Having just completed this excellent episode, while greatly pleased, I have a couple of small complaints.
There are not too many text errors. Some are amusing, like the mistaken names in titles. But there is one that I hope will be fixed for the next release. During the sex scene with Adriana, the text reads "as Adriana contracts around his member, Bill's own dam brakes." Please, 'breaks' not 'brakes'. Kinda completely reverses the meaning.
And the image of a dam braking does not spring readily to mind. How the hell did it start driving in the first place?
Also, a YORKIE!
I thought Haley wanted a dog. Please, when the MC eventually gives in to her pleading, have him at least persuade Haley to not take in an ankle-biter. Maybe a Springer Spaniel? But not a Yorkie, for god's sake! [My apologies to any Yorkshire Terrier lovers out there... but no! Not for me.]