
If you play through the game, it makes sense.
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VerkanVall

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Spent more time reading this forum than reading the game. Unlike the game it is a fun and interesting read. The game story is awful, having continuity issues, poor phrasing/wording, weak character development, overly verbose, etc etc... The mc is a beta about to be cucked by his lady friends. I see major femdom in his future.
 

dolfe67

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If you play through the game, it makes sense.
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Nice summary. It might make sense IG if you can stand the writing but personally I find it pretty awful. Still, giving the house for free to an unknown person is a pushover action. Could have had a choice between giving it, renting it for free and/or giving her time to buy it with the same result, but it's too complicated for the dev.
 

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So, am giving this a try, despite the fact that I didn't finish FF and after reading what people have said about the endings, I doubt I will finish it.

Anyway, a couple things I'd like to know about this. Is this a romance game or a forced harem game? There's only one girl that I like and it feels like we're being pushed to all the girls. Maybe that's just because I'm using KoGa3's mod.

Also, the MC is a bit annoying, too much of a 'Mr. Nice Guy' for my tastes. But, if this is a romance game, I can deal with it.
 

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So, am giving this a try, despite the fact that I didn't finish FF and after reading what people have said about the endings, I doubt I will finish it.

Anyway, a couple things I'd like to know about this. Is this a romance game or a forced harem game? There's only one girl that I like and it feels like we're being pushed to all the girls.

Also, the MC is a bit annoying, too much of a 'Mr. Nice Guy' for my tastes. But, if this is a romance game, I can deal with it.
well mc is such a nice guy that he needs get all girls out of their shells (some more and some less) too early for players to say if harem or romance, devs could but that'd be spoiling but i think romance all and pick 1.
 
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