Dysphorika

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It's not an abuse because, if I'm not mistaken, on that occasion Good Ashley (once she feels light-headed by Arthur's spiked wine) can choose to spend the night at Arthur's house or go back to her home. An abuse does not involve a choice.
In the same way Jasmine neither, Ashley can reject her advances, even say Jack to tell her to leave Ashley alone.
 
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WRONGS

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both if it were possible. However I could try to translate it
I guess- if I wanted to just give the author the translation, I'd contact her (there's bound to be an email in her Patreon page) If you want something to make, I don't know, a thread about it in F95, there's some sort of program named UnRen that would allow you to extract the script and the images, then you just would need to translate the dialogue parts and use Ren'py to make it into a game.
 
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Tanzie

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Does this VN have a fixed amount of play-time (e.g. ends in one in-game year no matter what you do) or is it possible to exhaust multiple parts of the story-lines in it where possible, until they come to an end?

By the way, I wish there was an option such as 'I hate tattoos' and be done with the tattoo thing, hate it when she constantly asks to get one. Same for the boob job.
 
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Ending GGGB

Hi guys!

So, as you know, right now I'm working on the ending of GGGB. This month I'm trying to complete all the artwork that will be necessary and my intention is to tackle the writing next month, so this time the development cycle will take 2 months. I hope I can complete it by then, but I'm not sure, since I'm adding new stuff as I go on all the time, which is what I always end up doing...

I'm really excited about this. This is the first time I'll be finishing a project like this, the first time I'm creating an ending for a branching narrative that has become almost too complex to handle. And I know this is of the utmost importance. I know the point of a game, like with a piece of music or any story, is not the end, but the journey. But I'm also well aware than a shitty ending can ruin a great journey.

Look at what happened with Game of Thrones recently. They were unable to wrap things up consistently and coherently and they ruined plots and characters that had been masterfully constructed to that point. I can't forget the ending of Mass Effect, which had me furious for weeks.
No, the ending has to be consistent with the journey. I know what not to do, but I'm just discovering what to do, and how to do it, I'd say. I know I want to reflect all the choices you guys made during the game, shaping the end of Ash's story, and the story of all the supporting characters. I want to reward choice with consequence, and I hope I can make a good work with that. We'll see how that turns out!

I'm super absorbed with that work, but meanwhile I want to give you something to keep your attention. I'm not sure what would be appropriate, though. I'm reluctant to show sneak peeks to avoid spoiling the endings, and I cannot show a "preview", either. Some time ago you guys asked me to reveal my "identity", and I might do that for loyal patrons, adding a tier with "personal diaries" or something along those lines were I could show a bit about myself, the person who's behind the game. I also want to make a few polls to see what you guys want to see after this project is wrapped up, although I have a few ideas in mind already...

So, speaking about what comes after the next update: GGGB main story will be finished, but I will take one or two more months no polish things up. I want to add music to the whole game and also add some more scenes between secondary characters that Ash will visualise while hearing about them. I want to give some more scenes to a fan favorite, Jasmin. After that, I'm also thinking about maybe releasing some short DLC like spin-off updates, maybe exploring what could happen between Jess and Dave when the game is over, or seeing what Iris might be up to, etc... That will depend in what you guys are interested. And it might buy time while I prepare the new project, since the first developing stages are the most time-consuming: planning the game concept, designing and drawing all the characters, backgrounds, finding someone to help with the art, etc.

Regarding that last point, and as I said before, I'd like to hire someone to help with the art. I haven't began searching yet, but I will. My idea is to delegate the coloring to someone, so I have more time to focus on other aspects of the creative process and and the visual quality of the next game can be significantly improved. However I'm not sure if I can afford that atm, so I'm thinking about tweaking the tier structure as I already told you last month. I still have to think about it, so we'll talk about the issue at a later date.

Oh, and after all this is done, I'd like to take some holidays! It's been more than 2 years producing an update month after month, it would be cool to have a whole month for myself without having to think about work lol! We'll see if I can schedule that...

So, a very lengthy post, but I think that's all I wanted to say right now. Let me know your thoughts and suggestions down in the comments, I need to hear from you guys! I know I always say it, but thanks for being part not only of this project, but also part of this amazing community that has enabled me to complete this enormous project and make a living out of my passions for art, writing and video games. I owe everything to you!

Kisses,
Eva
 

Engelstein

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Ending GGGB

Hi guys!

So, as you know, right now I'm working on the ending of GGGB. This month I'm trying to complete all the artwork that will be necessary and my intention is to tackle the writing next month, so this time the development cycle will take 2 months. I hope I can complete it by then, but I'm not sure, since I'm adding new stuff as I go on all the time, which is what I always end up doing...

I'm really excited about this. This is the first time I'll be finishing a project like this, the first time I'm creating an ending for a branching narrative that has become almost too complex to handle. And I know this is of the utmost importance. I know the point of a game, like with a piece of music or any story, is not the end, but the journey. But I'm also well aware than a shitty ending can ruin a great journey.

Look at what happened with Game of Thrones recently. They were unable to wrap things up consistently and coherently and they ruined plots and characters that had been masterfully constructed to that point. I can't forget the ending of Mass Effect, which had me furious for weeks.
No, the ending has to be consistent with the journey. I know what not to do, but I'm just discovering what to do, and how to do it, I'd say. I know I want to reflect all the choices you guys made during the game, shaping the end of Ash's story, and the story of all the supporting characters. I want to reward choice with consequence, and I hope I can make a good work with that. We'll see how that turns out!

I'm super absorbed with that work, but meanwhile I want to give you something to keep your attention. I'm not sure what would be appropriate, though. I'm reluctant to show sneak peeks to avoid spoiling the endings, and I cannot show a "preview", either. Some time ago you guys asked me to reveal my "identity", and I might do that for loyal patrons, adding a tier with "personal diaries" or something along those lines were I could show a bit about myself, the person who's behind the game. I also want to make a few polls to see what you guys want to see after this project is wrapped up, although I have a few ideas in mind already...

So, speaking about what comes after the next update: GGGB main story will be finished, but I will take one or two more months no polish things up. I want to add music to the whole game and also add some more scenes between secondary characters that Ash will visualise while hearing about them. I want to give some more scenes to a fan favorite, Jasmin. After that, I'm also thinking about maybe releasing some short DLC like spin-off updates, maybe exploring what could happen between Jess and Dave when the game is over, or seeing what Iris might be up to, etc... That will depend in what you guys are interested. And it might buy time while I prepare the new project, since the first developing stages are the most time-consuming: planning the game concept, designing and drawing all the characters, backgrounds, finding someone to help with the art, etc.

Regarding that last point, and as I said before, I'd like to hire someone to help with the art. I haven't began searching yet, but I will. My idea is to delegate the coloring to someone, so I have more time to focus on other aspects of the creative process and and the visual quality of the next game can be significantly improved. However I'm not sure if I can afford that atm, so I'm thinking about tweaking the tier structure as I already told you last month. I still have to think about it, so we'll talk about the issue at a later date.

Oh, and after all this is done, I'd like to take some holidays! It's been more than 2 years producing an update month after month, it would be cool to have a whole month for myself without having to think about work lol! We'll see if I can schedule that...

So, a very lengthy post, but I think that's all I wanted to say right now. Let me know your thoughts and suggestions down in the comments, I need to hear from you guys! I know I always say it, but thanks for being part not only of this project, but also part of this amazing community that has enabled me to complete this enormous project and make a living out of my passions for art, writing and video games. I owe everything to you!

Kisses,
Eva
Her mentioning Mass Effect's ending has given me hope. :'(
 

Redgy

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I want to add music to the whole game and also add some more scenes between secondary characters that Ash will visualise while hearing about them. I want to give some more scenes to a fan favorite, Jasmin. After that, I'm also thinking about maybe releasing some short DLC like spin-off updates, maybe exploring what could happen between Jess and Dave when the game is over, or seeing what Iris might be up to, etc...
This is, honestly, everything I could wish for. Would love to see Jess and Dave relationship progression ^-^
 
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Ending GGGB

Hi guys!

So, as you know, right now I'm working on the ending of GGGB. This month I'm trying to complete all the artwork that will be necessary and my intention is to tackle the writing next month, so this time the development cycle will take 2 months. I hope I can complete it by then, but I'm not sure, since I'm adding new stuff as I go on all the time, which is what I always end up doing...

I'm really excited about this. This is the first time I'll be finishing a project like this, the first time I'm creating an ending for a branching narrative that has become almost too complex to handle. And I know this is of the utmost importance. I know the point of a game, like with a piece of music or any story, is not the end, but the journey. But I'm also well aware than a shitty ending can ruin a great journey.

Look at what happened with Game of Thrones recently. They were unable to wrap things up consistently and coherently and they ruined plots and characters that had been masterfully constructed to that point. I can't forget the ending of Mass Effect, which had me furious for weeks.
No, the ending has to be consistent with the journey. I know what not to do, but I'm just discovering what to do, and how to do it, I'd say. I know I want to reflect all the choices you guys made during the game, shaping the end of Ash's story, and the story of all the supporting characters. I want to reward choice with consequence, and I hope I can make a good work with that. We'll see how that turns out!

I'm super absorbed with that work, but meanwhile I want to give you something to keep your attention. I'm not sure what would be appropriate, though. I'm reluctant to show sneak peeks to avoid spoiling the endings, and I cannot show a "preview", either. Some time ago you guys asked me to reveal my "identity", and I might do that for loyal patrons, adding a tier with "personal diaries" or something along those lines were I could show a bit about myself, the person who's behind the game. I also want to make a few polls to see what you guys want to see after this project is wrapped up, although I have a few ideas in mind already...

So, speaking about what comes after the next update: GGGB main story will be finished, but I will take one or two more months no polish things up. I want to add music to the whole game and also add some more scenes between secondary characters that Ash will visualise while hearing about them. I want to give some more scenes to a fan favorite, Jasmin. After that, I'm also thinking about maybe releasing some short DLC like spin-off updates, maybe exploring what could happen between Jess and Dave when the game is over, or seeing what Iris might be up to, etc... That will depend in what you guys are interested. And it might buy time while I prepare the new project, since the first developing stages are the most time-consuming: planning the game concept, designing and drawing all the characters, backgrounds, finding someone to help with the art, etc.

Regarding that last point, and as I said before, I'd like to hire someone to help with the art. I haven't began searching yet, but I will. My idea is to delegate the coloring to someone, so I have more time to focus on other aspects of the creative process and and the visual quality of the next game can be significantly improved. However I'm not sure if I can afford that atm, so I'm thinking about tweaking the tier structure as I already told you last month. I still have to think about it, so we'll talk about the issue at a later date.

Oh, and after all this is done, I'd like to take some holidays! It's been more than 2 years producing an update month after month, it would be cool to have a whole month for myself without having to think about work lol! We'll see if I can schedule that...

So, a very lengthy post, but I think that's all I wanted to say right now. Let me know your thoughts and suggestions down in the comments, I need to hear from you guys! I know I always say it, but thanks for being part not only of this project, but also part of this amazing community that has enabled me to complete this enormous project and make a living out of my passions for art, writing and video games. I owe everything to you!

Kisses,
Eva
Yeah no, taking jabs at others when you haven't even done the endings for your game isn't what i would really call smart. That can bite you in the ass really fast...:cautious:
 

bonerland

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Does this VN have a fixed amount of play-time (e.g. ends in one in-game year no matter what you do) or is it possible to exhaust multiple parts of the story-lines in it where possible, until they come to an end?

By the way, I wish there was an option such as 'I hate tattoos' and be done with the tattoo thing, hate it when she constantly asks to get one. Same for the boob job.
You can avoid the boob job entirely by simply not asking her mom about it.
 

Tanzie

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There's a bug I've just found out, more like a crash:

Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/script.rpy", line 204257, in <module>
NameError: name 'ryansexoffice' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "D:\GoodGirlGoneBad-0.31-pc\renpy\bootstrap.py", line 313, in bootstrap
    renpy.main.main()
  File "D:\GoodGirlGoneBad-0.31-pc\renpy\main.py", line 513, in main
    run(restart)
  File "D:\GoodGirlGoneBad-0.31-pc\renpy\main.py", line 139, in run
    renpy.execution.run_context(True)
  File "D:\GoodGirlGoneBad-0.31-pc\renpy\execution.py", line 876, in run_context
    context.run()
  File "script.rpyc", line 204253, in script
  File "D:\GoodGirlGoneBad-0.31-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1762, in execute
    if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
  File "D:\GoodGirlGoneBad-0.31-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1944, in py_eval
    return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
  File "D:\GoodGirlGoneBad-0.31-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1937, in py_eval_bytecode
    return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
  File "game/script.rpy", line 204257, in <module>
NameError: name 'ryansexoffice' is not defined
The reason why it's related to Ryan is because I chose to 'keep it professional' with him. Choosing the other option works fine.

If you continue with the save below (you don't need to choose anything, just continue) you'll see the exception thrown. It sounds like a missing ending, or some scene that hasn't been implemented yet. The story pretty much ends after that. But I didn't get to see the 'Enhanced Negotiations' scene, mentioned in the 'scene guide' posted in this thread. Might be related.
 
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Tanzie

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You can avoid the boob job entirely by simply not asking her mom about it.
That is NOT the problem, I can also avoid getting tattoos. The problem is, you get to decide about almost every important thing in MC's life, but when it comes to getting a tattoo or a boobjob, SHE does it herself and let's you know about it as well. All I can do is to prevent her from doing that. It would be much less annoying if I had an option to decide her attitude against tattoos and boobjobs once and for all.
 

WRONGS

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What are you talking about? You can simply choose not to.
Nah, I kinda get what Tanzie's saying. I've played runs trying to make a really prudish and sheltered Ashley, and the fact that she keeps entering the tatoo shop or talking about considering getting one clashes a bit with the concept.
It's not a big deal at all for me, don't get me wrong. But I kinda get it.
 
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This is, honestly, everything I could wish for. Would love to see Jess and Dave relationship progression ^-^
Does it mean the progression of Ash's relationship routes with Jess and Dave or Jess and Dave's relationship?
Because if its the latter then that's a bummer.
 

WRONGS

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So she always ends up bimbo or thug huh. Wow thats cold. Thought there might be a path she stays good like Jessica.
No, there's the Lesbian Girlfriends path where she separates from Dave to be with Ashley, and she remains exactly as good as she was at the start.
But I think that's about it. Any other Eva is either pure evil or remains Dave's girl.
 

qazxsw80

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But I think that's about it. Any other Eva is either pure evil or remains Dave's girl.
Oh, come on, the fact that she likes to have a lot of sex with many different partners does not make her "evil".))
As far as I remember, there are 4 paths for Eva. 1.She can become a blond bimbo who likes to fuck black guys. 2.She can be a red-headed thug if she joins the gang. 3. She is a nice girl who is in love with Dave. 4. She is a good girl in a relationship with good Ash.
That's plenty of choices for a secondary character, if you ask me.
 
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