VN Ren'Py Abandoned Grimoire [Ch. 1-4 v0.04] [Jack Kerouac]

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Jack0

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Very enjoyable so far.
Story moves along briskly, which is nice to see. Lots of story potential with the different spells.
Good job on the renders too.
 

TheBlueKnight

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when is the next update coming
This game was started just so the developer could learn how to code. There's no patreon or schedule, so no idea if and when a new update will appear. Chapter three came out pretty quickly, then it was three months for four (in March).
 

Pif paf

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Well, he has Patreon page- vide OP, and there is a post 31th August concerning the game...
 

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Well, he has Patreon page- vide OP, and there is a post 31th August concerning the game...
That's the patreon for MindSpark. They're the author of the original erotic story that the game is based on, but they're not the game dev (I made that mistake earlier).
 

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That's the patreon for MindSpark. They're the author of the original erotic story that the game is based on, but they're not the game dev (I made that mistake earlier).
och, sorry for misunderstanding here...
In that case, I hope there are no copyright problems to the story for the game...
 
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och, sorry for misunderstanding here...
In that case, I hope there are no copyright problems to the story for the game...
There is no patreon and he is not trying to make money or modify the story, and credit is given to original author as far as im aware.
 

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Updated to Chapter 3. Linear run, no decisions.

There are 13 chapters in this story.
13 chapter hmm ... and we're currently on 4

nice to know something about a prospective road map !

thanks for making this !

would make my day if you could just give us a shout out and let us know you're alive :p
 
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damn, got this cause the girl looked good enough to play even though abandoned, and no one ever answered the question about the ding being good or bad v.v

edit: For anyone who comes here in the future thinking as I did that it'd be good even if unfinished, don't. a single 2 image masturbation scene, 1 full frontal nude, and some topless images.
 
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TheBlueKnight

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If you want to read the story it was based on I think it's all .
 
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Gosamr

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Anyone else want her breasts to stay just the way they are now? :love:
Tragically I find myself here with no further choice, but to not only be merely passing through, but also even more tragically not on my way to sign up to Jack Kerouac's Patreon as I would indeed have eagerly been doing. Anyway, me being me, I can't help but add my sentiment to your well observed and perfectly valid viewpoint.

I think *Addison's breasts would have been outstandingly beautiful, albeit to obviously varying degrees, of course, no matter what size they were **. This would simply and naturally be because together they form just one single pulse-pounding facet of the physically mesmeric and emotionally enchanting radiance she exudes and through which she, completely unconsciously, overwhelms our senses...well, mine at least...every time she appears.


* and may I say I sensed, right from the getgo, the titanic genius at work here, when, clearly great humility, I found myself oh so gratefully presented with the ability to calmly change and thus brush aside this potential millstone of a disaster.


** I personally favored the better proportioned of the two, but I'll let you decide for yourself which that was so that you then, of course, agree wholeheartedly with me ;))
 

Gosamr

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i'm surprised that no one mention this creator's name. it's a potentially problem causing name.

it would be like if made my name Walt Disney and made porn games.
I feel absolutely certain that this must be precisely why this guy packed his bags and did a runner. I bet Jack Kerouac's estate, to say nothing of Jack's ghost itself, are still hunting/haunting him to this day. Hell, there's probably even a jihad underway in the Middle East and all in the hope of recovering even just a fraction of the many millions of dollars this guy clearly made trading on Jack's name out of subs to "Grimoire" back in the day.
 

Gosamr

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Don't give the sister the boob shit and it states she is so much hotter with bigger boobs went into the script and edited it to smaller instead of bigger as the picture being shown is her with smaller breast not bigger breast if it was one of her with bigger breasts the boobs would be clipping through the shirt as seen if you look at the 2 pictures of her in the image folder.

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This is the big boobied one. Notice the clipping just under the one boob?

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I also replaced her naked boobs shots with her bra shot since those are what her boobs are suppose to look like.
Looking at the two shots I categorically prefer the big boobs one obviously taken after she'd returned from her toilet break.
Besides the big-boobed clipping is easily solved with a little ingenuity and one of those giant black permanent marker pens.
 
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