Wow... that's mean. but you're right. sony vegas and some beer make the best Opening.
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didn't mean it to be malicious but I mean you're playing a porn game demo and then out of nowhere there's this anime-esque intro with rock music and the protag glaring up at the camera through his bangs and everything. For some reason, I just found it hilarious
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That's a shame. I love femdom, but hate games without choices or with only a very small amount of them; one of the reasons I don't play Japanese VNs. That being said I really hope that your VN will grow and I'll be able to play a fully developed, multilayered at some point in the future. I'll wait until then
Sure. I recommend that once you feel ready for RPGmaker you either start a new project or re-do this one with multiple choices in mind. Otherwise you may force players to slog through a lengthy linear story before they get to actually play the more interactive, more fun part. Meaning that most of them will quit before getting to the best parts of the game and that'd be a shame.
Thanks! but for now i will keep my linear VN way... after all i will focus more on Hentai scenes.
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That's a shame. I love femdom, but hate games without choices or with only a very small amount of them; one of the reasons I don't play Japanese VNs. That being said I really hope that your VN will grow and I'll be able to play a fully developed, multilayered at some point in the future. I'll wait until then
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That's great to hear, but y'know, don't change or rush your plans only on my (and others) behalf. Your own satisfaction is very important so you won't get burnt out or grow to dislike your own project. That being said if you're thinking about making games like that more seriously then learning ren'py is not a bad idea imo. Plus look at games like Karlsson's Gambit; dev didn't know anything about ren'py, sat down to learn it and the results are pretty spectacular.
That's great! Don't push yourself to add extra choices and mechanics until you feel ready. Linear with few or no choices is not as enticing to me personally but it's perfectly fine if you're trying to learn to write a good story or how renpy works!
Thanks! i will try to learn more about renpy and make a good story at the same time.
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Welp pre-0.2 (if I can call it that way) has pretty interesting 1st lady, but it feels too short, just hoping there will be more content with each one of them. That said, please don't try to overwork, there's no need for adding something you don't want to (Oh and sorry for downloading pre-version w/o paying)
no worries, yes for the next version you will visit Eri again with a new hentai scene. and thanks for the feedback!
this version is a bit short in the hentai scene because after i change my way(adding choices and more stuff instead of a linear visual novel) i decide to add short scenes with every girl in the next updates, basically you can visit girls again in the next updates and get some hentai scenes or just talk. the next version will have a new hentai scene with Ai and Eri.
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Sounds promising, however, maybe you shouldn't allow ppl to download versions that are yet closed to public
haha i was thinking on release the public version today, yesterday I only had 2 patreons so... but you're right and will take more time with the patreon release and the public in my next updates.Sounds promising, however, maybe you shouldn't allow ppl to download versions that are yet closed to public
Just played v0.2. Renders look great, and the animations are nice. The biggest problem is a lot of the grammar is a bit mangled. I feel an editing pass (or an editor) would greatly improve the experience.
Overall, though, looking forward to more content!
Overall, though, looking forward to more content!
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I'm not sure if this will be helpful, but a few examples with suggested edits:
- "I thinks that's all for now" -> "I think that's all for now"
- "That's mean i will be nicely to you" -> "That means I'll be nice to you"
- "Hoho! I may be a devil but I keep my words.." -> "Hoho! Think what you will of me, but I keep my word"**
- "? ." and "! ." happens quite a lot -- not sure why there's a floating fullstop! A bit distracting, but easy to rectify
- A few sentences not capitilised etc.
As you can see they're not major issues, but given it's a text-heavy game, small improvements go a long way to improving the experience. But again, enjoying the content so far Great renders.
- "I thinks that's all for now" -> "I think that's all for now"
- "That's mean i will be nicely to you" -> "That means I'll be nice to you"
- "Hoho! I may be a devil but I keep my words.." -> "Hoho! Think what you will of me, but I keep my word"**
- "? ." and "! ." happens quite a lot -- not sure why there's a floating fullstop! A bit distracting, but easy to rectify
- A few sentences not capitilised etc.
As you can see they're not major issues, but given it's a text-heavy game, small improvements go a long way to improving the experience. But again, enjoying the content so far
Great renders.