VN Ren'Py Fate and Life: The Mystery of Vaulinhorn [Ch.10 Deluxe] [Celestial Novel]

[Marioc17]

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[SonsOfLiberty]

With a bigger budget i am sure the quality will improve but hey he reached 500 bucks per month which is not bad for the first year.

It's going to Steam hopefully as well, that is why the characters aged more.

 

[SummerCar]

I'd maybe lower the needed corruption points to access some of the scenes. If you go after Alfred instead of playing Poker you cannot reach enough points for the talk with Noel. You will miss out on the points you get with him and then also lack enough points for Mason and Matias.

Also, Derek still talks about having sucked your nipples even when you ended strip poker early.

Agreed, right now you basically have to pick all the corrupt choices in order to pick any future corrupt choices which makes the choices useless. Everything else about the game is great though

 

[flkflk]

Fate and Life: The Mystery of Vaulinhorn [Ch.4] [Celestial] + JL's Multi-Mod by darkassassin
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[Claudio83]

I still haven't though about that but I think there is in Fate and Life 2

Celestial Novel Now i'm already excited to think at the cuckold/hotwife path starting in the 2nd "season" of the game, especially if with Noel in stockings/garter belt and high heels, the typical hotwife outfit… but when will start the 2nd game?

 

[Dufy]

ch4 Just one scene with Maeve...

 

[momojean]

I have white screen (No images) the whole game. Only dialogue. What's happening? Any advise?

 

[Celestial Novel]

I have white screen (No images) the whole game. Only dialogue. What's happening? Any advise?

Click reset button in the preference

Celestial Novel Now i'm already excited to think at the cuckold/hotwife path starting in the 2nd "season" of the game, especially if with Noel in stockings/garter belt and high heels, the typical hotwife outfit… but when will start the 2nd game?

Around 2024

With a bigger budget i am sure the quality will improve but hey he reached 500 bucks per month which is not bad for the first year.

Glad you notice that haha, yea there are a lot of assets in there that I would like to buy but as for now, my priority is getting rtx 3090 and focusing on steam. I'm currently contacting female singer to make custom song for the game's new trailer. Hopefully that trailer will attract steam's people to buy my game. I also try to convert blender and UE5 assets to DAZ but my PC can't handle it lol

 

[Celestial Novel]

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[Gold Onyx]

Good game. But the corruption and love points definitely need some fine tuning. Currently it seems you have to pick EVERY corruption point to get future options... which really make no sense. Some corruption options are rather minor, but require more corruption points than previous ones 'just because'.

Not sure why choices are an option, when you basically have to go ALL corruption or all love. As soon as you skip one corruption point, you stick just missing out on scenes currently, with fewer alternative scenes, it seems.

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

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3some in the classroom or just double bj? And then another student secretly records this and pretty soon she’ll be doing sexual favors all day at school

 

[ihl86]

I am SO happy he changed the kids to actual 18 year olds. So so so glad about that! Wow. now if only she would get a body a little more realistic. Boobs a little smaller, would be even happier.

 

[Apexpredator47]

Maybe its just me but i think the mc needs some work on her face. In some shots she looks like shes had multiple surgeries done and in other she looks a bit like michael jackson lol

 

[krak0n]

Dude, sorry but... whyt did you accelerated sooo much in the last update?

It was a corruption milf + exciting "genesis order alike" story, and suddenly it became "every single milf cliché as quick as posible". You already did the swimming pool massage, you already did the lesbian daughter (no option to skip, its somehow mandatory), and you are going for the 300000 phone picture blackmail. Please, return to the original story line and nice pacing, dont rush clichés like this update.

The dork friend's son, who was normal teenage body, not confident and very creepy literally 2 days ago, suddenly became a greek god body with 10+ inches cock, "She just noticed...", and the traditional prude woman is suddenly taking the guy to the middle of the backyard where every neightbour could spot her for a fucking facial because he rubbed her with oil for 3 minutes. Come on! That was really bad writting. Now nothing makes sense, he should not have self steem problems, she should not need to help him, etc... That was lazy writting, that was bad, you were doing better.

The phone blackmail. BAD, really really BAD. First of all, she is part of the police, she has too much power to even dare remotely to accept the childish blackmail, she just needs her female cop friend to have an intimidating talk with him. But figure out she is not using her friend, he goes and tries the blackmail. It makes NO SENSE! She just need to say NO. If he publishes the image, now he is going to jail and gets NOTHING. He cannot win that situation, stop it. That doesnt work on a clever and competent police inspector. Please, dont do that. Its too bad writting.

The bar one, I liked it. The character swap, I liked it.

The gym part, OMG! The worse cringe in such a looooong time. It was unconfortable to watch. It was worse cringe than the Manila Shaw parodies!

And Im telling you this because I tried to play the game by simply clicking "NO" to those non sense, maybe they were just optional we could skip, and then... NOTHING happens, everything goes exactly the same (including the bar part). There is no alternative, its just "accept everything or finish the update in 5 minutes with only text". There is no alternative to refusing non sense, why do you put an option if there is no real option? Its "accept or nothing".

Come on! You were doing better, this update was very content abundant, but terribly low writting quality. Very low. If I didn't saw you traces of better writting, I would just quit the novel and dont write this text, but I KNOW you can do better. Please, dont rush overused nonsensical clichés, do better.

WE DONT WANT ANOTHER AWAM,, He is doing alright.

 

[Celestial Novel]

Dude, sorry but... whyt did you accelerated sooo much in the last update?

It was a corruption milf + exciting "genesis order alike" story, and suddenly it became "every single milf cliché as quick as posible". You already did the swimming pool massage, you already did the lesbian daughter (no option to skip, its somehow mandatory), and you are going for the 300000 phone picture blackmail. Please, return to the original story line and nice pacing, dont rush clichés like this update.

The dork friend's son, who was normal teenage body, not confident and very creepy literally 2 days ago, suddenly became a greek god body with 10+ inches cock, "She just noticed...", and the traditional prude woman is suddenly taking the guy to the middle of the backyard where every neightbour could spot her for a fucking facial because he rubbed her with oil for 3 minutes. Come on! That was really bad writting. Now nothing makes sense, he should not have self steem problems, she should not need to help him, etc... That was lazy writting, that was bad, you were doing better.

The phone blackmail. BAD, really really BAD. First of all, she is part of the police, she has too much power to even dare remotely to accept the childish blackmail, she just needs her female cop friend to have an intimidating talk with him. But figure out she is not using her friend, he goes and tries the blackmail. It makes NO SENSE! She just need to say NO. If he publishes the image, now he is going to jail and gets NOTHING. He cannot win that situation, stop it. That doesnt work on a clever and competent police inspector. Please, dont do that. Its too bad writting.

The bar one, I liked it. The character swap, I liked it.

The gym part, OMG! The worse cringe in such a looooong time. It was unconfortable to watch. It was worse cringe than the Manila Shaw parodies!

And Im telling you this because I tried to play the game by simply clicking "NO" to those non sense, maybe they were just optional we could skip, and then... NOTHING happens, everything goes exactly the same (including the bar part). There is no alternative, its just "accept everything or finish the update in 5 minutes with only text". There is no alternative to refusing non sense, why do you put an option if there is no real option? Its "accept or nothing".

Come on! You were doing better, this update was very content abundant, but terribly low writting quality. Very low. If I didn't saw you traces of better writting, I would just quit the novel and dont write this text, but I KNOW you can do better. Please, dont rush overused nonsensical clichés, do better.

It's a porn game. As a player, went I download a porn game, I want more sexy scenes. If I went realistic, you will not see any sexy scene at all.

It was a corruption milf + exciting "genesis order alike" story, and suddenly it became "every single milf cliché as quick as posible"

Please don't compare me with genesis order who already has 14.000 patron and probably 30 people working on the game. I just solo dev and I can't satisfy everyone, I have a real life too but of course things will be different if I have 14.000 Patron

The dork friend's son, who was normal teenage body, not confident and very creepy literally 2 days ago, suddenly became a greek god body with 10+ inches cock,

It seems you don't quite understand when I say I need to change the characters so my game can be published on steam.

The phone blackmail. BAD, really really BAD. First of all, she is part of the police, she has too much power to even dare remotely to accept the childish blackmail, she just needs her female cop friend to have an intimidating talk with him. But figure out she is not using her friend, he goes and tries the blackmail. It makes NO SENSE! She just need to say NO. If he publishes the image, now he is going to jail and gets NOTHING. He cannot win that situation, stop it. That doesnt work on a clever and competent police inspector. Please, dont do that. Its too bad writting.

If you think that doesn't make any sense, you can simply say no and Maive will not do that blackmail. If you accept it, please don't blame the game over something that you do by yourself

And Im telling you this because I tried to play the game by simply clicking "NO" to those non sense, maybe they were just optional we could skip, and then... NOTHING happens, everything goes exactly the same (including the bar part). There is no alternative, its just "accept everything or finish the update in 5 minutes with only text". There is no alternative to refusing non sense, why do you put an option if there is no real option? Its "accept or nothing".

You need to see this from a developer's perspective. I would love to make some sexy scene for people who click "NO" but then again, I just a solo dev that has a real life and in just 2 month, I don't have time nor the energy needed to create those scenes. Things would be different if I have more people working on this game

Come on! You were doing better, this update was very content abundant, but terribly low writting quality

Nah the problem it's not the writing quality because in this update a top-tier native English writer is willing to write for me and my Patron number is raising up from 40 Patron (325$) to 85 Patron (551$). It's just that I can't satisfy everyone, I just simply do what I thing the best for the game regardless what people will say

I am SO happy he changed the kids to actual 18 year olds. So so so glad about that! Wow. now if only she would get a body a little more realistic. Boobs a little smaller, would be even happier.

Sorry but I'm not planning to do that

Good game. But the corruption and love points definitely need some fine tuning. Currently it seems you have to pick EVERY corruption point to get future options... which really make no sense. Some corruption options are rather minor, but require more corruption points than previous ones 'just because'.

Not sure why choices are an option, when you basically have to go ALL corruption or all love. As soon as you skip one corruption point, you stick just missing out on scenes currently, with fewer alternative scenes, it seems.

The points will be fixed when the game is almost finished. As for now, people can use cheat option for level 4 Patrons if they think the points system is not satisfying them

 

[XoXmmahmm]

It's a porn game. As a player, went I download a porn game, I want more sexy scenes. If I went realistic, you will not see any sexy scene at all.


Please don't compare me with genesis order who already has 14.000 patron and probably 30 people working on the game. I just solo dev and I can't satisfy everyone, I have a real life too but of course things will be different if I have 14.000 Patron


It seems you don't quite understand when I say I need to change the characters so my game can be published on steam.


If you think that doesn't make any sense, you can simply say no and Maive will not do that blackmail. If you accept it, please don't blame the game over something that you do by yourself


You need to see this from a developer's perspective. I would love to make some sexy scene for people who click "NO" but then again, I just a solo dev that has a real life and in just 2 month, I don't have time nor the energy needed to create those scenes. Things would be different if I have more people working on this game


Nah the problem it's not the writing quality because in this update a top-tier native English writer is willing to write for me and my Patron number is raising up from 40 Patron (325$) to 85 Patron (551$). It's just that I can't satisfy everyone, I just simply do what I thing the best for the game regardless what people will say


Sorry but I'm not planning to do that


The points will be fixed when the game is almost finished. As for now, people can use cheat option for level 4 Patrons if they think the points system is not satisfying them

You doing great don't worry keep doing
im just be you patreon yesterday you guys deserve more supporter good job

 

[shuiko]

sex scene yet?

 

[Rzrc7]

Any one have full gallery?ch4?

 

[Rzrc7]

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Hey man make maive's ass bigger please :/❤

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

" It's a porn game. " - NO, its an Adult Visual NOVEL. If the novel part is not in place, then I would better watch a Brazzers clip.

Summertime Saga 24799
Genesis Order / Treasure Nadia 14035
Being a DiK 12339
Eternum 4603

Why the top performers are "top performing"? Yes, they can hire multiple people, that's now, not when they started.
Just look at it, they have crazy GOOOOOD stories. And every story needs GOOOOOD characters.

I know I might sound rude, but Im not, Im trying to help with frontal 100% honesty. Im just warning you. You are about to do a BIIIIG mistake.

Maive is a trained police inspector, not my idea, its the character YOU wrote. She is trained into reading through people, understanding peoples motives, understanding leverage in negotiation (a blackmail is an inmoral win-lose negotiation basically), and she is trained into understanding multiple outcome scenarios. If she falls into the most cliché cringeworthy blackmail that is a teenager with a stolen picture in a private property, its not that the blackmail is better or worse, the problem is that you just KILLED your main character, and your novel falls with it.

Side characters doing meh, ok ok, we can try to ignore them and cut story lines. After all, ridiculously good side characters is what makes Game of Thrones or Breaking Bad the success they are, but this is amateur novel writting, we cannot ask for that OBVIOUSLY, that would be unfair. But main character assasination is basically the whole novel falling apart.

You are about to change Maive from a focused, clever, high IQ police inspector able to perform in subterfuge for hours and hours (ridiculous high self control), into a dumb 2 IQ soccer mom falling into a kindergarden blackmail. Don't do that, it will kill the whole novel.

Do you want to do lots of sex scenes? right. Maybe the guy tries to blackmail her, it backfires terribly and that inspires a male domination CFNM kind of humiliation sex scene. Maybe the daughter knows whats about to happen to her mother and she self inflicts the blackmail on her to protect Maive because she is inexperienced and falls into crappy traps. Examples. Just because you write good storytelling doesn't mean there will be no sex. Look at Genesis Order man, EVERY situation spawns a well crafted sex scene.

Well like he said you can just say no to the blackmail if you want or if you want to avoid the blackmail situation with the picture, you could always have her say no to mattias massage and then there’s no bj for the bbc to blackmail her with. Plus the 2 boys that will attempt to blackmail her already played strip poker with her got her drunk and topless and even squeezed her tits and started sucking them, can’t remember if one of them got that on their phone or not, so if they did she could be blackmailed for that unless you didn’t go that far in the game. So like the dev said, only person that can be blamed for Maeve’s actions is us, because we’re her puppet master and make the choices to be naughty or not which is the way it should be