VN Ren'Py Abandoned Forever My Girl [Ch.2 v0.50] [HappyMo]

2.00 star(s) 14 Votes

BTLD

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Sep 18, 2017
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I'm sorry if it bothered you, I'd like to please everyone, but I have no chance on doing that:cry:
don't worry about it
at the end it's just a opinion
and it's your VN , do it as you want to do it
I don't agree with it but that doesn't mean I need to agree :p
I know I don't want to see a LI getting raped or almost raped so I'll probably pass on this VN but best of luck with it :)
also thanks for the kind words :)
 

paust.alex

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Apr 15, 2018
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or even better kill him
Well, that surfer is also her ex-boyfriend, by the way. And I think since there are choices in the game that "reduce" some "relationship" stats, it's likely that she can forgive him and continue to date him behind MC's back. So I wouldn't get my hopes up that we'd be given the opportunity to kill him. I think she's already done everything but have sex with him, since the fingers near her pussy didn't embarrass her in the slightest.
Having an ex-boyfriend isn't necessary at all, such a young girl might not have any ex-boyfriends.
 

baka

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Oct 13, 2016
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stop harassing the dev, let him do whatever he wants.
I would find this game boring if theres just father and daughter. if theres someone else that we need to deal with that could create som drama and spicy scenes. I hope that fucker returns, not because I want to see rape, but Im tired of another father & daughter game with a scared dev that doesn't dare to do anything because we have the anti-ntr mob that complains and cries like babies.
 

HansDampf788

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I like the daughter's model, but the MC looks bad. Even for a demo, it's too short, the writing is bad, and opening a romance game with attempted rape is a bad idea.

There are 9 preview pictures in the OP but only 4 of them are in the game, a bit of false advertising.

It's too early to write a review but currently is 1 star.

Also, why go to Patreon if you clearly want to make an incest game?
 

Chimba

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Mar 6, 2020
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don't worry about it
at the end it's just a opinion
and it's your VN , do it as you want to do it
I don't agree with it but that doesn't mean I need to agree :p
I know I don't want to see a LI getting raped or almost raped so I'll probably pass on this VN but best of luck with it :)
also thanks for the kind words :)

I just tried it, it's short and you can avoid seeing the scene, the daughter tells the father why she broke up with her boyfriend and you can choose whether to watch the scene or not, the scene shows more in detail what happened, but before the scene the daughter already tells him why she separated, so you don't need to see the scene.


The rest of the game will be better and without rape, I promise !!!
Not bad for a demo, maybe some more work in writing is necessary (English is not my native language, maybe it's just me but it seems strange to me that the father in every sentence calls her "My dear") and when the mc It is presented, maybe change that sentence a little, if it is a relationship of love and intimacy but it is presented "Hi, I'm Michael and I'm going to tell you how I corrupted my daughter to love me" (I think it contradicts what the idea is, maybe only for me it looks that way)

I don't know if your idea is to make a perverted Mc, but when the daughter is telling him the situation or moment that she had to go through and the MC begins to imagine the daughter naked, instead of paying attention ... it's weird.

It is only an opinion and criticism. I am not saying that it is wrong, it is your story, do what you want.

Good luck Dev.
 
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