A little further into the game and while it is overall a decently written game, it could definitely use a proofreader. A lot of times they are using the wrong phrasing or the wrong terminology. Like using good night as a salutation(like saying hi or hello), when it is almost exclusively used as a valediction(saying goodbye). Now good evening would have worked in that context, it is often used as a salutation after dark.
Edit: Just got to chapter 13 and seems they fixed that issue, finally saying good evening instead of good night, when meeting for supper. Now, they just need someone to go through and proofread the first 12 chapters. Still seeing some syntax stuff but it is an improvement.