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Ah, that's right. Look, I understand the rules on Patreon are scary, but....From the beginning the novel had the option to choose name and relationship with "Sidra"
Normally when you see that it means the writing is done in such a way as to support incest, but the relationship is selectable so that those who do not like incest can choose not to see it, but the story makes more sense (and is spicier) if the logical familial relationship is selected. F95 being F95, we don't have to dance around that.
Put it this way-- spicier sex aside, do the dialogue and the story make more sense or less sense if the two are sisters?
Everyone is scary because doing porn is like a "criminal act".
When I launched the game I didn't have Patreon... but since Subscribestar had no way to send the money to me, I had no choice.
https://f95zone.to/threads/give-me-a-sun-v0-4-5-namco15.127217/post-10758515
in the last update is more obvious that...
The story seems good but holy hell why use flashbacks like this. This litteraly gave me naruto 4th great ninja war tsukoyomi (dream) hs vibes lol. Meaning the flashback are soooo frkiiiing long... Might have as well started the story normally and letting some holes here and there to give it the "mysterious" vibe. Then filling them with flashbacks that would have completed previous scenes. Bc I won't lie at 1st I was like oh this is good, I like it, then comes the violent scene and after begins the torture, I'm like WTH is happenning lol.
Why is the pace and gestion of the thing so odd... I was even considering just dropping it. But then I remembered that there aren't many games with female protagonist who aren't married/have lesbian paths with potential great/original stories. So I kinda forced myself 'till I began to undestand the whole thing better. I won't lie, I think I can understand what the author wanted to do. It may be subjective, but I didn't like it (I don't even want to imagine how those who followed the game from the start felt lol), like I said I was at the brink of dropping it when it was getting better. Honestly, putting a flashback on a flashback,... + (I won't talk abt how the writing felt at 1st bc it's obvious, thx to whoever came in clutch) having the flashback lasts for soo long is tiring.
As a reader you are waiting for the main plot to advance but then you remember that you won't undestand much of it if you don't watch those damn flashbacks.
So yeah Namco I think you're just an a$$hole who like to make ppl suffer lol.
Anyways, now that I've emptied my bag. I have to say, I feel a lot better. Apart from all of what I said, the story seems intresting, the characters are good, the teasing is well done, the writing seems to get bett after 0.3... I have to say, I still don't have favorite/s. Idk why, it rarely happens to me but I didn't "vibe" with any of them lol. Usually I'm the type who love'em all lol
dev/s, I wish y'all the best,
THX
Why is the pace and gestion of the thing so odd... I was even considering just dropping it. But then I remembered that there aren't many games with female protagonist who aren't married/have lesbian paths with potential great/original stories. So I kinda forced myself 'till I began to undestand the whole thing better. I won't lie, I think I can understand what the author wanted to do. It may be subjective, but I didn't like it (I don't even want to imagine how those who followed the game from the start felt lol), like I said I was at the brink of dropping it when it was getting better. Honestly, putting a flashback on a flashback,... + (I won't talk abt how the writing felt at 1st bc it's obvious, thx to whoever came in clutch) having the flashback lasts for soo long is tiring.
As a reader you are waiting for the main plot to advance but then you remember that you won't undestand much of it if you don't watch those damn flashbacks.
So yeah Namco I think you're just an a$$hole who like to make ppl suffer lol.
Anyways, now that I've emptied my bag. I have to say, I feel a lot better. Apart from all of what I said, the story seems intresting, the characters are good, the teasing is well done, the writing seems to get bett after 0.3... I have to say, I still don't have favorite/s. Idk why, it rarely happens to me but I didn't "vibe" with any of them lol. Usually I'm the type who love'em all lol
dev/s, I wish y'all the best,
THX
I am sorry if I was not clear last time with my answer.
You can make all the fan art you want
, in the game in the About button I leave links with the name of the creators of the girls I use... just one click and it will open the page of the creator...
Reading I realized that I am missing
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Of course, some of them are edited with Photoshop, but they are small details. Additionally, since they are witches in the story, the body can change its musculature in an instant
, which provides a perfect excuse to have the body you want
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Disclaimer: I love this game!
There with that said and done...
The one single problem i have with, especially this last update, is the mixing of the original names and the chosen changed ones, even within the same sentence... Not a good idea to let you rename characters if their "original" names (Seems to be given "first" names only) keep being used willy nilly, even in the same sentence. I'm guessing it's links to the name change missing or forgotten to be implemented, and the original name simply used...
Or am I missing something here?
The broken English is much less of an issue^^ It isn't too bad at all, and no fluent reader would have problems understaning it or get thrown out of immersion, really, imho...
Good Job!!
There with that said and done...
The one single problem i have with, especially this last update, is the mixing of the original names and the chosen changed ones, even within the same sentence... Not a good idea to let you rename characters if their "original" names (Seems to be given "first" names only) keep being used willy nilly, even in the same sentence. I'm guessing it's links to the name change missing or forgotten to be implemented, and the original name simply used...
Or am I missing something here?
The broken English is much less of an issue^^ It isn't too bad at all, and no fluent reader would have problems understaning it or get thrown out of immersion, really, imho...
Good Job!!
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Yep - HiHaHo is quite right
If you type "compressed" into the search box right above and search "in this thread" you will find a link to this https://f95zone.to/threads/give-me-a-sun-v0-4-5-namco15.127217/post-12902869
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bruh stop enabling lazy people manYep - HiHaHo is quite right
If you type "compressed" into the search box right above and search "in this thread" you will find a link to this https://f95zone.to/threads/give-me-a-sun-v0-4-5-namco15.127217/post-12902869
(2 pages before)
only took me 30sec to find it
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Do you mind sharing what you use for the ears?I am sorry if I was not clear last time with my answer.
You can make all the fan art you want
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Reading I realized that I am missingYou must be registered to see the links
Of course, some of them are edited with Photoshop, but they are small details. Additionally, since they are witches in the story, the body can change its musculature in an instant
At the moment I'm trying to track down the assets used for the uniforms. And some of the locations.
Great that you liked itDisclaimer: I love this game!
I will check the names to find the mistakesThe characters already come with their respective ears, for example "Poppy" you search in the parameter window in Daz for "Poppy Ears"
Dione
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There is a link in the About button to the creator as well
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Locations:
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Hope that helps and good luck
Couple of wallpapers to send everyone on here some love this Valentines Day
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Namco15 awesome!
I don't even know where to start...I have no godamn clue what is going on (still rofl)....but godamn if this isn't an awesome story...and Celeste....man she crazy, especially when eating hahaha...stunning beauty.
So, a flashback within a flashback and then we're back to....nope...no idea. It's brilliant as always. I have one question though, will we need to replay this update when you complete Nashira part 2? Regardless, looking forward to one day being able to play this from start to finish properly, I'm sure it will be far less confusing then.
Take care.
As an edit, I would say the grammar has suffered more than previous updates? Even some of the girls names are incorrectly spelt at times. Maybe take a quick once over this before the next update. Is all perfectly understandable but the usual errors from a non-native English speaker.
I don't even know where to start...I have no godamn clue what is going on (still rofl)....but godamn if this isn't an awesome story...and Celeste....man she crazy, especially when eating hahaha...stunning beauty.
So, a flashback within a flashback and then we're back to....nope...no idea. It's brilliant as always. I have one question though, will we need to replay this update when you complete Nashira part 2? Regardless, looking forward to one day being able to play this from start to finish properly, I'm sure it will be far less confusing then.
Take care.
As an edit, I would say the grammar has suffered more than previous updates? Even some of the girls names are incorrectly spelt at times. Maybe take a quick once over this before the next update. Is all perfectly understandable but the usual errors from a non-native English speaker.
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I don't think so
, just start where I left the big red screen and that's itThat is unforgivable and embarrassing... I will try to fix it
"Meg", "Celeste" and Black Bamba!
