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I love your game, and I look forward to future updates. Very intresting story, and nice artwork as well. I have high hopes for it. Top notch stuff... However my main complaint about it is some of the word usage. I'll give you an example of what I mean by this.
I noticed that the word "Communications" is often used when the word "Connections" would make more sense.
I don't have a verbatum copy off my memory of what exactly was said.
A lawyer for instance may say: "I got connections. I can use them to pull some strings, and keep you out of jail." Where as if he said "I got communications. I can use them to pull some strings, and keep you out of jail." It just sounds off to a native English speaker.
The new renpy version is far superior to th old RPGM one.
Unavoidable rape / sex I feel should be taken out of paths where you have yet to go down it already. For instance in the RPGM version you must suck a dick to continue the storyline. You should be able to dodge that encounter. He tells you "you can get out of the car" but it doesn't come up as an option and soon enough you are choking on a dick. Rape is great so long as it can be avoided.
Inversely opportunities should be abound where they were not in the past. The nasty woman that says "eat my dirty pussy for thirty dollars"... Then you are like fuck off... I totally see "fuck off" as a valid option here... However another option could be "How about for a hundred?" I mean she hasn't eaten anything but a tiny piece of chocolate in 3 days, and is hungry ,and no place to stay... She is in desperate need of $