I love Maya and I hope a future update will include sex scenes! keep up the good work.
Ren'Py Fattening Career [v0.09] [Bladerune9]
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The project has grown a lot the last few updates, the new content should generally be polished and finished.
The older content is slowly being updated and reworked to fit the quality standards of the rest of the game.
Because the project is now quite big I might have left some nooks unfinished without knowing. Would you be so kind to tell me which part shows that it is WIP?
It is very high on the priority list to get the game into beta and make savefiles compatible between major update.
I suspect to reach beta with update 0.11 or 0.12.
- Nov 20, 2018
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Thank you, I forgot about that part.
For update 0.10, that whole Luna section will get a revamp.
Can't wait for content to kick off with her. Though it seems like that's not likely even for v10. Wouldn't mind some stages of her weight gain even just at Bunny Bites from eating there to hold us over till story content is added.
- May 10, 2017
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Does Amber has Stage 3 event? I just unlocked Stage 4 event, where she eats in storage room, and have Stage 1 and 2!
Did I miss something?
Did I miss something?
Hello. Can i translate your game in to Russian language? And can u upload game with Russian language into Steam?
I'll give the current version a run-through and see if it's been updated; been a solid eight months since my last attempt. Will post here when I finish up.
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I take it all the girls are gonna end up with huge stomachs? I assmumed body type = type of expansion we were getting as the Apples like Amber, Daisy and Charlene have an emphasis on Stomach, the Pears like Bonnie, Hari and Trista were huge rumps and the Hourglasses were all about the titty meat (Luna, Maya, Roxie). At latter stages though they completely seem to be losing their shape as stomachs start to completely trump the rest of their bodies despite body type - Bonnie is getting a massive stomach and more and more scenes focusing on that ignoring her rear altogether in the angles, Katrina has just lost her shape altogether and her bust is now the same size if not smaller than some of the Apple and Pear girls and Leanne went in a single stage of transformation from flat stomach to morbidly obese. I am a little confused as before it was at least defined who was gonna change in what way in where the extra pounds were going and what the scenes were gonna be most focused on but that no longer looks the case.
Amber does not have a stage 3 event in the update.
Her old stage 3 event was how Maya was introduced before.
She'll get a new stage 3 event in the next update.
I intend to do translations when the game is finished, because currently there are still too many things changing with every update that it would be wasted to translations already.
Not all girls will end up with big bellies. Apple, Pear, Hourglass are just the main bodytypes of the characters, but there is still a lot of variation within those 3 types. Hari and Trista are very heavily pear shaped, especially Trista, while Bonnie is more a hybrid between pear and apple. If I didn't do that, there would only really be three types of gain in the game. I try to make it so there are plenty of shapes and sizes so that everyone has some character they like.
Dude, Bladerune9, that update was very nice! those dances! yea!
but would you consider splitting the long animations into smaller chunks, so that we could repeat some tasty moves more easily?
but would you consider splitting the long animations into smaller chunks, so that we could repeat some tasty moves more easily?
Alright, finished up. Looks like most of the WiP stuff from my last runthrough is gone. Only one I found was Luna's repeatable scene after feeding her a specific amount. That said, if you're open to constructive criticism, a lot of what's there now isn't much more than WiP. The spoiler has more details per scene, but the gist of it is that the average sex scene in the game has roughly 30 lines of text to it. There's a few of them (also noted) that are particularly good, but for many scenes it's just some quick dirty talk thrown in as if to do the bare minimum to accompany the scene. Like I mentioned previously, it *is* a visual novel - the novel part's just as important. The writing here isn't *bad*, it's just very bare-bones, like it was rushed through in favor of focusing on the animations. Don't get me wrong, the animations are great (the new Cayenne shower scene is amazing on that front), but in a world where you can find tons of amazing, voiced animations, sometimes lasting longer than it would take to read all of the scenes here, a VN's writing is what can make it stick out.
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Thank you for the feedback on the sex scene dialogue.
It is good to know what writing you thought was good and what wasn't.
This might have been the first I got specific feedback on this part of the game, so this is very welcome.
I myself struggle immensely with writing compelling dialogue for sex scenes, and some of the writers have let me know they aren't familiar/confident with this either. I did try to get someone onboard specifically to write the sex scenes, but that fell through.
The Katrine Velvet Shadows date sex scene was written by Expanding Universe Games, he has written a ton of sex scenes for his games so he obviously knows what he is doing. I might try to get him onboard for a few more sex scenes.
That one was definitely one of the better ones; a good scene's got a good mix of descriptor lines & dialogue - excessive dirty talk might be one of the "unrealistic" parts of porn in games like this in particular, but when your only option for conveying info is text, it can definitely get things to the next level. It also might be worth a mini-hunt for writers with experience with the genre. It's a bit under-represented in most media, but there's some stories featuring bigger gals and feeding on sites like literotica; not all of them actively accept commissions, but I've seen it used to good effect to find solid writers for a bit cheaper than a full-blown studio. It's got the added benefit of having instant access to samples of their work, too.
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Is there any chance we'll get a strongfat girl? I know we have Trista but she gains all the weight below the waist. I'm talking about a girl that's built like a bear.
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The core of the game is about the body appreciation, not t3h sexx0rz, so it never seemed out of place to me that the scenes were short and a little stiff. At first, I didn't like Cayenne, but in the new stages and the new shower scene...
And Trista changed a lot too (especially with her pose before the sauna ): it's not necessarily a "teasing" game, but the non-sex scenes are already erotic, so being able to visit Bonnie sometimes and powerlift her on her couch with your pelvis is just a cherry on top. All depends on what we're here for - ultimately it *is* a smut game, albeit with an atypical secondary focus. While you won't disappoint everyone by letting certain aspects of it slip, this isn't one of those cases where you have to sacrifice another part of the game to make it better & maximize your audience & appeal. The sex scenes can be great right alongside the rest of it, no good reason for them not to be IMOThe core of the game is about the body appreciation, not t3h sexx0rz, so it never seemed out of place to me that the scenes were short and a little stiff. At first, I didn't like Cayenne, but in the new stages and the new shower scene...