Renders are average but the script really needs a better writer.
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the writing is so atrocious: barely any punctuation, bad spelling an just plain confusing.
the author should get a proof-reader, or if that is to expensive, you can always get Grammarly. which is not as good, but is totally free.
the author should get a proof-reader, or if that is to expensive, you can always get Grammarly. which is not as good, but is totally free.
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Came here just to watch uptight Europeans lose their ***kin minds over the name. LoL!
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Somewhat interesting - really like Emma but with all the other girls just throwing themselves at the MC - I wonder if there is any room for real romance and not the starstruck money purchased type so prevalent in these games
Anyway I hope there is room for simple romance with Emma, the rest can sit at the sidelines
Anyway I hope there is room for simple romance with Emma, the rest can sit at the sidelines
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I'm from Europe too but I believe the name should correspond to place of action - how the sport is named there. If the action takes place in US, it's hard to expect the characters to name it football, it would be unrealistic.
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Way way way WAY WAY WAAAAAAAAAY way way way Waaaaaaaaaaaaay to long of a opening monologue story set up.. it needs condensing or at least adding some other images in there to fill the boredom of that sunset/rise while endlessly reading all that opening.. I dont doubt you have a good story to tell but that was just way to long and boring of a click fest to go through.. as i said it needs some visual story telling to fill the long set up or condense the backstory to the important need to know elements.. some of all that backstory you can divulge via the mc during his conversations with the other characters or in his own inner monologue thoughts.. theres no need to have all tht at an intro.. most will click close before they even get to the story
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Huge game full of pointless dialogue and overdramatic characters - barely anything lewd. The English also sucks.
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Very good analysis, and I'm with you about the main issue: MC has no fu*king choice with Emma! "Look MC, Emma is now your new official girlfriend, no choice, you just met her and you can't fool around with any other girl, live with it!".
And no choice with Katie either, you can't reject her, she is also your "mum" now.
The lack of choices in this VN is a big issue right now. I don't know where this is going but apparently the MC will not stay with Emma (Beth seems to know something about her and we also know that Emma hides something from her past).
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Football star [v0.1] [Space Gaming]
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