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I'm not entirely sure what we're arguing about. Haley doesn't want to talk about it. That's obvious despite her two offers to do so. If this is based on an experience with her mother back when it happened, I'd certainly understand why she doesn't.She then seemingly tells him they'll talk later and he can ask anything he wants, almost in a response to his anger that might be shown on his face or to cover her own ass. It's clear that she opens the door though for more talk.
So let me try an example.I'm sure a whole world of possibilities can explain the difference, but the real question should be why does it need to be explained? Why are we seeing what seems to be such a disjointed story?
You have, one presumes, seen the original Star Wars trilogy. If you haven't, at least you've gathered enough from the cultural narrative to know the story. You would also, I think, agree that it's a reasonably* popular and successful story, no matter how you feel about the murderous Teddy Bears. I'm not going to spoiler-protect it for anyone, because c'mon.
* I can hardly be more sarcastic, though I'd welcome the opportunity.
From the opening scene of A New Hope to the moment when Darth Vader slices off Luke's hand, what is the trilogy about? (Yes, I know that's only 1 7/8th movies, but that's the point.) It's about the Rebels defeating the Empire. How's that going to be achieved? In terms of the trilogy, it's clearly going to be achieved by still-untutored Luke learning about the Force so he can kill the thoroughly evil master of said Force, Darth Vader, in a super-awesome lightsaber battle. It couldn't possibly assure you more often that this is exactly how the story's going to conclude. The second film helpfully demonstrates this by giving you the classic "unready hero" scene in which they have a lightsaber battle and Luke is soundly defeated by the dude in the noisy mask.
And then: dramatic plot twist. Since the plot twist immediately reveals that our hero has romantically pursued and kissed his own sister, that his trustworthy mentors straight-up lied to him (*cough* from a certain point of view *cough*), and that his dad tortured his own daughter, I'd call that even more disruptive to the existing narrative than Haley having been a victim of statutory rape.
What's the trilogy about after that? The A plot's still about defeating the Empire. But the story is now about something theretofore incomprehensible: redeeming the evil torturer/murderer/let's not forget he cut off Luke's hand just to punctuate a sentence/dude with the breathing problem.
Go back to someone who just watched Luke (among very few others) barely escape Vader in Death Star Mark 1's trench (don't @ me, extended universe fans) and ask them, "oh, by the way, Luke's going to defy all his friends to save this jackass. How do you feel about that?"
We can handle dramatic tonal shifts in fiction. We handle them less well when we can't see the bigger picture. Praise be that there wasn't much of an internet back when Absentee Daddy told Luke the truth, because I think you know what that reaction would've been. And yet nearly everyone thinks it's the best film of the trilogy, and usually the whole series.
This is more or less the heart of my objection to what you're writing (and if I didn't think it was worth responding to I wouldn't). Haley isn't a psychopath by her own malevolent design, she's damaged. Whether she initiated it or Klaus did, she's got a whole constellation of issues built up around the incident(s). They're not her fault. She can't help but respond to the MC this way. Is her entire history with the MC bound up with this damage? That's an exceedingly crucial question and we need to find out. Did she have opportunities for remedy? Certainly, but we can't and shouldn't blame the victim.it's entirely possible that Viit's trying to show Haley as some kind of psychopath
I repeat what I wrote a few posts up: this game may not be about fucking Haley. This game may be about fixing Haley.
It may well have been a mistake and it probably was. Still, does it seem out of character for Diane? Does she seem like a character who builds strong and memorable personal relationships?Even WAY back, Diane meets Sandra and then completely forgets about her to meet her again.
So this is, for me, sort of the core question from here on. What's the story actually about? If it's not about getting the twins together, but instead about something much more complex and entirely Haley-focused (no matter how much of the resolution requires the MC), then where the story went wrong wasn't two updates ago, it was all the earlier releases. But even if that's true, if enough comes after this to justify the shift as a complete story, then I'll be okay with it. Affection or lack thereof will be a different judgement.and not just some issue that the twins now have to face because they're now fucking. I fully expected some kind of drama because that's usually what happens to provide a continuing story once the main characters have fucked.
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