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Edit: I kind of forgot that these are Flashback within a Flashback, because Present MC is lying unconscious with an arm cut since... a year now?
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Edit: I kind of forgot that these are Flashback within a Flashback, because Present MC is lying unconscious with an arm cut since... a year now?
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I believe it is an illusion she learned from shadow, i don't believe she is actually hurt but that's what she wanted them to see
Namco15 hinted about it
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Illusion or not, it still is a "12 Hours earlier" situation, that has flashbacks in it.
I think we need to go deeper; we need a flashback within a flashback within a flashback.
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I hope they didn't skip this part now that I think about it?
When Nashira's flashback ends, the game continues.
When Nashira's flashback ends, the game continues.
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You might do.... I would suggest Pornhub may suit you better.
if you are referring to this update, maybe yes...
This update is mainly a quiet but necessary update as I said these are Celeste's happiest years... before everything fell apart when her mother was killed.
It has these things...
In case anyone was wondering how the three of them got to know each other...
"Celeste's" connection with her brother Mayank. the one she is now looking for in the present...
how their skills work.
what they want and who the enemy is.
Who are the Theodoric? for now I have failed as a writer to try to get the reader to figure these things out.
And of course I missed to finish part two the reunion of Nash and "Celeste" on the mainland.
The Princess update will take place on the mainland and, as expected, it will be darker and sexier, fitting the tone of the rest of the game.
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May or not be just because I wanna see certain characters nekkidAsking the important questions Alley
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I wouldn't say you have failed at anything.
The only problem we have is you kinda left the main story part at a bit of a cliffhanger with our heroine bleeding on the floor minus a limb.
I can see where people are coming from wanting to know what happens next.
I love everything about this. I love the characters, the story and the fact it has hot lesbian action ........ even I wanna know what happens next and kinda get a bit of payback.
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As I already posted here https://f95zone.to/threads/give-me-a-sun-v0-4-5-namco15.127217/post-11722352
Fine I´m not the only one who wonders
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I'm still here waiting for the next update so from my POV you haven't failed, just gone off the rails a tad. You have created a fascinating world with interesting characters.
The only negative for me is, your story is too chunky. Flashbacks to earlier events are fine to use when they enhance the main story line. You've made flash backs full length episodes so the story appears disjointed leading to frustration and for some confusion. This is made worse when VN content has such long waiting periods between updates. Its the nature of the genre and what works in other media formats doesn't necessarily work for VNs, so you need to be more aware of that. There is a couple of better ways you could have handle the material IMO to make the story flow better.
Its a learning experience for you, so don't beat yourself up too much. We are still here looking forward to the rest of the story. That is my constructive criticism for what it is worth. Keep up the good work.
From the beginning the novel had the option to choose name and relationship with "Sidra"