Now this update, I can see what author tried to do with our mc and Val here lol. He tried to make us forgive her. I have to admit it partially worked, the little backstory, the fact that she accepts him having the upper hand bc she likes him...
Only thing I could say smt abt, is prbbly the way it was done. /E The mc woke up and was kinda like, "yeah from now on I'm the boss you shall listen to me women" lol, but at this point I'm not surprised anymore the MC seems like a dunce lol. /EDITED
Pls tell me I'm not the only who felt a bit cringe seeing that lol. It felt like watching a child roleplaying.
I think it could have been better if it was in a more intimate settings. For exemple during that scene where he f$cked her he could have had her on the verge of coming while his hands would be placed on her neck not in a rough manner but more like in a tender yet domineering one. While having her hanging there, he could assert his dominance on her. Saying smt like "From now on no more bs, from now on you are mine and mine alone (he could also add 'till death do us part knowing she kinda drams abt having this kind of relationship)", the when she agrees he lets her come while sharing a kiss full of love and tenderness lol.
THX
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