VN Ren'Py Football Star [Ch. 1.5] [Space Gaming]

[Gojii]

I think the dev needs to change it back and give everyone the middle finger.

Half our country is morbidly obese and we still roll everyone in most sports and give a fight in ones our 5th rate athletes play like soccer. England can't even win against the USMNT clownshow. Nothing makes a European seethe more than calling soccer soccer when the English called it that to differ from some mediocre precursor to rugby that used to be popular centuries ago. Its hilarious.

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[PatreonTed]

And if it wasn't for that, your 'football' would actually be a decent sport, as opposed to armoured rugby for pussies.

As someone who has played both football and rugby, you're way off base.

And news flash for others, different places in the world have different names for things, get over it.

 

[Bucketbot89]

So is this just WVM with soccer/futbol instead of basketball (minus the duckface)?

 

[PopPop63]

So is this just WVM with soccer/futbol instead of basketball (minus the duckface)?

sorta kinda but not really

 

[Jimayo]

I was at a fight one night when a hokey game broke out ...

Unfortunately that joke doesn't work as well ever since the instigator penalty. Fighting is down and injuries are up(turns out getting your face beaten to a bloody pulp is way more of a deterrent than a penalty or a suspension).

 

[FirminoisGod]

I'd rather watch baseball than soccer and I'd rather watch paint dry than baseball.

Ehh I can only watch playoff baseball, maybe bc I was scared of the ball growing up lol

 

[Kassan06969]

I'd rather watch baseball than soccer and I'd rather watch paint dry than baseball.

It's not a TV friendly game - too slow. Baseball is good if you watch from the stands and also to listen to on the radio while doing other things. And checking mlb.com every so often.

 

[Call of Booty]

Omg,that was better english? Uff,my brain hurts.
Ask proof-readers for money back,man...

 

[John3910]

Hope this one actually focuses on the sports aspect instead of having weird family backstories.

 

[Call of Booty]

I'm European and big fan of American football. Why you guys call it football when foot is not involved unless u r kicker or punter? Not trying to say which football is 'pure' one,just innocent question.

 

[Skylaroo]

Game is pretty good. Broken English here and there, but minor enough (ex: lack of punctuation, "must of" instead of "must have", etc) that we can still understand everything. Story seems unclear for now since it's pretty much just a sizeable introduction, but I quite like most of the girls. Looking forward to see where it goes from here.

 

[Gojii]

I'm European and big fan of American football. Why you guys call it football when foot is not involved unless u r kicker or punter? Not trying to say which football is 'pure' one,just innocent question.

The forward pass is a change made a century ago to a canadian/british version of rugby that got popular in the US... Again.... blame Anglos for why its called football. We just didn't change the naming conventions for soccer (a shorthand for as-soc-iation the English used to differ from a rugby variant that was popular 200 years ago.) Blame Canada, everything's gone wrong since they came along. Can't pile on the US for not rebranding something that was called it when it came here and you all changed your minds.

 

[ktunga]

unless the guy is like messi ......he look like a simp already ,.and i dont talking about his behavior .im talking about his phisycal type....and the dev portraing him....look soccer or football isnt like american football you dont see 250lbs guys running around ,maybe just maybe someone like 185 to 190lbs and still is alot but the height is too important no mather wich position you play ,isnt normal too see a 5,3 or 5,4 ft guy in the sidelines but isnt the medium average of a team i would say 5,7ft to 6,1 its the average [this guys is looking too small for to be a "star?\
sorry american friends but a star in soccer isnt someone who plays in the defense or a goalkepeer ofc there are many exceptions but if you chek over the last century nto only 2 or 3 of the best 20 best players in story are or where defenders or even midfielders [i dont talking about attacking midfielders]so first off the mc is a simp for a star player .when he was hugging his mom he was like 2 to 3 inches less than her and that only make me crynge ,the same with the girlsi know all of them are using hells but bro unless they are all supermodels you dont see those types [all of them]in any campus[they all look good but non of them my type]there are skinny for my taste\]
i really liked the game but there are many mistakes to not see .....if you are prepering for the best time of your life you dont take the shit in a serious way? you need to ddring your ass of to be another another drunk asshole?
if you want to be a professional in soceer/football you dont even drink in postseason less you do before the season start,.i dont know who do dev the story but too many loopholes here and there too many for be a complete good vn right now its a 2/10 and only bcs mc isnt another chad.....
p.s: too many sideline stories to remember ,too much noise filling up the important.....before someone says i played professionnal soccer and i love american football [i think its the best show on earth]

 

[Jimayo]

It's not a TV friendly game - too slow. Baseball is good if you watch from the stands and also to listen to on the radio while doing other things. And checking mlb.com every so often.

I used to follow it. And I'll likely watch the athletic's if they make the playoffs but other than that, it's fucking boring to watch. A lot of sports are though. At least they're fun to play. Even golf and curling are fun to play.

 

[Jimayo]

Ehh I can only watch playoff baseball, maybe bc I was scared of the ball growing up lol

Could be that it's fucking boring to watch. At least half your time is spent waiting for them to actually play the game.

 

[korochan48]

You really need a proof reader it is really hard to understand some dialogue specially for me who is not local speaker in English. If you got no bucks to spend on them try chatgpt cause I tried to improve your dialogue in it and the results are good.

 

[Skylaroo]

unless the guy is like messi ......he look like a simp already ,.and i dont talking about his behavior .im talking about his phisycal type....and the dev portraing him....look soccer or football isnt like american football you dont see 250lbs guys running around ,maybe just maybe someone like 185 to 190lbs and still is alot but the height is too important no mather wich position you play ,isnt normal too see a 5,3 or 5,4 ft guy in the sidelines but isnt the medium average of a team i would say 5,7ft to 6,1 its the average [this guys is looking too small for to be a "star?\
sorry american friends but a star in soccer isnt someone who plays in the defense or a goalkepeer ofc there are many exceptions but if you chek over the last century nto only 2 or 3 of the best 20 best players in story are or where defenders or even midfielders [i dont talking about attacking midfielders]so first off the mc is a simp for a star player .when he was hugging his mom he was like 2 to 3 inches less than her and that only make me crynge ,the same with the girlsi know all of them are using hells but bro unless they are all supermodels you dont see those types [all of them]in any campus[they all look good but non of them my type]there are skinny for my taste\]
i really liked the game but there are many mistakes to not see .....if you are prepering for the best time of your life you dont take the shit in a serious way? you need to ddring your ass of to be another another drunk asshole?
if you want to be a professional in soceer/football you dont even drink in postseason less you do before the season start,.i dont know who do dev the story but too many loopholes here and there too many for be a complete good vn right now its a 2/10 and only bcs mc isnt another chad.....
p.s: too many sideline stories to remember ,too much noise filling up the important.....before someone says i played professionnal soccer and i love american football [i think its the best show on earth]

Mate, it's a porn game, not a football simulator.

 

[boobsrcool]

You really need a proof reader it is really hard to understand some dialogue specially for me who is not local speaker in English. If you got no bucks to spend on them try chatgpt cause I tried to improve your dialogue in it and the results are good.

I thought the dialogue was fine and I speak english I don't think using a robot would help

 

[FirminoisGod]

Could be that it's fucking boring to watch. At least half your time is spent waiting for them to actually play the game.

From what I heard, the Japanese baseball league is much better then the MLB, better crowds, better atmosphere, arguably better players then the MLB. Still won't convince me to watch tho

 

[Jimayo]

From what I heard, the Japanese baseball league is much better then the MLB, better crowds, better atmosphere, arguably better players then the MLB. Still won't convince me to watch tho

Regardless of if that's true or not it would still have the problem of a lot of dead time.