This update was really disappointing to me.
Lisa's innocence was always a big thing with me. I really enjoyed that she was the one pushing for sex, and not being manipulated into it. The set up to the sex scenes were really good and had my attention. Know what didn't have my attention? The sex scene. I thought it was HORRIBLE. The sex scenes lacked emotion, partially because Ann is there, but there is no communication. I was hopping that it hurts it little, but she wants to get used to it, because most women do not actually enjoy their first time with normal sized dicks, let alone huge ones... The first time scene Max gets cockblocked by Ann and is VERY anticlimactic. All we get are 6 slides, which look good but lack of communication makes it feel hallow. The other sex scenes have people talking or inner monologue, but none of these Lisa scenes have anything but pictures.
I dont see where Max's story is going. At least Kates story has direction with the weird shit at the school. I'm just disappointed with Max's story.
DarkSilver seems to be trying to correct past mistakes, and I give him credit for that but maybe he should slow down to increase quality. This"BIG" update felt pretty bad to me.