- Sep 20, 2018
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I don't agree that the world-building in this game is bland or nonsensical, but I do agree that Neon's wrong to mock the idea of the MC avoiding the drug den. The fact that it makes the story easier to write is NOT a justification for characters doing nonsensical things. The whole art of writing is creating plausible justifications for characters to act in ways that let the story proceed towards the desired end.unironically yes
you seem to be rattled that people arent praising your writing as the second coming of shakespeare. for some reason you seem really dismisive about making NOT WINNERS mcs and against "alpha males" but at the same time you wite your bad guy as a fucking rapist lmao. Brighton Empire is really all you hate about stories but it has something this game hasnt: a plausible world and internal consistency. you are writting a game about a suggar daddy without the benefits of being a sugar daddy your world-building is nonsensical and bland i dont know why are you so confrontational when people tell you they didnt like the forced risa content.
Neon took a shortcut to introduce this new plotline. Deriding people who point that out is a mistake.