VN Ren'Py Completed Follow the Leader [v1.0] [SuperWriter]

[kshyk]

I like SuperWriter's games. But he needs to change something in his style. Every game of his is the same. It's like Bethesda all over again, when all Fallouts And Elder Scrolls are basically the same. In every game of his your destiny is to fuck this 3 or 4 girls. It's not gonna work for much longer.

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

I like SuperWriter's games. But he needs to change something in his style. Every game of his is the same. It's like Bethesda all over again, when all Fallouts And Elder Scrolls are basically the same. In every game of his your destiny is to fuck this 3 or 4 girls. It's not gonna work for much longer.

Lol the goal of all of these games is to bang hot girls. I don't think my fellow pervs will get tired of that.

 

[Canto Forte]

Babes to the left! Babes to the right! Babes all around - a happy place!

 

[delacroix2]

Normal names would probably also be much more inconspicuous on the run than numbers.
But why by the MC?
The women are free now.
He can imply it, but I don't think it would be fitting if the ladies didn't choose their own names.

It depends, they were artificially created recently, no one can choose their name, it' s an imposition by other people/(parents).

 

[EvolutionKills]

The future is silver onesie pajamas?

Thanks, I hate it.


But more seriously, this keeps getting painfully facepalm including. So the future has slavery, and the Baron is someone with enough power/influence/wealth to own slaves, a personal harem, security forces, bankroll black-market human cloning, and is comfortable murdering people himself (with an anachronistic as hell firearm) on his own property.

Why the fuck is he cloning if it is so illegal, that Eight's words alone will somehow be so damaging as to warrant her pre-emptive death?

/EDIT

Also, why kill her? He has ruthless personal security that are (presumably) in on the whole illegal slaves thing. Have them kill her. Or better yet, instead of wasting those resources, just have them help you rape her. Even if you did nothing else but hold her in confinement, there's zero reason to believe that he should be threatened AT ALL by Eight's empty words. She's a vat grown human with a few months under her belt that has trouble navigating her current circumstances. The Baron has all the power in this scenario. She poses no threat. His actions are stupidity squared.

/EDIT

It's already established that the Baron has the aforementioned power/influence/wealth, and slavery is a thing. Just get sex slaves. There is no reason to clone, especially if it really is such a career ending risk. When you already clearly have no compunctions about owning slaves, owning slaves is legal, and you can clearly afford more; just get sex slaves.

Why try to clone at all then? Well, to get something you couldn't otherwise get from slavery. Maybe you're into some real weird 'The Island of Dr. Moreau' shit and really want to fuck a nekomimi. Or you want a sex slave to be little more than a subservient husk, either especially trained to subsume their own personality, or perhaps even genetically modified to be more subserviently and pliable (maybe even doing away with that pesky thing called 'ego').

But that's evidently not the case here. They're all just run-of-the-mill hotties. Not only has their truncated indoctrination left them being very awkward from their lack of real world experience, but even this super-secret and highly controlled environment wasn't able to prevent one of them from independently discovering feminism and abolition?

What? How? Why?

What are you paying that doctor for? If the clones are in a 100% controlled environment, why weren't they indoctrinated to be subservient, willing, and happy in their role as property? Cause that's why you'd risk making a super-duper-turbo-illegal clone, so that you could get an unnaturally subservient sex-slave with no thought to their own independence or freedom.

For everything else, there are sex slaves.

It's just too stupid of a premise. Five minutes into it, and I'm constantly being yanked out of the experience.

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

The future is silver onesie pajamas?

Thanks, I hate it.


But more seriously, this keeps getting painfully facepalm including. So the future has slavery, and the Baron is someone with enough power/influence/wealth to own slaves, a personal harem, security forces, bankroll black-market human cloning, and is comfortable murdering people himself (with an anachronistic as hell firearm) on his own property.

Why the fuck is he cloning if it is so illegal, that Eight's words alone will somehow be so damaging as to warrant her pre-emptive death?

It's already established that the Baron has the aforementioned power/influence/wealth, and slavery is a thing. Just get sex slaves. There is no reason to clone, especially if it really is such a career ending risk. When you already clearly have no compunctions about owning slaves, owning slaves is legal, and you can clearly afford more; just get sex slaves.

Why try to clone at all then? Well, to get something you couldn't otherwise get from slavery. Maybe you're into some real weird 'The Island of Dr. Moreau' shit and really want to fuck a nekomimi. Or you want a sex slave to be little more than a subservient husk, either especially trained to subsume their own personality, or perhaps even genetically modified to be more subserviently and pliable (maybe even doing away with that pesky thing called 'ego').

But that's evidently not the case here. They're all just run-of-the-mill hotties. Not only has their truncated indoctrination left them being very awkward from their lack of real world experience, but even this super-secret and highly controlled environment wasn't able to prevent one of them from independently discovering feminism and abolition?

What? How? Why?

What are you paying that doctor for? If the clones are in a 100% controlled environment, why weren't they indoctrinated to be subservient, willing, and happy in their role as property? Cause that's why you'd risk making a super-duper-turbo-illegal clone, so that you could get an unnaturally subservient sex-slave with no thought to their own independence or freedom.

For everything else, there are sex slaves.

It's just too stupid of a premise. Five minutes into it, and I'm constantly being yanked out of the experience.

Why make clones instead of getting sex slaves? Because you can. Rather, the baron can. He is about having power, so literally creating your own people definitely strokes that need to have power and exhibit it.

Sorry the premise wasn't to your liking, but thanks for checking the game out.

 

[Vrijgeest]

Pretty boring really...

 

[EvolutionKills]

Why make clones instead of getting sex slaves? Because you can. Rather, the baron can. He is about having power, so literally creating your own people definitely strokes that need to have power and exhibit it.

Sorry the premise wasn't to your liking, but thanks for checking the game out.

So, did he purposely opt for the 'Horrible Third Wave Feminism Indoctrination Package', or was that an accident?

Perhaps even he could not afford for all of his super-duper-turbo-illegal vat grown humans to be sufficiently subservient?

Did he forget to put a password on the wifi, so that even his own sex slaves could live-stream his illegal actions?

Are his personal Brute Squad of security forces not allowed to hit ladies or something?


Did he just conveniently forget that he has all of the power in this situation?


No, he just 'likes power', but not enough to opt for clones that will actually put out for him.


I get it, you don't have actual answers, cause they aren't important to you. You had a premise you wanted to explore (sexy harem clones), and you needed an inciting incident (nonsensical attempted murder) to bring the main cast together. In doing so you probably worked backwards from the endpoint you wanted, creating reasons for X to do Y, until you got back to your starting point; with no real care for the Gordian Knot of contradictory and nonsensical premises that you laid down in order to get the plot from A to B to C and onward.

Eight doesn't act the way she does because it makes any lick of sense, but rather because that's the personality trope you wanted her to have. This is almost certainly because you imagined her and her role in the harem long before you got around to fleshing out the rest of the world surrounding her; and it shows.

So yeah, internal coherency, not your strong point it seems. Kind of a shame really, I liked Picture Perfect well enough. You can do decent enough dialogue, but world building is just not your thing.

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

So, did he purposely opt for the 'Horrible Third Wave Feminism Indoctrination Package', or was that an accident?

Perhaps even he could not afford for all of his super-duper-turbo-illegal vat grown humans to be sufficiently subservient?

Did he forget to put a password on the wifi, so that even his own sex slaves could live-stream his illegal actions?

Are his personal Brute Squad of security forces not allowed to hit ladies or something?


Did he just conveniently forget that he has all of the power in this situation?


No, he just 'likes power', but not enough to opt for clones that will actually put out for him.


I get it, you don't have actual answers, cause they aren't important to you. You had a premise you wanted to explore (sexy harem clones), and you needed an inciting incident (nonsensical attempted murder) to bring the main cast together. In doing so you probably worked backwards from the endpoint you wanted, creating reasons for X to do Y, until you got back to your starting point; with no real care for the Gordian Knot of contradictory and nonsensical premises that you laid down in order to get the plot from A to B to C and onward.


So yeah, internal coherency, not your strong point it seems. Kind of a shame really, I liked Picture Perfect well enough. You can do decent enough dialogue, but world building is just not your thing.

It's not that I don't have answers for all of your questions and criticisms, it's the way you come off, which is pretty rude and I don't really feel like engaging with you.

Again, thanks for checking out the game and I hope you do find one that you enjoy.

 

[EvolutionKills]

It's not that I don't have answers for all of your questions and criticisms, it's the way you come off, which is pretty rude and I don't really feel like engaging with you.

Again, thanks for checking out the game and I hope you do find one that you enjoy.

Sure, whatever works for you. If experience here has taught me anything, you certainly don't need to be a good writer (let alone a Super Writer) to make a living making niche porn games on the internet. If your fans are happy with this nonsense, more power to you.

 

[Christ P Bacon]

hi'' , is this romance vanilla game or can we have dom/sub relationship with LI's?

 

[dumbass55]

Thieves out here stealing perfectly crafted sluts smh. Get a job you bums!

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

hi'' , is this romance vanilla game or can we have dom/sub relationship with LI's?

Hey, thanks for the question. There will be no dom/sub content.

i was going to play this game until i found out the main character was black

There are tons of games in this community with mostly white men as the main, so I'm sure you won't have any trouble finding the type of guy you want. Happy hunting =]

 

[WuzzyFuzzy]

In my both playtrough i get this error:

Same here. No way forward.

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/U4.rpy", line 1753, in script
    jump U4scan
ScriptError: could not find label 'U4scan'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/U4.rpy", line 1753, in script
    jump U4scan
  File "...\FtL-0.4-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1697, in execute
    rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)
  File "...\FtL-0.4-pc\renpy\script.py", line 898, in lookup
    raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'U4scan'.

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.3.5.606
v0.4 0.4
Thu Jan 13 23:20:39 2022

 

[Ajghz]

Harem I'm in.

 

[Spatenklopper]

If experience here has taught me anything....

Too bad you haven't learned to frame "possibly" legitimate criticism in a way that's both helpful and non-offensive.
It's also a pity that you haven't learned to simply avoid games that you obviously don't like.

But what the heck.
As you said "more power to you", maybe you'll find your way someday.

 

[Spatenklopper]

....no one can choose their name, it' s an imposition by other people/(parents).

As you rightly said, they were created in a facility so there are no parents either.
And remember, although they were created, they are grown women.
They've just won (fight for) their freedom and independence (to some extent), so why should anyone else dictate to them again?
And of course they can choose their own name, don't forget none of them (including the MC) have any official papers.
They'll get them with the help of the Doc. And these "official" papers can also include the name they choose.

So i don't see a problem.

 

[delacroix2]

As you rightly said, they were created in a facility so there are no parents either.
And remember, although they were created, they are grown women.
They've just won (fight for) their freedom and independence (to some extent), so why should anyone else dictate to them again?
And of course they can choose their own name, don't forget none of them (including the MC) have any official papers.
They'll get them with the help of the Doc. And these "official" papers can also include the name they choose.

So i don't see a problem.

Well now I don't care how they get their name but that they have one.

 

[EvolutionKills]

Too bad you haven't learned to frame "possibly" legitimate criticism in a way that's both helpful and non-offensive.
It's also a pity that you haven't learned to simply avoid games that you obviously don't like.

But what the heck.
As you said "more power to you", maybe you'll find your way someday.

I've learned that this forum has no real tolerance for 'legitimate criticism'. So why put forth the effort to write up a few dozen paragraphs of in-depth critique, only to be met with either silence or indignation from creators, and a flurry of facepalm emojis from butt-hurt fans? So yeah, I'm not putting as much effort into being polite as I used to, cause folks here haven't been bothering to put in the effort either...

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

I've learned that this forum has no real tolerance for 'legitimate criticism'. So why put forth the effort to write up a few dozen paragraphs of in-depth critique, only to be met with either silence or indignation from creators, and a flurry of facepalm emojis from butt-hurt fans? So yeah, I'm not putting as much effort into being polite as I used to, cause folks here haven't been bothering to put in the effort either...

I've had bad experiences on here from users trolling or just being rude, but I don't think it would be fair to just automatically be rude to everyone else because I'm fed up.

I'm in this thread to answer any questions and listen to constructive criticism. I have taken ideas and feedback from you guys and implemenetrd them in my game, like Anoushka becoming a love interest instead of a side character.

Or changing an option where you could only sleep with Anoushka if you stopped Nine.

So, I will absolutely listen to everything you have to say, let's just please be respectful to one another as human beings.