Hello everyone :3
I really appreciate the feedback you've given here and would like to clarify some things, to give you guys a better idea of what's going on
so...
Teufelhunden? That's German and means "Devil-dogs". What's that supposed to be?:coldsweat:x'Dx'D
Just to be clear, I was referring to this ->
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Nah, he bought her that ice cream size to overcompensate, that way at least she will remember the big and thick ice cone.
*ahemm*... SHE bought the ice cream....
The volleyball game instructions are a bit odd. When she says "left" she means her left hand you have to remember a few screens in the past. She's always signalling, and you have to look at both hands. I think once or twice I lost the point anyway, but you should have no trouble getting 10 points if you follow her hand signals.
Sometimes the signals aren't exactly clear, like a partially opened hand is still a palm, and a fist with thumb out is still a fist.
I really like this game, as the daughter is believably hot but also still unwilling to just fuck dad right off the bat.
Yeah there is a bit of confusion here, when D is signaling (when Kimi is serving), she sets the rules.. but when you serve, D's just pointing out that you must follow the previous instructions (the fist with a pointed thumb is pointing to the right indicating that), she should maybe say something about that so I may change it later on.
Some of the writing is kinda annoying. Why is there a space before every "!" or "?" ? The whole interpunctuation is kinda terrible, but well...
And who the heck named that poor Kid Destiny?
Well if my name becomes an issue, I can change it to Ms. Spaces.....
Nice start definitely. Daughter looks good and is unique looking but not being able to name her is a bit meh...Destiny eh...yeah not feeling it. Would of preferred to be able romance the Dreaming of Dana looking character in the office than the girls on the beach but judging by that one line of dialogue, I may get my chance in the future. One thing I will say though is I hope the "enemies" that you can make stay the Parental Love and Dating my Daughter kind of enemies rather than a Babysitter or Big Brother kind.
Yeah renaming her should make it more fun, I've noted that down. And just for the record, before any character can be romanced, they must fit in the story since story consistency that is my main priority.
Towards the developer I'm like,
Ain't you scared of being shutdown? I'm no fan of Destiny's aesthetics (something uncanny about it) but I don't want a creator to be taken down. All who develop in Ren'py are blessings. :angel:
I like the tongue and cheek title though, no kidding around, direct to the point. I thought there was going to be G.S.A. considering the title, but maybe on the next update? On another point, I hope we never get to see that ex-gf. It feels like the mom is going to be the antagonist similar to DmD.
Not spoiling anything about the story.... and what is G.S.A. if you don't mind me asking ?
Soldiers have a habit of taking insults as compliments. That being said, that was probably the most CODesque god aweful flashback that wasn't necessary in a porn game.
For the Dev: if you don't know, fucking don't. If you do: fucking don't while making porn, much less about fucking your daughter. Last thing I need is a thousand yard stare at a daz render. Wife will think sex is giving me PTSD or some shit.
My main focus is the story, and here I had to establish his past as a soldier (maybe it was too much) and this way seemed more fun to go with.
Well, this story ended up going a route that at first I wasn't expecting at all... And when you finally do get the sense of what the story is truly about, it feels like the setup is a very familiar and overused one... The whole re-uniting with a daughter after a bunch of years, where the mother took her far away and forbid contact, you have to be careful she doesn't find out her adult daughter has re-united with her dad, because she's super rich and probably has influence over the local authorities, so everything has to be on the down low... It is a setup I've seen a bunch of times already... You don't even get a feeling this is really a father daughter sex story until the peep choice, closer to the end of the current content... Yes, there are some unique things that do occur in the story, but the bare setup is a very familiar and somewhat overused one... I also kind of feel like some of the story elements are over the top, and hard to believe... I went ahead and posted my review...
I can't say if the setup is overused or not, it just made sense to me. The mother took and cut her off because she wasn't able to get a restraining order, and the one with the money is Richard (yeah..), very important detail...
You're very welcome to play the later episodes and decide on how well the story goes.
Also thanks for the really thorough review you've posted, I appreciate it !
