For a slight change of pace from the... slew of non-specific complaining...
Visiting Linda before things 'go anywhere' doesn't seem to work as it 'should'; while she's supposed to give pills and lube for 'later', the first opportunity to use the lube (with Ann) ignores it while referencing it should have been used, and the later special drinks claim "you are missing something."
... I said this literal moments before the actual scene where the mentioned pills were found on the balcony. So no clue what the heck the first pills and lube are meant for. (shrug)
Also typo things like... an hour later or so (hopefully to be fixed by the time of actually including this part); at the very start, Christie (or however it's spelled) repeatedly has the namecard "Debbie" for her dialogue before Debbie even shows up, and 3 steps into Debbie's pool stuff, suddenly she's Melinda when telling you "I'm waiting for an answer."