- Jan 26, 2021
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Alright. The story is good, to me. The way of the writing of the MC is sort of juvenile, stupidly macho at times. He acts and talks like a 3rd-rate gangbanger a few times. He's silly, and a bit of a wimp as well in a few scenes. The story is good. It's mostly centered I think, firmly around things with Emily and a bit with Samantha in the few 6 or so chapters. Things get a little rough around mid-Chapter 7 when the story drifts for a full chapter in to all of Chapter 8.My comment was more asking about the story in general, not just sexual in nature. But I appreciate the info regardless. Hearing that there's only 1 planned LI (and it's a generic redhead tsundere to boot, based on what I've read) is pretty much a deal breaker. A shame, that Asian doctor really caught my eye.
The game image is in my signature for a reason, not just Emily. I like where it's going. Nothing really emotional yet, but a rough scene with Sam early on in Chapter 2. It's a 4 out of 5 game right now. Further chapters could make or break it for sure, especially with the writing.
I'm a story guy, but since everyone here talks about the sex stuff, that's what I just mentioned initially. But it's a good game.
Emily is not just some slow-burn girl. She has an issue with emotions, she's tough but yet she's sweet and kind if you are to her. She's not the typical slow-burn girl, she has a lot of fire in her. I really do like her character the most in the game.