i don't think anything needs to be changed. according to some studies more than 10% of women in the US have rape fantasies and nearly 20% of rape victims experience orgasms during the victimization. those are biological responses that happen to certain individuals even when their minds strongly oppose the intercourse. the MC could be just one of those women so the scene can make sense.what bothered me a big deal was, that Ashley actually seemed to enjoy the rape.