Balpheron

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Love this title. The plot is plain, but it has actual development and the various characters actually grow and are not static or just reacting. The writer of this piece has some skill I must admit. Would love to see the individual put more oomph into a different project and totally allow them to unfold their creativty.
That said, kinda slow releases. I'm digging the story, but we really need to bring this game's development speed up. What's it gonna take? More money?
 

GV3001

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Started laughing when I first saw the MC's bedroom and saw Black Sabbath on the wall. Now i wonder if the creator randomly used it or also likes JoJo
 

Spfjolietjake

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Spoilish but its been out so long...
I'm so late in playing this vn but omg I'm at the point where Leah sends her lil sis to play as the mc's girlfriend and I can't stop fucking laughing. So enjoying this one hope its gets completed. Best of luck. :)
 

Naxos

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Maybe I've missed something but I'm asking myself why Alice and MC are not moving in together and share the rent?
Would have been the obvious choice for me. It's not like they haven't lived together before. Weird decision.
Or maybe that part is beeing saved for the Alice ending :unsure:
Same.

I haven't followed this game before and I don't know if there is more content planned or it's just the endings now. My comments below might be bit on the harsher side of critisim I've had against a game and it's not to say I didn't like it or thought the game is bad. I've really enjoyed it right up to the point of moving out and then is crashed.

I very seldom call out or think poorly of plots or plot holes in porn games, and probably never publicly done so, but I really think the moving out plot was lame. I mean Alice and the MC are in love and really they're just going to move to separate places? They could have moved to the aunt and kept her in the story, but she seems to be cut out.
They could have moved together, I mean they'd been living together for the last year, it wouldn't be hard or unreasonable to convince the parents that it's not a bad idea. Hell if they where willing to give her the money, no reason it couldn't be for both of them to get a place together when they obviously get along and have done well in the last year, from the parent's perspective of them just being step-siblings. Honestly it just felt like lazy writing to me, to get to ending choices. Like "I have no idea where to go next, I'll just force them to move out to separate places and cut to the endings".

What about Leah's story or Karina's story? Honestly there shouldn't even be a possibility of an ending for those two with they way it's gone down. Sure they where fooling around, but take Leah, they're hooking up and the months after the 3 some (if you had it) she gets him to pretend they're a couple for the parents and that's only the 1st or 2nd time they shag based on your choices. Karina is even worse plot wise. And what is strange for me, given my preference for petite girls over curvy and man Alice is curvy but in the best possible way, I really disliked Karina as a love interest. I loved the seemingly innocence of her, and first party where you meet her and she starts stripping and gets stuck, I laughed hard at that for a good few minutes "Go east", but honestly she ruined it for me when she joined the beach vacation.

Mel and Alice are really only realistic options.

I'd also like to have seen some redemption for Susan, mainly because she's potentially the hottest most attractive of all the models for me. Only Alice would beat her for me and even then it's 50/50. I know plot wise it would be hard to redeem her, but if we're buying that moving out and separate living thing, it would be just as believable for her to apologize and try make amends with the girls so she can get with the MC. Hell I find the thought of her apologizing to the girls, especially Leah for everything she's done, thanking them for getting her fired as it was the wake up she needed and helped her get her life in order and admitting to be willing to do anything she has to, to earn their forgiveness more plausible than the moving out.

There has been some really great writing in this and some good humor. I really love Mel, from the first pic in the start to the way she always pushed the MC to go further and wilder, I honestly felt like she was the catalyst for the whole story and the way things went down. Without her, I think this would have been another average MC failing for his sister type incest game, with a few other chicks thrown in as eye candy.

Sorry for the rant, it's a great game, I'm just dissapointed in the ending.
 
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HSHS1111

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I very seldom call out or think poorly of plots or plot holes in porn games, and probably never publicly done so, but I really think the moving out plot was lame. I mean Alice and the MC are in love and really they're just going to move to separate places?
Yes I think it's somewhat contrived as well. But on second thought I can see why they would do it. It's to put the game state in a neutral position to branch off into the different endings. Yes realistically there would be multiple other/better options for the character's depending on the relationship status but for the devs the earlier they start branching out the more work they have to tie each ending up. There's allredy plenty options to select from and many people on here are complaining that their favourite combination of girls aren't there. I'd rather they don't need years to finish this despite thinking it could have had some more content. Then we'll get to enjoy their next project earlier.
 
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Naxos

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Yes I think it's somewhat contrived as well. But on second thought I can see why they would do it. It's to put the game state in a neutral position to branch off into the different endings. Yes realistically there would be multiple other/better options for the character's depending on the relationship status but for the devs the earlier they start branching out the more work they have to tie each ending up. There's allredy plenty options to select from and many people on here are complaining that their favourite combination of girls aren't there. I'd rather they don't need years to finish this despite thinking it could have had some more content. Then we'll get to enjoy their next project earlier.
I see you point about putting it in a nice place for the ending and agree on that, though I still feel there is too much left out.

It would also be nice if we could select a combination of characters for the ending, but I know that would be a lot of work to cater of each possible combination, unless it was one generic ending based selecting some, with just the few different images, but then that would suck as well.
 

DA22

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I see you point about putting it in a nice place for the ending and agree on that, though I still feel there is too much left out.

It would also be nice if we could select a combination of characters for the ending, but I know that would be a lot of work to cater of each possible combination, unless it was one generic ending based selecting some, with just the few different images, but then that would suck as well.
Well based on the fact that each ending is bigger as a regular update we may hope that the endings themselves may also give some choices and the relations with the rest of the women or a few together, just with a focus around one girl and the ending canon for that choice. So an Alice ending could more go Alice alone, Alice with girls on the side or Alice/Haley focused with rest as friends for example.

Things like what MC does after being thrown out and what Alice does quite likely also changes per ending. Melody ending might well start with MC living above the coffee shop and Alice moving in with Leah, where Leah's parents would not accept MC in same apartment. Where an Alice ending would have them move into an apartment together just as an example or at Haley's.
 
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Spfjolietjake

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so I just finished the vn as it is now. It was a really fun and hot vn, until the end or the set up for the end.

You give the mc everything and then right before the end you split up the mc and the main li. Not only that but the endings are set up telling the mc's dad what happened.

Fuck his dad, such a stupid move. My mc wouldn't be telling him shit.

Hopefully the endings will actually be worth it. Cause at this point I had so much fun with this vn and then the last chapter was shit.

Was disappointed hailey was not one of the endings or hell even Susan. But I guess you can't have everything. Got my fingers crossed that the endings will be worth playing that last chapter. Thanks
 

lXenol

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if not in op nor search giving link then no, you can make request on proper thread (not this) to get this ported to android.
im not asking for a android port. im looking for it, coz other games have android port that aren't in page 1. thanks anyway.
 
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