Ren'Py Abandoned Galaxy [v1.4] [Viperr]

[anne O'nymous]

and sorry for my very very bad english.

Well, personally I can stand bad English, since it's the English I practiced most of my life. But when I see, more than once, "plut tard", it's harder to pass through it.
Oh, by the way, the English word for Jessica uniform is "bodysuit", not just "body" as in French.
For the rest, it's not a bad game, but I'm disappointed by the lack of variables. I feel a little cheated when I flatter a girl and only have few dialog lines as reward ; on another side, it also mean that I can act as a perfect jerk and still have all the pussies.

 

[professorx10]

Ok thought I"d put my 2c worth in as I just finished going through the game to the point of TBContiued… Wha'd I think? Well the translation made me laugh it was so rough. Looked like someone had put French through a computer translation program. Not laughing at the Dev, just the unintentional jokes... Good story, lots of characters and hot women. Not much optional paths but looks like a plot is developing. I agree, this is a great start and great use of 3D work. I loved the Animations. they added a lot. I liked the fact it wasn't just a Meet and Fuck game but had some depth. All in all, very impressive for a first try and I do look forward to seeing this developed. Oh, btw, no bugs that I could see. Cheers! Keep up the good work...

 

[viperr]

hi all,
i continue the work on the next episode.
to have a better version, if someone is interested to translate the game in english contact me in private.

 

[Flecc]

i am still working on translating engrish to English but 1.0a scuppered what i had done before and had to start again on 1.0a will do what i can with it but some of it so bad i don't understand where its going will clean it up best i can Due to rl this may take some time

 

[Deleted member 59977]

Is there any new content or is this just a patch to fix bugs?

 

[macadam]

if you ask for help to translate into english. i think its a good idea to mention your origin language..

that way, someone who talk your natve language AND a good english can translate correctly without risk of error.

i mean, some words can be very different translated in english if they come from french, spanish, russian or else.
and its also more easy to work together with the proofreader if you talk a common native langague.

just a hint

 

[User_23654]

Here is a compressed pc, mac and android version of v1.01!

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[bighunter]

what is new? or how much time to play with new update?

 

[viperr]

Hi all,
It's the new episode, i hope you will like.
Again sorry for my bad english ,i'm french.

 

[Hybris]

Solid story and text. The translation is far from the worst I have seen and never really posed a problem. Some of the animations are a bit rough but again this is far and above what is normal that its unreasonable to be too nit picky.

Good job all round and I hope to see more.

 

[I.W.]

I like this game and it's story. Someone who speaks French and English and can translate help them out. I've enjoyed reading this.

 

[Canto Forte]

It it simple. as you say:Esque vous aves l'oreil grand - Do you have the big ear? or Voules vous de la chocolat? - Do you want some chocolate? - as simple as that, you have to play the pronoun game and find a good fit for phrases you coin in any game, Good luck ... mes amis!

 

[ThunderRob]

"sorry commander i choke,i'm dying of hot"..WTF...ok..being Canadian i can fix some French-Canadian oopsies(unless you are France-French then i've no idea..your french is too classy ..HAHAAA)..not much..but a bit..as i'm 99.9999999999% English only..HAHAAA...but that line was really messed up..so how about "Commander(chokes on her words) i'm burning up here,i'm dying"

 

[ThunderRob]

this VN screams out for "choices" sighhh..i need to make decisions!!!

 

[Akumashe]

Its amusing that so far, the girl who "cant speak properly" found on Kepler, speaks better English than most of the crew...

 

[ZenGarden]

"Amiral" Davidson. Should've misspelled it as "Amoral" Davidson. That would've been funny.

 

[SaltySlim]

J'aime beaucoup cette histoire, la traduction pourrait être améliorée, mais elle est assez compréhensible.
Je suis excité de voir ce qui se passe

 

[Halfelf]

i just played this one for the first time and i have to say very nice i got to the end of current content and i was like what there has to be more. But alas i have to wait for the next update. The only thing that i didnt like was the bad translation and that wasnt to bad of a problem for me. So here i am waiting for the next update. *sigh*

 

[viperr]

hi all,
i work on the next episode... i hope you will like the surprise!!! but i dont tell more.

i still search for someone to translate from french to english.

 

[supermanz95]

hi all,
i work on the next episode... i hope you will like the surprise!!! but i dont tell more.

i still search for someone to translate from french to english.

Just leave the alien language as it is, it adds to the setting