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Avaron1974
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This AVN (kinetic novel) remains my undeniable favorite, as the graphics are so successful and the heroine is so beautiful! The theme and the city... great! However, I must say that this latest version (7.5) is not as good as the previous ones! Unfortunately, the overuse of flashbacks reveals a major weakness in the narrative construction! So yes, the story is complex, but it is up to the developers to help us grasp things, so rather than making flashbacks upon flashbacks, it would be better to create a prologue or even include a manual or glossary in the game to help the reader find their way around!
Finally, the overuse of connotations: Roman, medieval, Viking... are starting to harm the story. You have to choose and not spread yourself too thin! Finally, there is a huge lack of erotic and intimate scenes! How can you have such a gem in your hands and manage to make it indigestible and devoid of eroticism!
Developer, pull yourself together!!! My rating remains 5/5 for the moment because the whole thing is so promising. I'm still a contributor for the moment (not under this pseudonym, obviously) until the next update.
Finally, the overuse of connotations: Roman, medieval, Viking... are starting to harm the story. You have to choose and not spread yourself too thin! Finally, there is a huge lack of erotic and intimate scenes! How can you have such a gem in your hands and manage to make it indigestible and devoid of eroticism!
Developer, pull yourself together!!! My rating remains 5/5 for the moment because the whole thing is so promising. I'm still a contributor for the moment (not under this pseudonym, obviously) until the next update.
Avaron1974
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There is a ton of sex scenes.
The only downside is for people not into lesbian content but it would be a bit weird if they picked up a lesbian game expecting anything else.
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hmmm.. i wouldn't consider every girl-on-girl action lesbian, actually.
HiHaHo
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what you consider "girl on girl action" then? if not lesbian(intimate interactions between two females)
Avaron1974
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So what would you consider a bunch of girls in a sexual relationship with each other and no interest in men?
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some girls just like to play around and try things out, without being in a relationship.
my wife could tell you more about it, but she refused to register here, so
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Dear God. Are any involved with men too?some girls just like to play around and try things out, without being in a relationship.
my wife could tell you more about it, but she refused to register here, so
Oh...they aren't? So it's lesbianism then isn't it?
Avaron1974
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Okay, i'll rephrase.some girls just like to play around and try things out, without being in a relationship.
my wife could tell you more about it, but she refused to register here, so
What would you call a bunch of women who only have interest in other women and have regular sex and also have feelings with each other?
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Hang on....hang on....this is multiple choice right?
Give me a minute....I know this one.....
HiHaHo
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who's ganna tell him?...
and im not referencing that he ought to read a dictionary and that his opinions(considerations) doesn't change the definition off words.
FatGiant
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The female characters here are certainly beautiful... well, there are basically only female characters here... So the tag "no sex" or something like that would be quite appropriate here. Although the game is quite large, there are only a couple of those same lesbian scenes for the entire game, the rest is all plot and history... in which you basically don't really take part, you just watch because there are no choices or decisions that players can make here. So for a porn game there is no porn here, for a game focused on lesbian content there is very little of this content. And considering that you don't even need to play it because there are no game functions... Well, it turned out to be a rather unique product... I really can't imagine who might be interested in this, but I think there are such people. For me, alas, there is nothing interesting here (and even the elves don't save the situation ).
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alright i'd call that a lesbian relationship.
i was more pointing toward girls 'just playing'. ok that expression is ambiguous, lack of a better term there, but it happens. people being curious and having fun, still happens sometimes, even while the whole world is going down the drain.. and why the hell not.
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So to come back to the topic (minus all stupid that intervene in unreleated thing).
This game NEED a review on all those flashback.
IDK maybe putting actual present time to time.
Introduce new character in flashback.
But as me and at least 18 others voters have said. flashback in flashback with their name that change too, is confusing as hell.
And no amount of "will be better latter" can fix it.
We don't even ask to remove the flashback, juste move them in a way that is less confusing.
Or change the story, put the "flash back" in chronological order, and make a story of it, and later in the story we rejoin the actual "present", would be less confusing and not ask too much history change (only the order of the story shown and maby some code change to make it work).
This game NEED a review on all those flashback.
IDK maybe putting actual present time to time.
Introduce new character in flashback.
But as me and at least 18 others voters have said. flashback in flashback with their name that change too, is confusing as hell.
And no amount of "will be better latter" can fix it.
We don't even ask to remove the flashback, juste move them in a way that is less confusing.
Or change the story, put the "flash back" in chronological order, and make a story of it, and later in the story we rejoin the actual "present", would be less confusing and not ask too much history change (only the order of the story shown and maby some code change to make it work).
HollowDux
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Flashbacks are an integral part of the story. I personally believe the writing is good, though the pacing could be a little tighter. The narrative is presented in a non-linear way, which isn't extremely common but also not particularly unusual. It usually happen in finished product (movies, series, book) but this is an ongoing novel. I think it's normal we don't understand the totality of the story for now. It make it more interesting imo.
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I could have agreed if we didn't had flashback in flashback actually, it's make it quite annoying to follow as you have to mentally draw a timeline to make sense of it.
But if you like it
in my case i would have preferred 2 story or a more chronological one.