Pretty good start but some of the genre isn't there yet. While I don't have the biggest of feelings toward direct incest, there's no incest here apart from calling each other boyfriend and girlfriend. Obviously I may have missed something though(there is a spot for spying but that's it), and it's a fairly linear game thus far so....
I do like the story thus far and do look forward to reading more. My only wish is there be an option for the girl to be your step daughter. Just a preference though.
(non-incest option)Obviously if it's intended to be there, it's just not there yet, no biggy. If its't not intended it's not that big of a deal, writers choice.