Maybe I've missed something but I'm asking myself why Alice and MC are not moving in together and share the rent?
Would have been the obvious choice for me. It's not like they haven't lived together before. Weird decision.
Or maybe that part is beeing saved for the Alice ending
Same.
I haven't followed this game before and I don't know if there is more content planned or it's just the endings now. My comments below might be bit on the harsher side of critisim I've had against a game and it's not to say I didn't like it or thought the game is bad. I've really enjoyed it right up to the point of moving out and then is crashed.
I very seldom call out or think poorly of plots or plot holes in porn games, and probably never publicly done so, but I really think the moving out plot was lame. I mean Alice and the MC are in love and really they're just going to move to separate places? They could have moved to the aunt and kept her in the story, but she seems to be cut out.
They could have moved together, I mean they'd been living together for the last year, it wouldn't be hard or unreasonable to convince the parents that it's not a bad idea. Hell if they where willing to give her the money, no reason it couldn't be for both of them to get a place together when they obviously get along and have done well in the last year, from the parent's perspective of them just being step-siblings. Honestly it just felt like lazy writing to me, to get to ending choices. Like "I have no idea where to go next, I'll just force them to move out to separate places and cut to the endings".
What about Leah's story or Karina's story? Honestly there shouldn't even be a possibility of an ending for those two with they way it's gone down. Sure they where fooling around, but take Leah, they're hooking up and the months after the 3 some (if you had it) she gets him to pretend they're a couple for the parents and that's only the 1st or 2nd time they shag based on your choices. Karina is even worse plot wise. And what is strange for me, given my preference for petite girls over curvy and man Alice is curvy but in the best possible way, I really disliked Karina as a love interest. I loved the seemingly innocence of her, and first party where you meet her and she starts stripping and gets stuck, I laughed hard at that for a good few minutes "Go east", but honestly she ruined it for me when she joined the beach vacation.
Mel and Alice are really only realistic options.
I'd also like to have seen some redemption for Susan, mainly because she's potentially the hottest most attractive of all the models for me. Only Alice would beat her for me and even then it's 50/50. I know plot wise it would be hard to redeem her, but if we're buying that moving out and separate living thing, it would be just as believable for her to apologize and try make amends with the girls so she can get with the MC. Hell I find the thought of her apologizing to the girls, especially Leah for everything she's done, thanking them for getting her fired as it was the wake up she needed and helped her get her life in order and admitting to be willing to do anything she has to, to earn their forgiveness more plausible than the moving out.
There has been some really great writing in this and some good humor. I really love Mel, from the first pic in the start to the way she always pushed the MC to go further and wilder, I honestly felt like she was the catalyst for the whole story and the way things went down. Without her, I think this would have been another average MC failing for his sister type incest game, with a few other chicks thrown in as eye candy.
Sorry for the rant, it's a great game, I'm just dissapointed in the ending.