One of the things that stuck out to me is that quite a lot of the sex scenes start with the girl just presenting herself and saying get some, basically. But if this is some matriarchal society where the women chase the guys, I would expect her to be taking the lead in sex as well. They'd be used to working hard to make the guy happy, because the guys have so many options.I enjoyed reading them all, and can use some of the feedback to make FwB even better.
So my recommendation is more sex scenes where the girl is on top, where she takes the lead, where she's more domineering. Maybe even the amazon position or other female-led positions. I don't mean straight up femdom, but you know. Just more assertive women in general after they get you to the bedroom.
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