- Feb 23, 2021
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Well Alice's ending is way better than the trainwreck that was Leahs but IMO it was still below Melody's. In some ways I feel like Alice is the author's canon ending (or maybe harem we will see but that seems unlikely given how independent Leah is) but Alice's ending still feels like things are left in the air.
With Melody there is a clear reason why each of the girls leave the poly relationship (Leah moving away Alice moving away and Melody becoming pregnant) and the MC grows up the most becoming successful themselves. In Alice's ending it doesn't make as much sense for them to break up the poly (in fact they remain poly just not with the main girls) and what the MC ends up doing as an author is cute but feels so much less definite.
For me its:
Melody
Karina
Alice
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Leah - not that I don't like Leah but her ending turns MC into a mega simp.
Kudos to the author for finishing the game. Sometimes games like this feel really rushed towards the end but the author has always had great pacing and his endings - though some are better then others - are a good length and really individualized to the girl.
One thing I noticed though is that in Alice's ending things with Melody end a lot sooner then with all the other girls endings. I think this is because canonically Melody would normally become pregnant and have her miscarriage pretty early on after the ending of the main game and It would feel really shitty for Melody to have to go through that alone so I think the author recognized that and made him break up with Melody sooner so she never gets pregnant. Or atl east thats how I saw it because that was always another one of my main gripes with the other non-melody endings.
With Melody there is a clear reason why each of the girls leave the poly relationship (Leah moving away Alice moving away and Melody becoming pregnant) and the MC grows up the most becoming successful themselves. In Alice's ending it doesn't make as much sense for them to break up the poly (in fact they remain poly just not with the main girls) and what the MC ends up doing as an author is cute but feels so much less definite.
For me its:
Melody
Karina
Alice
.
.
.
.
Leah - not that I don't like Leah but her ending turns MC into a mega simp.
Kudos to the author for finishing the game. Sometimes games like this feel really rushed towards the end but the author has always had great pacing and his endings - though some are better then others - are a good length and really individualized to the girl.
One thing I noticed though is that in Alice's ending things with Melody end a lot sooner then with all the other girls endings. I think this is because canonically Melody would normally become pregnant and have her miscarriage pretty early on after the ending of the main game and It would feel really shitty for Melody to have to go through that alone so I think the author recognized that and made him break up with Melody sooner so she never gets pregnant. Or atl east thats how I saw it because that was always another one of my main gripes with the other non-melody endings.