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Oh, I'll skip then.No orcs were harmed in the making of this game (either physically or spiritually)
Oh, I'll skip then.No orcs were harmed in the making of this game (either physically or spiritually)
To clarify, I don't think anything has gone wrong with the writing as of this update, it's nice to see how you've built up this world and I generally like the way interactions between characters involve non-verbal communication and understanding. I'm not a writer but I wonder if this isn't one of those points where your plot is significantly developed that it can start to fray depending on how certain elements are managed. Ada seems to care about Guroh on some level but her true feelings are absolutely unreadable. I don't know how long even somebody close to that kind of character can continue to find them endearing when their actions are emotionally devastating.Only unavoidable Netorare so far
Yeah, tbh with you this is my first time writing anything this... I don't know... ambitious? What I lack in grammar and experience, I tried to make up for in the lore (You've got no idea how big my grin was seeing that it's considered well-written, I mean I put in the effort but still) So there might be something that doesn't hit off to the players the things I'm trying to achieve. Something like when I create Ada, this is what Ada would do, when I create Tehlu, this is what Tehlu would do. And what I was trying to achieve for Ada is that she is just a tough nut to crack. And that mysteriousness about Ada is part of her charm. I didn't mean to portray her as someone obtuse, more like feelings are the least of her worry as she's trying her best to fix their situation above all else.
Ada fucking Huldan as a step on her plot to get more power to protect/provide for the people she loves isn't inherently so reprehensible that Guroh can condemn it with a straight face. It's written into lore and explained pretty clearly why she has to do this and how it is seen in a cultural sense. Guroh isn't taken that seriously anyway and it's true that this method (in conjunction with what Guroh is pulling or alone) might preserve their family. Second issue is that Guroh's direct interference risks alienating Ada - he can't interfere without pissing her off so bad he might ruin whatever chances he had with her. He can't argue them out of fucking and he can't physically attack Huldan without reprisal from Ada/the tribe. We still have this element of Guroh lacking confidence and any significant social or physical presence to back it up. All of that makes sense.I mean Ada lost all her charm on day 27 when she let Huldan do what he did to her. Honestly.
Nearly all of the characters in this game are frustrating. Guroh in particular he should stop being a pussy at least make it a choice to stop that scene from happening by not spying on them like a weakling. He wants to stop people from doing things like that to her, that was his goal, why would he just sit there and watch, your writing here is bad.
It's contradictory. I get that you want to have unavoidable NTR, it just doesn't make sense the way you have it implemented.
First I thought the "ntr" was the "mom" character getting railed by the raiders, but that's not actually NTR but many people still view it as such.
But yeah, i'd rather this village gets burned to the ground and the MC moves on with his life. This orc village is just full of deceitful characters and people who are no good. There is no reason for the MC to stay there, if there ever was a reason it's gone now.
To some extent I agree with you. I still don't like what Ada is doing, and what the so called "friend" Huldan is doing.To clarify, I don't think anything has gone wrong with the writing as of this update, it's nice to see how you've built up this world and I generally like the way interactions between characters involve non-verbal communication and understanding. I'm not a writer but I wonder if this isn't one of those points where your plot is significantly developed that it can start to fray depending on how certain elements are managed. Ada seems to care about Guroh on some level but her true feelings are absolutely unreadable. I don't know how long even somebody close to that kind of character can continue to find them endearing when their actions are emotionally devastating.
On balance, I don't agree with this take:
Ada fucking Huldan as a step on her plot to get more power to protect/provide for the people she loves isn't inherently so reprehensible that Guroh can condemn it with a straight face. It's written into lore and explained pretty clearly why she has to do this and how it is seen in a cultural sense. Guroh isn't taken that seriously anyway and it's true that this method (in conjunction with what Guroh is pulling or alone) might preserve their family. Second issue is that Guroh's direct interference risks alienating Ada - he can't interfere without pissing her off so bad he might ruin whatever chances he had with her. He can't argue them out of fucking and he can't physically attack Huldan without reprisal from Ada/the tribe. We still have this element of Guroh lacking confidence and any significant social or physical presence to back it up. All of that makes sense.
There's a little bit of this post I do agree with though - Guroh hasn't yet started to harbor doubts about Ada and develop significant contempt for the village and its people. Guroh doesn't fit in, but he also doesn't belong anywhere else. He has to stay there to survive right now, but why would any of that stop him from starting to think about how much he'd really like to carve something out for himself and leave? Bloodshed or not, he has few reasons to like most of the people in the village and many reasons to fuck them over for his own benefit (they'd do the same to him). I think on some level, he should want to protect himself from Ada, which would usually mean detachment and deflection. Why doesn't he start to avoid her, or if forced, trigger a conversation where he rebukes Ada whether she cares to listen or not? Again, this opposes the development of an NTR story but it's hard to understand a guy who will stick fight with the biggest dudes in the village and consult sages but won't walk away from this situation.
Just some ideas about plot and character development, not a condemnation of the game.
hit where it hurts, for now when you think you have a chance to reverse everything, everything stays the same. I think I'm a msochist because Netorare doesn't bother me, but there are stories like this that I would really like to have several branches.Let me guess, cucks and whores with green flavor?
It has a replay gallery, it is located in the Journal menu as scene replay. Although you can't play it from the main menu, but with the console you can unlock the scenes.Needs a replay gallery
Yoooo i love darkest dungeon ! That is dope that you got inspired from that. I won't throw hate your way for something you built up from nothing, like some ppl on here will. BUT i will say i also don't have my meat out and trying to punish it when i play darkest dungeon lol. I am just trying to see some scenes with story and peace out you know ? Maybe adding a skip option would be awesome ! Regardless i like the story and art so far.Tbh, I don't know wth you're talking about. Hell, I don't even know how half of my codes are working properly. I wouldn't have time for that stuff, that's beyond my control.
There are rewards for every fight, except training with Ulmakt. Well, the training is there so you could figure out how the battle work. I get that people hate RNG with passion, but being a huge fan of darkest dungeon, battle brothers, and the like, I very much enjoyed the RNG battle in this. Well, I'm trying to make losing a few battles not that punishable in later chapters.
Maybe try this, tips for battles:
- It's always a good idea to do some pacing before attack or defend to manage your fatigue (1 pacing before attack, 2 pacing before defense)
- The first turn of defend then attack is always a good start.
- If the enemy taking a defensive stance on their turn, it's wise to spend your APs on defense and pacing.
- If your enemy's fatigue is high or their stamina is below 50%, don't bother to waste your AP on defend as they are unlikely to attack you.
- Breathe, take your time. Be patient, embrace RNG, or else RNG will hate you
You need simulator for that? Whoa, you didn't have to brag, you know.
Yeah, I mean I tried to make Guroh somehow pissed about Ada to keep the NTR kick going after the first NTR encounter. But I didn't intend to make her unbearable.To clarify, I don't think anything has gone wrong with the writing as of this update, it's nice to see how you've built up this world and I generally like the way interactions between characters involve non-verbal communication and understanding. I'm not a writer but I wonder if this isn't one of those points where your plot is significantly developed that it can start to fray depending on how certain elements are managed. Ada seems to care about Guroh on some level but her true feelings are absolutely unreadable. I don't know how long even somebody close to that kind of character can continue to find them endearing when their actions are emotionally devastating.
On balance, I don't agree with this take:
Ada fucking Huldan as a step on her plot to get more power to protect/provide for the people she loves isn't inherently so reprehensible that Guroh can condemn it with a straight face. It's written into lore and explained pretty clearly why she has to do this and how it is seen in a cultural sense. Guroh isn't taken that seriously anyway and it's true that this method (in conjunction with what Guroh is pulling or alone) might preserve their family. Second issue is that Guroh's direct interference risks alienating Ada - he can't interfere without pissing her off so bad he might ruin whatever chances he had with her. He can't argue them out of fucking and he can't physically attack Huldan without reprisal from Ada/the tribe. We still have this element of Guroh lacking confidence and any significant social or physical presence to back it up. All of that makes sense.
There's a little bit of this post I do agree with though - Guroh hasn't yet started to harbor doubts about Ada and develop significant contempt for the village and its people. Guroh doesn't fit in, but he also doesn't belong anywhere else. He has to stay there to survive right now, but why would any of that stop him from starting to think about how much he'd really like to carve something out for himself and leave? Bloodshed or not, he has few reasons to like most of the people in the village and many reasons to fuck them over for his own benefit (they'd do the same to him). I think on some level, he should want to protect himself from Ada, which would usually mean detachment and deflection. Why doesn't he start to avoid her, or if forced, trigger a conversation where he rebukes Ada whether she cares to listen or not? Again, this opposes the development of an NTR story but it's hard to understand a guy who will stick fight with the biggest dudes in the village and consult sages but won't walk away from this situation.
Just some ideas about plot and character development, not a condemnation of the game.
Yooo love that game, haven't got the courage to play the second one lol. Hmm, I don't know how some people who might enjoy the battles would feel about that. Maybe I'd introduce story mode at the start of the game for no battles. I'll see what others might think, we'll see.Yoooo i love darkest dungeon ! That is dope that you got inspired from that. I won't throw hate your way for something you built up from nothing, like some ppl on here will. BUT i will say i also don't have my meat out and trying to punish it when i play darkest dungeon lol. I am just trying to see some scenes with story and peace out you know ? Maybe adding a skip option would be awesome ! Regardless i like the story and art so far.
Any mac version?
I'll put them on discord (experiment) tomorrow, but no promise there won't be a bug.Android version pls