Saint Blackmoor

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I don't know what's so hard about writing a young, charming dude who got game if you want to make dating sim with a bunch of romantic/sexual interests.
So, in your words, every game would have a clone of the same guy. BORING! Variety, Baby! ;)
The games that tend to have a "normal" guy are the ones where you never see their face.
 

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I was not wrong lol.


Yeah, I finished testing it and edited the comment, the mc is pretty pathetic, you can even say that the Blonde Milf abuses him and the mc is like "hihihi, but we reached an agreement right?"


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In general, the renders and characters aren't bad (except for the mc :LUL: ), there's not much to say about the story, it looks like it's going to have forced content. (I know there are many who are not interested in the domination aspect and the first maledom scene is forced just like the forced sex with the milf.)
Thank you for your service.
 

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So, in your words, every game would have a clone of your favorite guy. BORING! Variety, Baby! ;)
The games that tend to have a "normal" guy are the ones where you never see their face.
Nothing to do with favoritism. Just making sense in the context of a story. You want a game with bunch of supermodel-looking chicks drooling over a MC? Write a MC who justifies that so it feels earned.

The one sex scene in this felt like it was just there to have some porn in the update. That lonely MILF could have found a better fuck just by picking randomly from the street. Unless she (and the rest who all seem to be flirting with him), has some kind of "stuttering dork who can't seem to stay on his feet" fetish
 

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Leaving that aside, I don't know why but the overview and images make me think that the mc is going to be the typical loser mc, who does what he is told, and lacks personality or at least a backbone, I hope I'm wrong
A VN having a normal MC instead of a pussy challenge?

IMPOSSIBLE

Well, at least the renders look nice, Kinda reminds me of FreshWomen.

But I will be holding off on this until the MC finally get some stones, or if he ever.

Tired of playing as pathetic MCs.
 

MikeOG

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Damn the renders in the screenshots are very good. The first girl looks very hot.
 

rafaaa

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Renders are good and story its hard know for now. Hope that the game has more choices than 2 to choose and that the choices have impact on the story and the relations with the girls, hope there is more choices to choose (instead of 2 to have 3) in the future,hope that the girls arent all slutty and hope there is more girls, The game has potential but the dev cant get lost on the story,have more choices with impact on story and relations with girls (not only about sex).
 

kinkbr

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I'm very grateful for all the positive and negative feedback. I'm making sure to take mental notes so I can answer them soon . Thank you all for taking the time to play the game. Although there isn't much content available at the moment, I want to assure you that I am fully committed to completing the game and won't abandon it halfway through.
 

kira123

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Congrats very very good game! I would love to make fan render based on your character. What are the name of the model and the hair you use for deborah? kinkbr
 

Saint Blackmoor

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Nothing to do with favoritism. Just making sense in the context of a story. Do you want a game with a bunch of supermodel-looking chicks drooling over an MC? Write an MC who justifies that so it feels earned.

The one sex scene in this felt like it was just there to have some porn in the update. That lonely MILF could have found a better fuck just by picking randomly from the street. Unless she (and the rest, who all seem to be flirting with him) has some kind of "stuttering dork who can't seem to stay on his feet" fetish
You didn't address my one point.
The same stereotype MC as you describe in every game would be boring.
There are many reasons a dev will write a character a certain way. As they say, write what you know. it's obvious the majority of members here are just like this MC. So the game will get a majority of fans which = $.
I applaud the devs who write for their enjoyment first and popularity second.

I can understand if you are a girl and you like men, you want your ideal MC in the story.

(You want a game with a bunch of supermodel-looking chicks drooling over an MC? Write an MC who justifies that so it feels earned.)

Turn your statement around and apply it to a female MC with the same traits as our guy here.
Attractive, innocent, naive, looking for support in a new city. She is a common MC here.

(That lonely MILF)
Actually, there is a variety of female LIs here. the sexy but not needy BDSM/sex therapist, the bitchy hates you but not really roommate, the cute Cosplay girl. Did I miss anyone? Oh, yeah, the submissive from the beginning of the game, the Boo girl from the ending. which I guess is going to be the nerdy/goth innocent sex kitten. All that's left is the super hot aloof girl that takes a little more effort to get the sexy time from. :giggle:
 

MikeOG

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Great start kinkbr
Amazing renders, beautiful girl designs, very hot and smooth animations. I liked the sound and the music that you added and the story looks interesting. And I enjoyed the interactions with the girls.
My favorites are Deborah and Brenda (Very thiccc) :love:
I cant wait to see whats next to come and I hope for good interactions with the girls :devilish:
Keep it up with the good work

Just one thing, I wish the sex scenes had music or some sounds
 
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Gosamr

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Man, I don't know about the story, but even ignoring the seemingly identical typeface, doesn't the character design look a little too close to Oppai-Man's "Freshwomen" for comfort? That certainly is more than a little reminiscent of the busty redhead, Lily, (I think I even recognize a couple of those freckles on her boobs) and the oriental bookworm girl and the angry daughter of the guy's top-heavy employer from the other production?

I hope this guy's not going to get in any trouble over this, unless, of course, it's deliberate.
Maybe they are associated in some way, although isn't there usually an indication on the opening page of previous titles from the same creator?
 
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MikeOG

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i think so too, or at least someone who works or used to work on that team.
maybe thats the case because a moderator of oppais discord is a moderator of This AVN on their discord.
And all I can say is... FINALLY. The other day i was saying, damn I wish there was more games like Freshwoman since just now the game is having its 6th episode and still on ALPHA
 

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Pretty good so far. I'm not a fan of having no say on the matter but the reason was good.


Thank you and the best of luck.
 
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