VN Ren'Py Completed Haley's Story [v1.1 Pre-Patched] [Viitgames]

[Segnbora]

I didn't want to play a game about all human vices and weaknesses this time, can have that for real every day. Why not just pretending to be happy while teasing like very close siblings would do?

This particular story was already a favorite because it took the idea of incest seriously and realistically rather than just making it a setting for a game that could've been about anything else, and also because of how wonderfully the core relationship between the twins was characterized. It was obviously always an incest game, but their relationship would've been just as fun if they never had sex.

That said, there are so few erotic games with narrative ambition. That doesn't mean that they're not good, only that they're laser-focused on the goal of getting the MC laid. Personally, I prefer stories that try to do something meaningful. We can debate the specifics of those efforts (and lord knows we have), but there are a hundred other games that provide simpleminded fapping material. My desire is almost completely opposite the one you expressed here: now that Haley's Story has turned into something much more ambitious than a clever tale about a brother and sister giving into their desires, I'm even more invested than before in the hope that it will fulfill its ambitions.

While it certainly is not Klaus' Story, some resolution involving him seems inevitable, if just for a sense of closure.

I realize I'm in the minority, but I remain largely uninterested in what happens to Klaus vs. what happens with Haley. Yes, there has to be some sort of resolution — he absolutely can't be left untouched by consequence — but I'd much rather see a story about helping Haley confront and come to terms with her past than about some elaborate retribution.

 

[Walter Victor]

I realize I'm in the minority, but I remain largely uninterested in what happens to Klaus vs. what happens with Haley. Yes, there has to be some sort of resolution — he absolutely can't be left untouched by consequence — but I'd much rather see a story about helping Haley confront and come to terms with her past than about some elaborate retribution.

I agree completely. Klaus' punishment could easily be told in a short epilogue with 1 or 2 renders.

If he's going to get kicked in the nuts, though, that should be a full animation!

 

[Segnbora]

If he's going to get kicked in the nuts, though, that should be a full animation!

In slow motion. Followed by a menu option asking if you'd like to watch it again.

 

[Jacob VK]

Talking about all this.. when is the next update coming ??

 

[Ozel]

Talking about all this.. when is the next update coming ??

Probably longer than usual between updates this time. Ptolemy has been (or still is?) off on vacation, plus he also has his own game apart from this one to work on.

 

[Walter Victor]

Probably longer than usual between updates this time. Ptolemy has been (or still is?) off on vacation, plus he also has his own game apart from this one to work on.

I believe Ptolemy is back on the job. He released a new Intimate Relations a few days ago.

 

[UncleVT]

And released Rebirth too.

 

[Ozel]

I believe Ptolemy is back on the job. He released a new Intimate Relations a few days ago.

And released Rebirth too.

Well, I stand corrected.

The new update may be on time after all.

 

[ZTex]

In slow motion. Followed by a menu option asking if you'd like to watch it again.

I just imagine the two haley's and the MC doing this on loop

 

[ninjalein]

When a developer has a story to tell, it is usually best to just let him/her tell that story. If I like it, I keep playing. Otherwise, I go off to some other game. There are plenty of drama-free games out there. This one, for better or worse, is not one of them.

Totally agreed! That's the way I go and sorry for... no sorry (forums are made for opinions)

You might try WVM, if you haven't already. It's a very well-written game, that is growing rapidly in popularity. There are cliffhangers, but any drama is very low-key. It just might become the ultimate 'harem' game.

Thank you for your suggestion, but to be honest: this is way too surreal for my taste... mooneyes everywhere, who cares?

 

[Noneless]

Still no way to delete Sandra from the ecuation?

The 'perfect couple' fecade is already annoying me after various chapters.

 

[Vasy]

Still no way to delete Sandra from the ecuation?

Depending on your decisions, the relationship with Sandra could be ended in the update previous to this one.

 

[Noneless]

Depending on your decisions, the relationship with Sandra could be ended in the update previous to this one.

I was the most cold MC to sandra and I still have to tolerate her presence, o well, maybe restart the game fix that.

 

[Vasy]

I was the most cold MC to sandra and I still have to tolerate her presence, o well, maybe restart the game fix that.

Check the walkthrough, but I think the tipping point is when Sandra is packing her bags and you can stay and help her, or just leave her to it.

 

[Ozel]

Check the walkthrough, but I think the tipping point is when Sandra is packing her bags and you can stay and help her, or just leave her to it.

The choice with her before that when she tells you about the promotion where you can tell her that you'll make it work, or you can say I hope so. Choosing I hope so will cause her to break up with the MC as well. Either/or.

 

[kavashy]

I have to say that I really enjoyed the dialogue for this. I like the interaction between the characters. It helps that Sandra reminds me of one of my exes.

 

[Alfius]

Still no way to delete Sandra from the ecuation?

The 'perfect couple' fecade is already annoying me after various chapters.

You made a mistake somewhere. You could have broken it of with Sandra a while ago already.

Looks like your cold is not cold enough

You should not have given her some hope about the future, when you told her, we can make this long distance relationship work. There are a couple of other places where you can also put her down, but I think that is the main one.

 

[Ozel]

You made a mistake somewhere. You could have broken it of with Sandra a while ago already.

Looks like your cold is not cold enough

You should not have given her some hope about the future, when you told her, we can make this long distance relationship work. There are a couple of other places where you can also put her down, but I think that is the main one.

That one and the scene where she's packing her bags to leave, tell her "this is too much."

 

[Alfius]

That one and the scene where she's packing her bags to leave, tell her "this is too much."

Just to be sure...I loved Sandra, but I loved Hayley more. I hade to replay a part of the game, and I tried to put her down gently. So I was not an asshole to her, but if I remember that dialogue (Not sure if the long distance will work), gave me the way out.

She was savage in the breakup though....my heart still hurts.

 

[Ozel]

Just to be sure...I loved Sandra, but I loved Hayley more. I hade to replay a part of the game, and I tried to put her down gently. So I was not an asshole to her, but if I remember that dialogue (Not sure if the long distance will work), gave me the way out.

She was savage in the breakup though....my heart still hurts.

Both dialogue choices will get Sandra to break up with MC no matter what, even if all the way you've gotten every single point possible with her, those two choices cause Sandra to break up with MC. All I was saying is that there is more than one chance to get her to break it off, not that you were wrong.

I like Sandra, but I also want to see what the game is like without her, so I have saves for the different paths, and will add more if it branches off even more.

EDIT: I got her to break it off with "This is too much" at the bag scene, and I didn't see any savage breakup scene. Sandra and MC meet at the coffee shop, decide to break up, and Sandra asks the MC not to call her anymore, which I'm sure was fine with him since he never calls her anyway, she always calls him. *shrug*