4tune
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He actually quoted Terry Pratchett...a writer who in the period of 7 years would write like 10 or something superb novels...not counting all the other work he did like poems and essays.
He is crushing it, Pratchett even based a book on this guy:
He is crushing it, Pratchett even based a book on this guy:
Oh lord. Spare me. Who are you trying to convince? Does intellectual frazzlement automatically mean that the 'work' you are doing is necessary and good? He's spinning his wheels and using these 'progress' reports as a way to manipulate his patrons into acceptance of the status quo. In a year's time, when nothing about the pace of development has changed he knows it won't matter because they will have forgotten these promises in favour of whatever new angle he has come up with.
He's also quoted Stephen King, who has written a book pretty much every year for almost 50 years now
When do we get to fuck noodle? Been waiting for that the whole time.
robin312
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nah couple of years time we'll have another rewritein a couple of years. probably
I hate the fact that you're probably right...
Senor Smut
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I think in a couple of years we'll still be fairly early in the Lifepath and Crush will be sending out very irregular updates explaining why there's little to no progress, and his cult will still be saying, "Take your time..."
Short novels, mind you. Most average around 80K words. Girl spy is 700K words not to mention the custom, slick twine interface he built which may have taken a year itself to make.
does it matter if they are short novels? man was consistent unlike Crush.
I'm also part of the "take your time club". Since I am 35 years old and I deduced I will be alive until I am 90 years old. I have a game plan for each year I am alive. Basically a Perfect Marriage will be done when I am 45 years old. So I have a game to wank off to for 45. For 50 I think ORS will finally be completed so that's my 50 wank. And then female agent is planned for 65 years old. AWAM is going to be when I am 89 years old.
If he completed the game sooner, I'd lose my game to wank to for when I am those ages.
If he completed the game sooner, I'd lose my game to wank to for when I am those ages.
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That was really good action scene writing.
Takes Crush really long to get it out though.
Even for people who like reading books, they'd be less inclined to read a massive block of text than to read smaller sized chunks. It's why paragraphs are a thing. They're the middle ground between one sentence and one essay. Individual preference in a population is a trend and is something important to target. Fewer people find massive blocks of text fun than do, so if you want greater appeal, it needs to be cut.
IIRC, the version with the lifepath ends on arrival at Bangkok airport (may be earlier than that, it certainly doesn't go any further).
There are two older versions floating around. One ends in Bahrain, after lifepath/mission training, but never makes it to Bangkok. The other ends after the first year of University.
In a few years, there will probably be a third unfinished version when Crush abandons his latest attempt at lifepath reshuffling.
Edit: Now I think one version ended in Dubai rather than Bahrain. In any case, was definitely not KL in that version.
In a few years, there will probably be a third unfinished version when Crush abandons his latest attempt at lifepath reshuffling.
Edit: Now I think one version ended in Dubai rather than Bahrain. In any case, was definitely not KL in that version.
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Hey guys! I’m working hard on the Mother Of All Beat Sheets. Last week I finished a second draft of the MOABS– covering hundreds of big and small story beats, strung out over a range of Bangkok episodes – and it’s significantly better than the first draft (which itself was significantly better than the planned continuation of the Bangkok story arc).
While I am very conscious that I don’t want to get stuck in a cycle of overplanning, the results of this exercise are just so exciting (and hot ) that it’s obvious I need to continue prioritising it right now. If you liked the previous episodes of Female Agent, you’re going to love what’s coming next.
The main improvements I’m excited about are:
- Hotter, more varied sex scenes
- Faster story pace with more spy action
- A less passive, more customisable heroine with more dialogue and decision points
It’s going great. I’m working on it every day with high energy (basically until my brain is out of gas ). I’m going to continue working on the MOABS, adding to it and – critically – making it easier to read so that contributors can help to edit and improve it further.
Okay I’m gonna get back to it! Have a lovely day everybody and thank you so much for all the supportive messages and comments, your encouragement means the world to me. ❤
Nah mate your gonna be working on this beat sheet for the next 2 years and then your gonna make a new one as the old one was not working
ah thanks fellas, good to know where the older versions were at. i'll try one of them out and then wait for a year to see if significant new content dropped
In other words: I have no idea what to do next, so I'll just do next to nothing and let you solve my problems for me and continue the story for me... while I get paid for your work.
As for working every day on high energy until he runs out of gas... that means what? 5 minutes a day? 10 minutes? Maybe an hour if inspiration struck?