Wow, what a surprisingly well crafted story! I need more!
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My mistake. I want to say that v0.85.1 is a bug fix of v0.85. Sorry for creating a misunderstanding.
In the Haley only road, It's pretty gross, and only mildly funny if you have a pretty sick sense of humor - but after all, we're here playing a porn game where we primarily banging our twin sister, so who am I to calling "sick" - as it comes from nowhere. You're just sitting on a bench, casually telling your sister how their father would be fisting their mother, just to gross her.
In the Sandra road, this is way funnier, as it is an answer to Haley's multiple previous "jokes" on how she's gonna fist Sandra, just to gross his brother/make him jealous. And even there, it's a progression, not really dropping from nowhere. It starts with Haley continuous jokes on how she'll steal Sandra, and the fact she talks to her almost more, and knows more about her come and go than the MC. To which the MC reacts "wow you talk to her in my back, what else are you doing - fisting, but th'at's stage 2". The joke then comes regularly after that ('I'm gonna stretch out your girlfriend!" /" and then the footing starts. I've moved on from fisting, I have higher ambitions now."); and so the MC's sick joke is just a reply to that. Which works, as the end of the conversation is Haley proposing the deal to never joking about fisting Sandra evermore, in exchange the MC never doing the same about their father/mother.
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Okay so just played this after a month or two and i'm still hoping that this Klaus gets wiped off the face of the earth... 
Hopefully victors contact will work out and the mc can pay this person to get rid of the vile scum ( I whent for the insist option )
I'm glad that hayley is starting to get counseling but also feel that these girly hang outs with diane are not what they seem and hayley is confiding in diane about her past.
Can't wait to see how things progress and just pray that justice is done either by a lawful route or unlawful i'm happy either way.
Hopefully victors contact will work out and the mc can pay this person to get rid of the vile scum ( I whent for the insist option )
I'm glad that hayley is starting to get counseling but also feel that these girly hang outs with diane are not what they seem and hayley is confiding in diane about her past.
Can't wait to see how things progress and just pray that justice is done either by a lawful route or unlawful i'm happy either way.
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This story has hit me pretty hard. Not the whole sister thing but just the way the romance and tenderness is written. Words exchanged in between kissing or one that really makes my heart sink where she comes back into his room after he takes his walk and she asks him to hold her...I initially decided to play it be cause of the first sentence of the description. "It is done." Im still glad I played it but I was really disappointed to find out it was ongoing. My applause for the writer(s) you've done a fantastic job. I really hope you find the strength to give this story its deserved send off. Good or bad. Thank you again for sharing your creative imagination with the rest of us.
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Very much doubt it.
(a) it's late in the development phase and no indication of anything like that are given.
(b) it would totally not fit the story and mood so far, which isn't that of a "collect a family harem" style game but is mostly about the relationship between two people.
Unless it turns out that the moms real name is Dana, and this is a sequel for DoD, not a chance.
Damn, she's so cute I almost feel bad seeing her in a porn game. Please tell me there's a romance path in this game and it will lead to a happy ending. It's the first time I don't wanna any kind of kinky stuff in a porn game except you know what.
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If you are talking about Haley then yes there is a path to her but you will have date the bosses niece and break up with her to go solo with Haley.
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In this game, the MC will have sex with Haley. It is, by this point in the game, frequent and unavoidable. The MC is also forced into a relationship with Sandra, but sex with her and all other NPCs in this game (except Haley) is completely avoidable.
As for a happy ending with Haley and the MC, not being a developer, I can't guarantee that. But all indications are that at least one such happy ending will be available if the correct in-game decisions are made.
Can't see any reason why Dianne won't be involved in a threesome at some point - if on that path
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I think the Dad had a mini-stroke here.
- May 22, 2017
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Shit happens when you don't escape special characters in text and leave them "naked", in this case Python had a mini stroke when it tried to read "10% salary"
Should have been "10\% salary"
- Dec 17, 2017
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Testing is hard!Shit happens when you don't escape special characters in text and leave them "naked", in this case Python had a mini stroke when it tried to read "10% salary"
Should have been "10\% salary"
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A VN like this doesn't need much testing, so I guess it wasn't. It is only a small cosmetic problem in this case after all.