- Nov 21, 2018
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The world of missed opportunities is a bittersweet place. It can be a nice place to visit sometimes, but I wouldn't want to live there.The other part of ep2 I find now as a big missed opportunity is the scenes with Steve when Monica blows him for Victoria's $5000. These scenes as they play out are just dull after the first or second deal. What would have worked better is if Steve insisted that Monica takes him deeper each week if she wants to earn her $5000. We could of had a gradual set of scenes with Monica being trained to deepthroat Steve with her managing to equal Mailey's talent by the end of the seventh deal. It is however the way it is and I don't think he will change it now.
That being said, I do think that alternate dialogue when repeating a scene or progression through stages of a repeatable scene are both good ideas, and it's a pity that it wasn't done that way.