VN Ren'Py Completed Haley's Story [v1.1 Pre-Patched] [Viitgames]

[Cartageno]

Could be worse. Nacho chips on pizza. Stupidest idea ever.

Sounds bad indeed. But here you can get a "Pizza Pasta Pommes". "Pommes" (short for "pommes frites" but pronounced distinctly different from French) is the German for "French Fries". So yes, a pizza with French Fries and noodles (usually Rigatoni) as toppings.

Suffice to say there are better recipes for pizza. Or pasta. Or pommes.

 

[UncleFredo]

Sounds bad indeed. But here you can get a "Pizza Pasta Pommes". "Pommes" (short for "pommes frites" but pronounced distictly different) is the German for "French Fried". So yes, a pizza with French Fries and noodles (usually Rigatoni) as toppings.

Suffice to say there are better recipes for pizza. Or pasta. Or pommes.

Okay you win the nasty pizza competition.

 

[felicemastronzo]

Sounds bad indeed. But here you can get a "Pizza Pasta Pommes". "Pommes" (short for "pommes frites" but pronounced distictly different) is the German for "French Fried". So yes, a pizza with French Fries and noodles (usually Rigatoni) as toppings.

Suffice to say there are better recipes for pizza. Or pasta. Or pommes.

as a last meal everyone eats what they like.

Because they die right after they eat it, right? They definitely die inside.

 

[felicemastronzo]

I finished the first two runs: Sandra + Haley (which I think is the main one) and Manwhore (which doesn't actually exist).

I enjoyed the game but there's something about the story that kept me uncomfortable for the whole final part.

both in Haley's and Sandra's characterization is central the abuse they suffered directly or not, and this awareness made less carefree the whole opening about seduction and Haley's roleplay.

Being called Daddy in certain situations can be liked or not, if your sister does it is a bit more disturbing, if your sister does it after you know that as a girl she was abused by an adult it becomes really hard to laugh about it.... it's a way for Haley to let off steam but it's hard to digest.

and always for the abuse issue also the fact that Mc lets his sister "corrupt" his girlfriend (fragile, very fragile and at the beginning obviously uncomfortable) leaves me uncomfortable. i'm already not a fan of stories where the MC lets others build his harem pretending to be completely surprised half the time, this is quite worse.

excluding these two "moral" aspect, i liked the story, there are some sub plot that i would have preferred to be deepened (what happened to the professor who couldn't keep his hands to himself? where does Adriana disappear to?) but maybe i'll discover something in the other runs. i'll probably appreciate more the solo runs for Sandra and Haley

the Manwhore run instead is quite disappointing... basically at a certain point the various girls automatically step aside because Sandra is there, and apart from a few glares from Haley there are no consequences or second thoughts.

So far we are around 4 stars

 

[JETracktor]

what happened to the professor who couldn't keep his hands to himself? where does Adriana disappear to?

If you're on Sandra's path all other side girls gradually disappears from the story. Next in order of importance is Adriana and Lisa - being on Adriana's path closes the Lisa's path.

Professor got eaten by pupster
Maybe in Alexandra we'll see what happened to him but I doubt it.

 

[Kal995]

HS SubscribeStar version 1.1:

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The official Android version, as always, will take about a week or so to be updated.

This will likely be the final update to this game unless they find show-stopping bugs.

 

[Walter Victor]

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Haley's story 1.1 (just a few bugfixes)

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Fixed a few bugs that have been reported. No new content. And a few more images from " Taming the brat", since that seems to be the popular choice

Also, you won't hear from me for a couple of weeks. Like I said earlier, we're taking it a little easier this month, so I'll be gone on vacation for a week and a half.

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Android will take a little longer

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Once again, the links here are for the NON-incest version.

 

[cxx]

update = nice
no new content = bad

 

[mlpoknbhuyg]

update = nice
no new content = bad

Why would you expect new content on a completed game?

 

[cxx]

Why would you expect new content on a completed game?

extra scenes

 

[echizen128]

What a disappointingly abrupt ending(s) for an otherwise really enjoyable game. It took some interesting risks there, content wise, so it's especially frustrating things weren't wrapped up at the same level of quality as the rest of the story.

 

[hapmash]

What a disappointingly abrupt ending(s) for an otherwise really enjoyable game. It took some interesting risks there, content wise, so it's especially frustrating things weren't wrapped up at the same level of quality as the rest of the story.

This is not a completed game. This was taped together. There are so many loose ends. I was really enjoying the game until that happened. It's like the developer wrote the rest of the story in crayon.

 

[felicemastronzo]

However, the 'technical' improvements that the developers have made in the course of their work are evident.

for example, two secondary characters such as the second Haley and the therapist have an image quality in the close-ups that is clearly superior to the other characters.

this bodes well for the next game

 

[keyLOVE7713]

Need to ask a dumb question. What does it mean that the game is "pre-patched"?

 

[4Finger]

Need to ask a dumb question. What does it mean that the game is "pre-patched"?

You don't need the Inc-Patch... It's already in the game.....

 

[Irgendwie Irgendwo]

Need to ask a dumb question. What does it mean that the game is "pre-patched"?

Counter question: If you are in the USA, have you ever received an advertisement that told you that you have been pre-approved for a credit card?

 

[keyLOVE7713]

Counter question: If you are in the USA, have you ever received an advertisement that told you that you have been pre-approved for a credit card?

ALL. THE. TIME.

 

[Irgendwie Irgendwo]

ALL. THE. TIME.

Good, or rather bad. So they already approved you before they sent the letter. Now all that's left to do is to link the analogy to this game.

 

[Cartageno]

Counter question: If you are in the USA, have you ever received an advertisement that told you that you have been pre-approved for a credit card?

If only that were pre-limited to US citizens ...

 

[cxx]

Counter question: If you are in the USA, have you ever received an advertisement that told you that you have been pre-approved for a credit card?

If only that were pre-limited to US citizens ...

yea if only and quite often those are on not that trustworthy sites.