Mini-review and feedback:
So I've been playing for multiple builds and the quick succession of content is really good. The writing nicely complements the videos, making it worth it to watch both. It's not simply a porn delivery mechanism.
I love the premise, it matches nicely with a lot of stories I like from Mcstories.com. (If people have recommendations for these types of stories, let me know). I wish there were a few more options, but the developer is clearly working on those so I just need to have some patience.
Some comments on the narrative and writing:
-there's a few words missing here and there, but it's not noticeable.
-Mom is sometimes referred to as Kathy, sometimes as Mom. It feels strange. Especially when Mom becomes a guy.
-The body-swapping with Lena and Mom threw me for a loop the first few times, I hadn't realized they'd switched bodies. This switching also doesn't really impact the character's reactions much, everyone just seems to roll with it, which is a bit of a missed opportunity. Because of this, I'm mostly assuming the reason is the developer wanted to include more Lisa Ann scenes.
-Despite the debeloper doing a lot to make it clear that characters have transformed, it still feels a bit jarring to me. I do like the portraits on the left updating. There are arguments to be made for them only showing change after the change has occured (i.e. the page after the transformation happens) and for what the developer chose: on the page that it happens.
-The list of clickable rewards is great, gives you a good overview of the who got what. This might be overcomplicating things and require a great deal of work for something trivial but a log of where they got the perk might be fun. "Sam received this perk for taking off his shirt" "Evan received this demotion by trying to get Sam to cum in a sex duel but running out of time"
-The perks seem to be inconsistently given at some points. Why does someone get a reward but nobody gets a demotion for some challenges?
-It is unclear whether the perks are known to the players or not. Again, some inconsistency. In one path people keep commenting on the Buttslut perk Lena got but in another path, people don't seem to know Evan received that perk. They needed to figure that out to beat him. So do they know or do they not know?
I'm still looking forward to more of this and what the V2 of this game will look like.
If I can provide any sort of assistance, I'd be glad to provide it.