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As others have said, you do yourself and your potential fans a disservice by not being upfront about the kinks and fetishes you will be using in your game.
- May 29, 2018
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Can we brutally murder the surfer? If no, then this game is a hard nope.
Or even better since the surfer looks like a twink let us rape him.
- Dec 24, 2019
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In addition to what others have said, the MC's name can't be changed [not a big deal for me, but a lot of people prefer it] and also;
He's pretty creepy as is and even worse with no eye-brows while also having a boy-band haircut.
Another common problem is you typing "Omg", it might make sense if the MC was a 13yo girl who was actually saying the acronym "OMG" out-loud but outside of that it doesn't make sense, just type all 3 words in full, as a normal person would say them.
The same thing applies to typing "HEHEHEHE", if the MC was Michael Jackson and was actually making that noise then fine, but he isn't, so use *laugh* or *giggle* or *chuckle*, you can use italics as well as a colour change to help delineate speech, thoughts and actions but the main point is something that isn't just "HEHEHEHE" in the middle of a sentence, while also using font size to help convey the 'volume' or 'vigor' of the thought or action.
Oh and you don't have to use just a plain astrix either, you can use other symbols such as ♪ or ♫ to help convey sounds if you'd prefer. [alt-13 and alt-14 for those 2 btw]
He's pretty creepy as is and even worse with no eye-brows while also having a boy-band haircut.
Another common problem is you typing "Omg", it might make sense if the MC was a 13yo girl who was actually saying the acronym "OMG" out-loud but outside of that it doesn't make sense, just type all 3 words in full, as a normal person would say them.
The same thing applies to typing "HEHEHEHE", if the MC was Michael Jackson and was actually making that noise then fine, but he isn't, so use *laugh* or *giggle* or *chuckle*, you can use italics as well as a colour change to help delineate speech, thoughts and actions but the main point is something that isn't just "HEHEHEHE" in the middle of a sentence, while also using font size to help convey the 'volume' or 'vigor' of the thought or action.
Oh and you don't have to use just a plain astrix either, you can use other symbols such as ♪ or ♫ to help convey sounds if you'd prefer. [alt-13 and alt-14 for those 2 btw]
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i sayI know it could be a spoiler for your story, but when you say "he Will return" is it to be an antagonist or is it for the MC to beat him up and leave him in a coma?
I really appreciate your comment. Thank youMake the game you want to make, just don't try to please everyone; by doing that you'll make no one happy. Stick to one theme and commit to it, make some good renders, add something unique to set your story and characters apart from the rest, and you'll find your fans/supporters. Listening to fans and potential supporters is good, but don't bend over backwards to cater to the masses, tell the story you want to tell. Wish you the best of luck!
- Dec 24, 2019
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another thing;
MC isn't wearing swim-wear there, those are just underwear.
Pretty strange thing to do for a grown man on a beach.
MC isn't wearing swim-wear there, those are just underwear.
Pretty strange thing to do for a grown man on a beach.
- Mar 10, 2019
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Glad i read the comments before trying the game for myself,hard pass on this one especially since the dev is being shady and keeping people in the dark regarding future tags.
- Apr 29, 2018
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What do you mean by hard pass? You won't check the thread ever again even if the game turned out to be amazing?
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hard pass as i wont try the game,i will watch the thread for a while to see if anything changes story,gameplay,dev's attitude etc but usually it never does.
I hope you realize in hindsight that your post was kind of pointless
- May 9, 2018
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As BTLD said you're not answering the question asked with a cagey answer like that.
And as said bellow
Seriously, make the game you want with the kinks and story you want fuck anyone who tries to bully you to change it, but at the very least do yourself and everyone else a favour and be open and honest about the kinks you want.
It already seems like you either don't know what audience to target or you're trying to mix two that don't mix well. Most people who like Romance don't like rape or harassment and the inverse is true too. Not every case, but by and large.
Many players won't waste their time even trying it and getting invested if you're not clear and certainly won't put a cent towards it without some knowledge upfront.
When a dev says something like trust me, or it will spoil the plot, or it will turn out fine, either means they have no idea what's going to happen or worse they know and want to trick half the audience into playing their game.
Again I say, make what you want and stick to it, but be upfront about it.
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Just for the sake of being open about it, from his patreon (it doesn't mean anything, nor am i trying to insinuate anything, it's just a big ?):
There will be more character's in the game and a lot of sex scenes with almost all of them, with lesbian sex, threesome and other couples.
The renders looks good, female models are good, i'll wait a few updates to see where dev's going with story and kinks. Good luck.
There will be more character's in the game and a lot of sex scenes with almost all of them, with lesbian sex, threesome and other couples.
The renders looks good, female models are good, i'll wait a few updates to see where dev's going with story and kinks. Good luck.
Once again I read a thread and feel sorry for the developer.
People could just move on to something they do like, but at this point I think harassing delelopers might actually be a kink.
People could just move on to something they do like, but at this point I think harassing delelopers might actually be a kink.
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Unfortunately, at the current point I also have to pass.
If the story turns out to be something beautifull , I'll have another look.
I will watch and wait.
If the story turns out to be something beautifull , I'll have another look.
I will watch and wait.
All you guys popping up in various threads asking about pregnancy, what is it you are hoping for exactly?
1. Sex with pregnant women
or
2. Just the fact that the LI got pregnant, a sort of prologue when the game is completed
1. Sex with pregnant women
or
2. Just the fact that the LI got pregnant, a sort of prologue when the game is completed
First page of comments turned me off to this one. Seems like NTR and Rapey. Perhaps some clarification.
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I don't get comments like this, you try a game out and the description says one thing, but the story itself is a whole other animal leaving players with question marks. Devs all the time ask players for feedback but then when it's not the feedback they wanna hear it's harassment? So in other words play the game and smile or go right?