Ren'Py Abandoned Forest Rhapsody [v0.1] [GSGC and Johnny Doe]

[TiffanyMonroe]

This game is fully based on Lust Epidemic, it feels like one of those alternate universe series, same mechanics, similar characters, slightly different setting/story, it, however, presents some kind of mystery, but feels kind of bland.

It has potential for improvement, the renders are actually pretty good, Nun is the best.

Jesus: "How did this nun become pregnant?"

Spoiler: How did this nun become pregnant?

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God dammit. I knew this was too good to be true. This generic ass mc really makes me miss Max

 

[PhineasFlynn]

My casual opinion, first what I dislike:
1. Its regret you make RNP, RPGM version looks great and has more adventure potential.
2. I preferred the original names of the girls, but its about habit. Dick sound great for this dick.
3. I miss some gallery, and some message about and of update.
4. I really miss this nasty photos from first version.
What I like:
I really like renders and story. Story looks less depressive in this moment, but its look more believably than RPGM version.

Thank You!
I wanted MC to have a somewhat relatable personality, also your choices in future will shape him even further (Heroic, Corrupted etc)
As for the exploration part, we plan to add some sort of journal with your quests and the "progress so far"

I hope you know what you're getting into so that this way doesn't grow over your head.

I found a few mistakes:
When talking to George, there's once a misused name. Something like: George: "My name is MC"
There funny typing error with Sandra's HJ, she say: "Your white Scream"
On Pool floor in corridor there is sign, but its mirror image.
And when Tanya go out with Dick, from pool, she is still at bar and waiting for you, the same with Sandra after HJ. It would be better if they disappeared temporarily.

Don't take it as an insult, but rather my opinion and the effort to help.
I'm a big fan of you and I'm looking forward to the next update.

 

[Bailz]

The game will be proper harem(if you decide it) and not another polyamory disguised as harem.

holy fuck a dev that understands the difference best of luck with this, im gonna give it a try

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

The game has potential, however, it needs polishing, grammar, more MC direction. Renders a great, the art is great.
Dialogue is confusing. The desk clerk says the hotel is full but then says it's the down season (etc.)
I am seeing more Games like this where the art and renders are great to amazing and the script is not up to the art.
It does have a resemblance to Lust Epidemic, but more like an Agatha Christie mystery. I think the butt-ler did it

 

[BaasB]

Goddamn Welcome in my Top5 of games

 

[jimbobdon]

the locker room, check all the lockers on your left.

thanks got it

 

[xxTHESTYGIANxx]

Stuck after Dick takes Tanya away. Is that it or where do you go next

 

[dan9000]

it looks nice but i felt lost all the game, didnt know where i should go or if i already got everything, a quest log would be nice

 

[driverman]

The android version doesn't work for me. I am with Huawei P40 pro

 

[seekin4porn]

Stuck after Dick takes Tanya away. Is that it or where do you go next

Did you peep on your secretary in the bathroom?

 

[xxTHESTYGIANxx]

Did you peep on your secretary in the bathroom?

yes, got that the HJ and dick pulling Tanya away

 

[seekin4porn]

yes, got that the HJ and dick pulling Tanya away

That's all for now

 

[Odin73]

I found 2 errors in the game. Sorry I was spending quality time reading and observe the game. This game is amazing and wowed me. Very good job Johnny.

Error #1 - During conversation with George, MC told his name but the name show it is George still speaking.
Error #2 - During conversation between Dick and Sandra, Sandra said sorry and it wont happen again but the name show it is Dick still speaking

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

When a char refers to themselves, it should be 'I' not 'i'. Not criticizing, just pointing it out.

Edit:

Plus this mishap. lol

 

[Forsaken08]

Release was in november, so when 0.2 or after renpy will unity version?

 

[Odin73]

When a char refers to themselves, it should be 'I' not 'i'. Not criticizing, just pointing it out.

Edit:

Plus this mishap. lol

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This is what I talk about and yes I forgot to add about 'I", thanks

 

[Vibescu]

I can't wait to see more content from Lily, it drives me crazy.

 

[Odin73]

I can't wait to see more content from Lily, it drives me crazy.

For me its Valeria. She seem so interesting.

 

[Odin73]

Well, don't let the great visuals "deceive" you. My partner is new at this and the game is still a 0.1, so you can't expect too much for now.



Ohhh you will see something in 0.1, Eternal Rhapsody ain't blue ballz city.


0.1 will serve as mini introduction to the plot and characters and will showcase our capabilities, sadly it's not as big as we wanted due to the transition from RPGM to RENPY. It's gonna be lighthearted and will ease players into the game, as i don't wanna offer cheap thrills from the very first version. 0.2 is where the things will get dark and serious again...

You werent lying about content. Lily fingering and Sandra giving MC handjob. Good anime, good job. I felt like you used to work for NLT Media because you know what you are doing.

 

[PhineasFlynn]

For me its Valeria. She seem so interesting.

For me Mercedes, she looks little bit like young version of Jenet from ToN.
And Sandra, I don't like redhed, but she is hot.