I made a Linux version, but also found lots of bad writings (e.g. is it ground floor or first floor? How do you count?), bad set spaces, etc.
I live often in hotels because of working life, but when I enter one, I don't run around to greet everybody, that's senseless. And why has everybody problems and MC should solve this without knowing him? And why is a key present in the loo which was just before not present?
And why there are nude pictures of a girl, which came together with MC, somewhere on the floor?
I don't find the sense in the beginning.
NT (nice try), but rethink your story.