It's a great game! The storytelling and characters are really unique.
OK Viitgames here's a couple questions/criticisms:
Question: Would Haley look better if her eyebrows we a little bit lighter or blonde? (too light might look weird). I'm sure you've tried everything, I'm just curious.
Observation/criticism: When Haley is video conferencing (Skyping) with the MC from the hotel, the clouds bleed through the curtains on to Haley's face.
That's it, that's my worst!
Keep up the great work.
PS: Oh My Gawd! That ASS shot when she rolls over is Phenomenal!